Japanese Entertainment Detective

The title of the book is "A Detective", but it turns out that Pig's Feet works as a trainee, joins a baseball club, and occasionally works as an informant. The most exciting thing is that there is also a lot of space describing Pig's Feet's police dad. What exactly do you want to write about, author?

Let me talk about my personal feelings. To put it simply, it is fragmented, detective, actor, baseball, and reading. They are really different, especially the two main lines of actors and detectives. It feels like the author does not want to give up the previous readers of the detective genre, but also wants to absorb the new readers of daily entertainment. As a result, both sides are unhappy. He solves crimes sometimes, acts in dramas, and plays baseball. He wants to write about everything, but can't write anything well. I don't know if it's because I'm used to Lin Xiuyi's character design, but the protagonist of this game is too soft to be considered a poisonous point. It's not that being soft is bad, but you need to control the degree. You should be tough when you should be tough, and you shouldn't be soft to the end. It can also be seen from the author's words that the author should know Japan very well, so why does the protagonist want to become an actor? You should all know how low the status of Japanese actors and idols is, how low their income is, and how busy they are at work. They can still have time to investigate cases in an environment where they are almost exhausted. Are you kidding me, author? You even have time to play baseball and consider whether to go to college. You are no longer human. Originally the writer's line was the best option, but it was rejected. The identities of writer and detective can be merged into one, but actor and detective obviously cannot overlap. Now to forcefully write it down is to split the person in two, half as detective and half as actor, resulting in a strong sense of separation. The character creation, case design, plot, and writing style of this book are all very good, and it can be said that it is quite popular. But why the results are still not up and down, half a bottle of water is hanging around, the author needs to take a good look at it.

From the moment I saw the character creation at the beginning, I was not in the mood to read on. The protagonist's sister is too realistic, and of course the reader's sense of empathy is also on the one hand. Her behavior and personality are too self-centered and annoying. I felt tired while watching it. My sister was always dictating, forcing the protagonist to do things she didn't like, and even threatening her. So much so that I not only find it annoying, but also a bit ex. The side shows the strength of the author's characterization. Of course, I think the protagonist is a bit useless, so he refuses if he doesn't want to do it. She just made herself feel like a little daughter-in-law.

The writing is very good (✪▽✪). It's more about daily life but less about detective reasoning!

This book is worth reading. It inherits the style of Tokyo Police. Each story is exciting and attractive when read individually! But to be honest, there are too many branches of development. I was looking forward to the continuation of one line of plot, but ended up running to another line in the blink of an eye. It was sad. . . I hope the author can determine the core main plot as soon as possible, and deal with the branch plots that should be deleted even if it is heartbreaking, and cannot take over the main role! Come on, author!

I want the heroine to be the star of the theme song of Izumi Sakai Detective Conan

What the hell did you write... And this case was solved just like that? ? Compared with Tokyo Police, I wonder if it's the same author... Abandoned...

This book always feels like an experiment. . Write whatever comes to mind. . Each line is good when extracted individually. . . I hope the next one will be like Tokyo Police and not have so many branches. . The latest episode turned into an economic drama

The feeling of separation is too serious. There is a whole chapter of daily life and a whole chapter of cases, but they have little relationship with each other. It is like reading a daily novel while watching a criminal investigation drama on TV from time to time. At the same time, he was listening to the baseball game on the radio, and listening to music with a single earphone... The protagonist's behavior and personality are also separated. Daily life does not serve the plot, but is daily for the sake of daily life. When will everyday people and things become the plot of a case or the plot of a star? Or is it just for the growth that the author said? Until now, he has not shown any growth, nor does he know what he wants to grow. He can obviously write things on his father's work materials on his own initiative, but he passively accepts everything? The most important thing is, is the setting of the time traveler just gone? If you are a time traveler, you still need to start growing up in high school? Everything he does and thinks is more like a native. In this case, adding a time traveler setting is a bit meaningless. The star part, the baseball part, the at home part, and the father solving the case part. From my personal point of view, these plots are too evenly distributed, so I don't know what to focus on. In my personal opinion, I hope the author will work hard and get better and better. Typing on the phone is so tiring.

The title is a headache to read, and you have to put it into context to distinguish it.

Baseball is well written, very attractive, and feels like watching anime. In fact, everything about Neon Country is understood from the animation, and it is very realistic.

