Long Car Song Line

Evaluation: The author carefully crafted the titles of each chapter, and it is obvious that he has put in a lot of hard work. I would like to suggest that the author read more of Fenghuo and Mao Ni, discarding the dregs of these great platinum books, and take the essence and refer to the plot, the creation of characters, and the arrangement of hidden lines... ShareA small method: when coding, consider rewriting the outline, doing a reversal or something, although it is a bit tiring. But the article written is more realistic and the plot is more interesting, because the outline is a bit rough after all, but if you can put yourself in the shoes and think bit by bit, you can work slowly and carefully, increase the rationality of the article, and even lay hidden clues and foreshadowing. Finally, I wish the author can persist until the end! ! ! After all, no matter what the result is, the first novel has extraordinary significance and must be written to the end

Tongs Liu Ming, this book is sure to be a hit!

To be honest, the protagonist's dialogue is very interesting, and seems to be mixed with some dialects. The detailed description at the beginning makes the characters vividly appear on the page. I just read the beginning and it is very good. Come on, the author, I can look forward to the future.

Hahaha, the author must have been a cook before writing the book, and he writes very professionally.

Invested

This is a good book. I have collected it and invested in it. Come on

It's been more than ten days and it's only 50,000 words! New authors should work hard on new books! Don't act rashly if you don't have 1 or 2 million words saved! There are a lot of updates, and it's exciting to read one after another. I'll look back half a month later and all the fans will come.

Eh? Why isn't it updated?

Test Poison Encore, continue to maintain the duck rush.

Well written, invest in collection, keep up the good work (wait for a little bit by the way)