Xumilu: Li Huo Feng Comes

The writing is fluent and the plot is also very smooth. Thank you to the author💪

In the blink of an eye, I have been writing the book "Xumilu: Leaving the Fire Wind" for more than a month. Although the results are very poor, I sincerely thank my several fans. Without your recommendation votes, I probably wouldn't be able to continue. Thank you all here. Fortunately, you are supporting me silently! The story of this book has been in my heart for a long time. I just never had the chance to write it out. Now that I have made a start with the epidemic, I feel very comfortable. It is a rare opportunity in life to do something I have thought about for a long time. It's just that I have thousands of words and thoughts in my heart, but I always feel like it's not enough when I write it down. I feel like a lot of things are not clear enough. This is my technical problem. Originally the planned design was fantasy romance, but now it seems that the romance is very subtle and the fantasy is very rare. It feels like something is off, and I can't tell what it is. 🙂🙂🙂🙂 I just hope that the next plot can be slowly broken down. Haha, I feel like my subject matter is a little behind the market now. Haha, but it doesn't matter, I will persist. Come on! ! !

How to say it? It's a pretty average fantasy novel, but there are a lot of foreshadowings at the beginning, which made me very curious. It seems that the two chapters are okay, it's a very relaxing novel. But it didn't attract me to continue reading. The author needs to optimize the story line more. The tense atmosphere can sometimes attract many readers. Come on.