Urban Dark Devil

2012, Beauty, let it rain!

Mom and Dad are looking at me from the starry sky!

Please collect, please return, and increase each other's popularity. The books will never be taken off the shelves. They have been collected and followed. Brother, you are very popular. In the fantasy category, you are ranked 50th on the newcomer list. Come on. By the way, how come your data is in the 50th position? Your data is much better than most of the people before you.

Dear author, I think your book gives people a dry feeling. You have described the scenery, but the specific plot is missing. For example, the latest chapter of Solomon begins with a description and the world view setting is pretty good, but the specific fighting plot below is a bit poor. I think it is too simple and gives people the feeling of a running account. If you asked some great writers to write this chapter of yours, you might be able to come up with ten thousand words. There may also be some problems with the name selection. It feels a bit strange to choose a name like this for the city and cultivator. These are just my opinions (my own novels are more popular than this one). The author should consider it. (I can't subscribe to it before it's on the shelves, so I'll reward you with 100 points. I hope the author will stick with it)

I feel so dizzy after reading this book of yours

I feel so dizzy after reading this book of yours

Chapters like this are rare. Collect first.

The author pays too much attention to writing style, which is not suitable for writing novels😅😅😅

Take a look and ask for a return visit and collection. It has been collected.

The story is very good, the writing is concise, and the ideas are clear. It can be said that you, the third son of the Tang family, and me eating tomatoes, the income of the three of you together exceeds that of all writers in China. 😜😁😊

Very nice(ง˃̀ꄃ˂́)۶

Haha, the description is powerful, not bad, and the language organization is also very good. Let's comment and receive from each other😜😜😜

It is said that a lot of red envelopes were given out, but I didn't see any of them 😭

Three recommendation votes are given. The author does not need to divide each chapter into volumes. It is best to mark the chapters. People who have been there have also jumped at the starting point. Come on!