Immortal Qin in Another World

It's interesting, but the world view seems too big.

The author has accomplished what I once wanted to write. I felt that I couldn't write it anymore and I didn't write it. I hope this book can be finished.

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There should be punctuation in many places, but there is no period at the end. It is very uncomfortable to read. The article is about Qin Shihuang. I feel that the character is not quite right... Regarding Fusu, when I was writing, I always felt that something was not right. Regarding his father, his fear felt special...

It's fine at first, but why do you feel later that the author didn't recharge the protagonist's IQ? (Others do things according to your family's rules, and you have to retaliate against others). The author is in Heiqin. I hope the author can understand the laws of Qin. It feels like Pigfoot hates Da Qin from the inside out.

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