The Sea of ​​Stars Begins with Driving Gundam

Afraid of not being able to update anymore, afraid of being caught on a whim. A story without an ending remains in my heart, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable😣

In Chapter 16, the protagonist gets an opportunity to design and develop a mecha for free. If you have any good suggestions, you can put them forward here. 😁😁

If you don't meet the author very often, you can update one episode and I will follow you slowly. If the worst happens, I will gain weight before watching. If it's exciting, you can give me a monthly pass.

To summarize, 1. There is a problem with book titles. No one likes a long list of unhelpful book titles. No desire to open it. 2. There is some nonsense in the book, such as Chapter 2. 3. You chose the wrong genre for your book. It shouldn't be a light novel. If it's science fiction, many people will definitely like it.

Can the author guarantee that there will be no tj? If so, then let's fatten up and read on.

Update soon, if wasabi is mine 🔪

Come on, author, the book is beautiful! Lots of updates!

What kind of smell does it have, even though I just looked at it

Already invested, the author will keep up the good work The content is very good (✪▽✪), but the title is a bit awkward I believe I can do well in the future

You have two minutes to come up with the second chapter, otherwise the blade will serve you

Just write it quickly, I'll give you the votes

Book title: Renaissance (title of the book 5 years ago), it is recommended to invest in science fiction Introduction: The point is not "If you don't let me enter the novice village, I will become invincible"→_→ Chapter 1: The first sentence is a highlight, but the title is a spoiler. . . The plot is interesting, but it's not written out, and the writing is terrible. "It's not long." Listen, what are these words? (ㅇㅁㅇ, This dialogue is really unattractive, and the setting is too long. Try to explain it clearly in one sentence, or choose words and sentences, and rearrange them? There is no need to list the performance and parameters of mechas in such detail. You have probably read other similar novels. You can see the apology statements from the authors like "I won't do it next time" The first chapter is really good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. Usually popular books start like this. It is recommended to come back and revise the beginning after writing 200,000 words. For the rest, give an example. Your start is no worse than this book, especially the first sentence

Are you writing about Gundam? Isn't it about mecha?

I'm confused, such a beautiful book, but I haven't signed a contract yet

I'm afraid the protagonist is not a German orthopedic surgeon, but I like it

I write some realistic stories, but I feel that they lack the support of reality.

Raised to death?