Learned from Lin Jiu

The fighting plot is too fast, and there is a lot less participation in several chapters. More importantly, Uncle Jiu not only kills ghosts, but also zombies! Moreover, the author's plot clearly could have been written more in some places, but it feels like you have made it a big deal with one stroke, and you can endure some monsters in those three years, so increase the number of words. The plot of your story is too fast, but the number of words is pitiful. You, the author, are not like some apprentices who are apprenticed to Uncle Ninth, who cheat at every turn! It's very good, mainly because there are flaws in some places. The coffee shop in Renjia Town is owned by Mr. Ren, the main author. I could write more about some places. I'll just go over it in one stroke and it's easy to end up with nothing to write about. Of course, maybe you can go out and practice in the mid-term! Mainly, I feel that your fighting plot is a bit too watery, and it basically disappears after just a few rounds!

After reading the first section of Musical Zombie, I felt that the writing was a bit fluent. It took more pen and ink to fill in the settings than to start the game, and it really followed the plot. I didn't feel much about the atmosphere. The protagonist always gave me a feeling of being at ease. If it hadn't been for the story of Mr. Zombie, I would have thought it was an infinite stream. But after all, it's still small now. Let's see if it's any more surprising later. After all, I am going to fight zombies. It is supernatural and supernatural, and there is no weird feeling. . . Did I misunderstand something?

Mr. Ren in "Mr. Zombie" could have cut off his hands and feet and removed his jaw when he was just unearthed and had no zombies! In the end, turning into a zombie is no longer a threat! After all, you don't have feet to jump, you don't have hands to catch people, and you don't have a jaw to bite people! Am I a thief? ! ! 😁😁😁

In 2004, the old Shennong has tried poison. The author's writing skills are good, so you guys should fall into the trap quickly! In addition, some small bugs have been picked out by the author and posted in personal comments. I hope the author will adopt them. I don't seek perfection, and at least don't let trolls say that I am brainless. I would like to congratulate this book on its success.

In fact, the author who writes this kind of novel should understand some common sense about Taoism, otherwise it will look very awkward.

I hope that the three hundred investment can return the original investment😌Please add more details😠🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪

How many apprentices will Lin Zhengying have in his lifetime?

The protagonist has no magic power, can the spell he drew work? Weird

Stay at home and read well, stay safe in Wuhan, China Uncle Jiu's book has been collected and waiting to be published.

Actually, the author, I think you can try to bypass the wall and go to the folk custom forum in Taiwan to find some information to improve the setting of this book. After all, they are not strict about supernatural beings over there, especially the name of the talisman. I think most readers will be dissuaded by the thunder and lightning talisman. In the end, the author's novel became popular (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Not only Uncle Jiu was annoyed, Qiu Sheng and Wen Cai were even more annoyed: What do you mean, they are all so powerful, who is the poor one?

Seeing Uncle 9, I almost had conditioned reflexes. Uncle 9's apprentice is about to strengthen his company.

Very well written, keep it up🤭🤭🤭

I almost felt like it was a bit tasteless and a pity to throw away. It lacks some new ideas. Uncle Jiu's world is still a bit small. You can consider fusion, Pawnshop No. 8, Master Wuxin, etc.

Come and give me a like 🥺 I want to see if I can get any position 😁

Congratulations to all the big guys in the world for getting a new junior brother

It's Uncle Jiu again, collect it and take a look! (￣ｏ￣)

I hope it's not the heroines like Ren Tingting, Zhu Zhu and Qing Qing. I almost vomited after watching too many of them.

I started from the first chapter but now I have read it all. I hope the author can pay more attention to the details and add more plots, otherwise Uncle Lin will have moved them all in just a few chapters. Although I have dug holes and bought a foreshadowing, it still feels too little. I personally like it, but it is not very attractive to readers, and some readers may even resent such a mindless move.

Who can be more beautiful than Li Saifeng among the single female protagonists? I'm greedy. I always feel that if I don't take those women in, I'll be like a pig.

It's finally on the shelves, and it's up to you to vote later 😄 I feel that the second quarter will be very interesting, so pay attention to the details and don't update constantly, and dig some holes when you have nothing to do 😊 Come on, come on, come on 😡

Where are people? Is this leave taking so long?

I hope I don't want a harem and I don't want to be too invincible.

Congratulations on investing over 100, recommended and invested

After it was released, the map was changed and the protagonist became a licking dog.

Is he a eunuch? Why hasn't it been updated?

Ah, this is the book I have been saving for four months.

That's a town, Renjia Town

Emm, change to a harder coffin, then seal the coffin with peach wood nails soaked in rooster blood, then seal it with ink bucket nets, and stick a dozen corpse-killing charms on his coffin, and prepare a few large iron chains as thick as arms to tie up his coffin, and sprinkle a layer of glutinous rice on the ground. A Bagua mirror was placed directly above to prevent ghosts from opening the shop. The door where the coffin was placed was also sealed with a charm. During the day, the coffin was dragged under the sun to dry. At night, in addition to what I just said, I used a piece with a Tai Chi Bagua formation on it to cover the coffin, just in case. I don't believe he can still pick up the body like this!