Naruto's Whirlpool Flame

The writing can be too watery. There is no sense of substitution. Having a great sense of why

I don't know if you have noticed it, but Jiraiya can be said to be a representative of civilian ninja who is not a civilian at all. The master is the first generation, the master is the second generation, the master is the third generation, the apprentice is the fourth generation, the disciple is the fifth generation, the disciple is the sixth generation, and the young apprentice is the seventh generation. It can be said that although Jiraiya did not become Hokage, his network of relationships ran through all the Hokages in Konoha, and all seven Hokages had a close relationship with him.

In fact, I think the author could write more about the cruelty of ninjas and less about heartwarming plots, otherwise it would feel a bit sweet and not very good. Also, the author actually writes very well, and the plot concept is also very good. The votes have been cast 🙂

Author, you have already abandoned three books. This time you need at least a million words.

I hope everyone will put away their bad words and be more tolerant to the author. Be sure to use civilized language. I think it's better not to follow the original script. I don't want to become a Chinese translator who speculates on the original script. After all, there are too many people who speculate on it.

Big brother, I think it looks better in black

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's pretty cool. What's the QQ group?

Too many updates are not enough

I gave up after seeing the first one, the plot was like a running account,

The author just needs to clock in for a few days and then finish it.