I Heard You Have Something in Your Pocket

The character setting is relatively novel and quite likable, not mindless. The author's writing style is very good, and he has certain literary skills. It is relatively easy to read and more in line with the style of online articles. There were many parts that made me laugh. This is a plus. It was an easy read and I will probably continue to follow it. The background setting is not particularly grand (perhaps what I have seen so far is just the tip of the iceberg), and the protagonist's golden finger is very interesting, which makes it stand out among the bad "Xianxia novels" on the street. However, just because the protagonist can possess modern weapons, this "Xian Xia" attribute is somewhat distorted. "Everyone except the protagonist is cultivating immortality" sounds like a huge bug. I think the protagonist is too strong. I don't know how you will describe the growth of the protagonist, and I am very interested. Overall, this article is good! Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. Author, come on, take good care of you.

[Book Title] I Heard You Have Something in Your Pocket [Book Review] The writing is very good, relaxed and interesting, and the plot is full [Advantages] The plot and characters are very detailed, three-dimensional, attractive, very good, the writing is well-written, and the cheats are interesting [Disadvantages] There are no shortcomings except the subject matter and the problem of transmutation [Evaluation] B+ [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author, don't criticize if you don't like it.

In fact, I am a little confused whether I should write this book review or not. There are many parts that are hilarious and always make me laugh. The plot direction is also very special. Maybe I don't watch male videos too much, but this routine is indeed very novel to me. The protagonist is a very casual person, which can be seen in the first chapter, so it seems very natural for Daoxin Kongming to appear later. In fact, when I first watched it, I thought it was a female channel. The name Miao Kongkong did look like a girl, but the next moment I realized that it was a male wearing female channel. The protagonist's reaction is very dull, which shows his or her casualness, which may be why the name Kongkong is given. I didn't see the back, but I guess the deed of betrayal that was stolen and returned for the first time was something special. To be honest, when I first saw it, I wanted to complain. Why is it the same name as the protagonist? I thought it would be the author's style, and the protagonist felt a little uncomfortable when it was returned, which made me even more surprised. There must be a drama behind this contract, or the person corresponding to the contract. Of course I couldn't read it any further, so I can only make some guesses of my own. This book is not my cup of tea, and I can't stand it. Logically speaking, I should leave quietly if I encounter a genre I don't like, but since I agreed to give a book review, I still have to keep my word. I felt that the plot progressed too fast at the beginning, and I was confused in many places. The protagonist was chosen just after he was introduced, even though it was stated that the protagonist is good-looking, has meat, and is better than those skinny boys. But the contrast is not strong, so I am not convinced why Zhang's mother chose the protagonist. There is not enough foreshadowing, which makes me feel abrupt. I overheard the prince's conversation and contradicted him but he didn't get angry. He also gave the protagonist medicine. Although he asked the protagonist to do things later, the threats were light and airy. I found it strange. Of course, it may be that he met such a gentle and gentle prince. Later, when I met a noble person to redeem my life and give me advice, it also felt strange to me. I also wanted to complain. I was obviously sold to a brothel, but why did I always meet some good people? I was neither given trouble by the old man nor insulted by the prostitute. This is also very lucky. When I entered the test, the psychological description of the protagonist was not enough, which made me feel that the answer was a bit baffling, and I didn't know why I passed it... In short, it was just confusing and not logical enough. However, the author said that there have been improvements in the future, and it is indeed worth looking forward to, but I really can't watch it anymore. While I was reading the book, I read other people's chapter reviews. I didn't feel the things that others said were good, and no one said anything about the things that I thought were strange. It can be seen from this that the book is good, but it is a pity that it does not speak to me. After all, the fate is not enough. I hope other people who read my book review will not miss a good book because of me.

I went to check out a crowdfunding novel post, but it turned out that the sponsor didn't know anything about this thing. It's open-ended and has a huge framework, so he still wanted a story. I think he doesn't understand what a novel is at all, it's too silly, the outline is not even a clear line. (Personal opinion) Back to the topic, this so-called crowdfunding style has gone through too many complicated things. In the end, one person says one world, and collapse is inevitable. Besides, everyone's writing style, when combined together, makes the novel feel like a hammer blowing here and there. The main point can't be found. Instead, it looks like a big funny group. It's entertaining, but it's just like watching a joke (poof). The essence of this kind of article is a bit like a studio, or even a super low-end version (laughs). I took a look at his previous posts, and it was very interesting. He actually wanted to establish a so-called author group to crowdfund and write a book together. Okay, maybe we have to talk about copyright issues and the starting point's attitude. I think his point of view is very interesting, but it is too naive, full of idealism and emmm, you know. Those things I tell you are just anecdotes, maybe they can make you laugh. Author, you don't know how to hit me 😜

I can only say that it is really good. The characters are lifelike, the dialogues are detailed, the scenes are blended together, and the story is lively. PS: Miao Kongkong Lily 1/10000

An old swordsman and axe-hand, I had to come down and cut seven books. There are lessons learned after each book is cut. Knowing how to describe, how to divide it into paragraphs, writing an outline and keeping the rhythm... You should have a lot of experience with this book. But I still suffered a loss - I suffered a loss due to the subject matter. I don't read much, so I want to write a fairy tale background to facilitate my creative creation. I didn't like the male protagonist in the story, and it wasn't delicate enough, so I changed it to the female protagonist. It's definitely not possible to have sex with the heroine directly, so just dress up. Just make the writing style more relaxed. The result is a novel about cultivating immortals that changes time periods, systems, and makes fun of jokes... And also madly steps on the red line and falls into the immortal zone. As for the future of this book, it is basically gone. I have also learned that it is not difficult to create a good theme and a theme that the editor likes. At least it will be published and signed. Many people say they don't like routines and that routines are too vulgar, but that's not true. Young authors have no choice but to write routines... Innovation means uncertainty, editors dare not sign, and readers are unwilling to follow. After a long time, it will be cut off and it will not live long. Just like someone commented on this book - everything is good, but it's not good enough. But, isn't the most satisfying thing still to show off and get slapped in the face? The routines summarized from thousands of books, it is practical and useful. It's really not that we want to show off, it's forced by life, otherwise reality would slap me in the face. My face hurts—Looking at the collection of Four in Seven Days, two of them were collected as a friendship. If you don't come here to short-circuit the website, the data will also depress people. Sometimes I think, wouldn't it be better to use another website to write short articles? Not tired, comfortable, just grinding out the word count. Hey, after all, you still have to eat. If God doesn't reward you with rice, you have to rub your face with it. After all, you can get two grains of rice. If you don't sign this book for 100,000 yuan, you can only give out red envelopes, so I will struggle in the end. If you don't sign it, you will have no choice but to commit suicide.

Why can't I remember the title of your book😥

I suspect you defected from a female channel

😜😜😜Afraid