It's very well written, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

Coming from Tokyo Police, I am really disappointed😔. It is far worse than Tokyo. After reading Chapter 20, I really can't hold on. I feel that there are three major poisonous points: The first point is that Pig's Foot has no opinion of its own. It's understandable that he just traveled through the past and has no goals. Second point, Pig's Foot's sister Liangzi made choices for the protagonist twice. The first time was to agree to join the wild ball club for Pig's Foot and ensure that Pig's Foot could report tomorrow. The second time was to sign up for the Star Circle Agency for the protagonist without Pig's Foot knowing about it. Is the protagonist physically or mentally younger than his sister? Don't understand. Third point, the first class of the Star Circle Office requires that the horse be completed within a week, and the pig's trotters have no dance foundation at all. In addition, the protagonist is too old, so it is reasonable for the protagonist to want to quit the office. Then the police came, and the sister did not agree. Just because the sister wanted to enter the office through the pig's feet, and then used the protagonist's undressed Echizen borrowed money from his sister to buy pornographic books and the like to threaten Pig's Foot, and then Pig's Foot refused to retreat. In order to let Pig's Foot complete the task, Echizen's sister spread Pig's Foot's legs apart and tied them up again. As a result, Pig's Foot didn't sleep all night. The next day, the protagonist couldn't hold on any longer and asked for leave. The protagonist's sister also asked for leave, euphemistically saying that she was helping the protagonist complete the task. I gave up after seeing this. There were really too many poisonous points. I was already poisoned to death. I won't go into detail about the routines that were popular 5 years ago. My biggest feeling about this book is that it was difficult for the author. In 20 chapters, all these poisonous points were gathered and slipped away.

There are too many and too complicated lines, the set moves too fast, and the story line is very fragmented. I suggest that some parts should be reduced and the plot should be accelerated. After thirty pictures, it is still dull and without any ups and downs. I also suggest changing the part about my sister. It's weird for a person in his decades to be pushed around by a little girl. There are many people who hate my sister when they write about it like this.

Should the author consider writing a Conan fanfic for his next book? I see that the proportion of light novels in the Qidian rankings has been increasing recently, and several representatives of Conan fanfics have done well. The author is good at writing mystery articles, and his writing style and understanding of the island country are not bad. If he can have a writing idea that is different from other fan fictions and create an attractive protagonist image, I think the author's performance will not be bad. (To be honest, among the online articles I have read, the author's reasoning level and understanding of the island country's culture are definitely among the best)

I think the author is a bit self-satisfied. Many people came to read your Tokyo Police, and your title is about celebrity detectives. If you write about being a star and being a detective, that's okay. As a result, you also added baseball, and the latest update simply left baseball alone. I came to read your novel to read the detective story.

Piggy's sister is so annoying. She always likes to help others make decisions based on her own preferences. To put it bluntly, she is self-centered and has no respect for others. I can't stand it anymore.

Japanese entertainment detectives, the focus is on detectives, right? Even if the protagonist cannot directly participate in the case because he is a high school student, he still has to show active participation, right? As a result, I was being rubbed around by my sister in a daze, working as a trainee, and playing baseball. My character felt like a time-traveled elementary school student, and I didn't feel like an adult at all. Since a baseball plot is forced to be added between detective work and entertainment, as a time-traveler with a higher level than his school classmates and a mature mind, he must always reflect the idea of ​​dominance and leadership. However, the result is still confusing. Some people provoke and want to lick the opponent because of his good pitcher. It is too discouraging. And your story lines should complement each other and promote each other. Now it feels like they are trying to undermine each other. I stopped talking about solving the case halfway and went to play baseball or become a trainee. Reading feels very bad.

I seem to have seen the end of this book. The clues are confusing, the characters are not likeable, and the characters are not likeable. Although I like the Japanese drama atmosphere created by the author, but...

The title is Detective, but the writing feels messy and the author wants to express too many things. The supporting characters as written are not very likable. The protagonist written by the author is also very cowardly. It doesn't look like he has traveled through time at all, but like a 10-year-old kid who has traveled through time and became a high school student. Such a weak, cowardly and opinionated protagonist. How could he possibly solve a case when just a few words from someone would affect his decision-making? Do all trainees need to dance like a horse? Not really, I haven't been dancing since elementary school. To be honest, people who read books with this name usually either like Japanese entertainment or detective novels. You have more than 20 chapters of both of them, and you can't feel the difference between them. I can't stand it now, and I don't know what it will be like in the future.

For a zero-score essay, no matter how much you write, it will still be off topic. Otherwise, change the title of the book.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​? Who would have known that after subscribing to dozens of chapters, you would be writing about this, and you would also ask yourself if readers would like to see you write about baseball! It's completely baffling. Maybe entertainment in Japan is inseparable from baseball. The problem is that your readers are all Chinese, and it is a super niche subject. It is still realistic rather than a comic adaptation, which is even more unpalatable.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     but the major chapter you wrote is about high school, which means that you will at least have 2 parts to go to college and entering the society. However, there are not many outstanding novels of this type in Qidian. The main reason is that the good and bad novels in the past are almost ruined, and it is difficult to give people the motivation to follow up. It is recommended to return to the previous writing method, just detective and a little entertainment.

