Playing and Playing, I Became an Immortal

Thank you very much if you like reading my book. I will do better in the future. At the same time, I also hope that you can provide me with some good ideas. I am not very good at writing backgrounds, so the writing style of this book is not very smooth. I will use plot instead of my writing style. 😜

I have finished writing the first volume of the story. I read it and revised it repeatedly every day. I always feel that I am still missing something. The early stage is really mediocre. Fortunately, I have worked hard to write it for more than a month. I find that it is all about myself, which is pure self-deception. Hey! Most of the fiery heart I had at the time has disappeared, but since I have written the story of Kumble, I have to finish it. If there is a break in the middle, it means I am revising it. 😭🤐

The domineering and vicious female supporting character, the male protagonist Xuan Zimo's default wife, is also a stumbling block for the female protagonist.

Xuan Zimo's mount

Sword Spirit is also a banished immortal

The spiritual pet adopted by the heroine

Cultivation wizard, direct descendant of the Emperor of Heaven, killed by the Holy Maiden of the Demon Sect. A person refined out of resentment. He is also the best at disguising. Wu Xin, darkness is his nourishment, and he has the face of an angel.

Is this senior more handsome?😜😁

First of all, have you read this introduction carefully? Is it really fluent? Let's not talk about how the writing is. One word is missing and you still can't read it. Do you think this will have the effect of attracting others? Stop joking and go to sleep! And the book, the story is good, the plot is also very good, but please don't tell me that you don't know how to use punctuation marks and double quotation marks? Then there are some parts in the plot that are very long-winded and can obviously be brushed off. You said you have read it carefully... I suggest you read more books by others. Generally speaking, the book is not bad, but there are still many areas that need to be improved. Finally, I would like to add some refinement. It's tiring to comment seriously, but I don't want to see an author give up like this. (The above is purely a personal opinion, don't worry about it, it's useless to care about it. Although it doesn't sound good, it's all from the bottom of my heart. Keep up the good work! Goodbye)

The author's description is still very delicate and has his own style and flavor. Although some areas still need polishing, it is already a good book. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