After reading Chapter 97, this case is really child's play. A stranger murderer actually appeared, and the final narration also showed clues that were not explained in the case! This kind of writing actually has the nerve to be called a detective novel, and the protagonist is still a famous detective? ! Change your name as soon as possible! It can be said to be a good urban novel if you read it without thinking, but as a mystery and suspense novel about a famous detective, it doesn't even have basic principles, which is annoying, so I quit it!

The title of the book "Detective" is currently only about 2% related to the content. Other baseballs are described by trainees with a lot of pen and ink. The character setting of the protagonist is very strange: naive and independent; there is no experience of having lived a lifetime at all. The sense of substitution is extremely different. For readers who were deceived by the title of the book, they said they slipped away.

I only want to watch the investigation part, the entertainment and campus baseball parts are not interesting.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the protagonist has no opinion at all, and the sister's behavior is very annoying!

I got a warning from Tokyo. It's so poisonous that even Shen Nong didn't dare to taste it easily. The pig's trotters have no independent opinion and are standard dog-licking styles. The pig's trotter sister is also a big poisonous point. She has all kinds of weird things and the plot line is a little messy. Normal people can't read it at all 😐😐😐

Basically, it's stitch monsters and abominations. I want all the elements, and I want to write any plot. I'm going to take the exam for the University of Tokyo in baseball reasoning, acting, writing, and novels. I'll open four or five lines at the same time, and I'll hit the east and the west with a stick. In the past, the author was very proud of himself and thought it was the best book he had subscribed to. How about subscribing now? This chapter says there is no one left

I started reading the author's books from Tokyo Police, which were not on the shelves at that time, so I think I was one of the early readers. In fact, the previous book was quite interesting, but it was a pity that it ended so directly. Let's talk about this book. My personal reading experience is that the investigation of the case is the least interesting among the current content. The problem mainly lies in the identity of the protagonist. First of all, this identity determines that the protagonist cannot participate in the investigation of the case normally. If the protagonist, who is not powerful and half-hearted, can also play a major role, then the police can only continue to show off their limits. Showing the chaotic system between the police and reporters, even if the case is solved, it can only give readers a bad impression that the protagonist is supported by a group of wastes; secondly, due to the low actual participation of the protagonist, the case information needs to be split into multiple characters and provided from different perspectives. The scenes switch back and forth, making it difficult to grasp the key points and giving people a very confusing reading experience. The problem is that there is no protagonist to provide the main plot. If the protagonist is involved, the readers will follow the protagonist's thoughts and perspective to sort out the information, thereby avoiding this problem; finally, in order to highlight the protagonist, it will inevitably feel abrupt if the protagonist finally solves the case. Once he saves his father and once stops the murder, it feels like a mutant machine. Seance... Having said the problem, let's talk about the advantages. Apart from solving crimes, other parts of this book are pretty good. Whether it's baseball, arts, exams, or daily life, the reading experience is very smooth, and the writing is also written with the flavor it deserves. Although there are a bit too many elements, after reading it, I really found several pieces of content quite interesting, and I couldn't bear to give up. I hope the author can carefully plan the development of these pieces of content. For example, the cross-interaction model between baseball and entertainment is very good. If these pieces of content can be retained, it should be very interesting for a versatile protagonist to go to college. The character creation in this book is also relatively successful. In fact, the most important role in urban novels is the girl next to the protagonist. The failure of Tokyo Detective is that the two heroines are not very good. Akemi in Tokyo Police is quite satisfactory. Sakurako has few roles but has a lovable character. Although Keiko has cheated the protagonist many times, her character has been realistically created. She should be the most successful character in Tokyo Police. Although some of the characters in this Japanese entertainment detective are not too prominent yet, many of the supporting characters have been relatively successful in their initial creation and have certain development potential. I hope the author can take advantage of it. Maybe the author has the intention to highlight the character's growth and ideological changes, but the recent times feel that it has been a bit too strong. It would be better to show it more reasonably and naturally. As for the problem of solving crimes and other content, I hope the author can think carefully about how to achieve a better balance. Personally, I think it would be more reasonable to transfer this part of the plot more to the role of the father. Would it be more reasonable for the protagonist to play a supporting role? Now the father is more like a puppet for the protagonist and his colleagues, while the police and reporters act as buffoons to accompany the protagonist... Finally, I wish this book will get better and better!

Is the author Japanese? ? To be honest, I have written so many pictures about the sport of baseball that not many people have read it. Anyway, I have never seen anyone who plays baseball in our city.