Fan Yao Xinghe

It looks like a new book at first glance. I hope it will continue to be updated and the rhythm will be stable. Of course, the more the better, come on! 😡😡😡

Come on! The author is great, I have collected it and will read it when I have written enough 200,000 😁

It's pretty well written, at least I can't fault it.

Already collected, keep updating. Come on! Mutual receipt.

This is a good book. Promote it to yourself, and someone will pay for your gold. Hey, collect it and follow it first.

New people, new books, keep updating, if you stick to it, you will win!

Wow, the update speed is so fast that I admire it. Come on 💪I'm waiting to gain weight.

Since it is Lao Bai's book, collect it!

Well, I think it's pretty good. There's no problem with the characterization. As for whether to sign or not, I think there are two points. One is that the beginning was not very thoughtful, and everyone expected it when Goldenfinger came out. The second is that it is not easy to write a fairy tale. If you write slowly, you will still have a chance to make the story fascinating. Finally, don't be obsessed with signing a contract or not. If it's to make money, cater to the market. If it is not for making money, it would be good to write some stories from your own heart. Obviously the author is definitely the latter. Collect it first and read slowly.

First of all, the writing style of this book is okay and I can stand to read it. Then the content is pretty good and there is nothing poisonous about it. However, there are some small flaws in some places that can be repaired. All in all, this is still a very good novel.

It's good to read. Please accept it. Cheers to the author and let's make progress together!

Very well written, put it on the shelves. With support, come on 😁

Every author who insists on creating is worthy of my admiration and learning 🙏 I read the first few chapters very carefully, and there is absolutely no problem with strong writing. I'm not an editor, and I can't explain why I still haven't signed a contract. Three immature suggestions: First, the author overemphasizes the word "ordinary", which feels unnecessary. Adventures in dreams are inherently extraordinary. Readers read books to see the ultimate extraordinaryness of an ordinary person, rather than to remain ordinary. The second is the adventure in the dream in the first chapter. White Beard's character is a bit low. The two people chatted for a long time. It was procrastinating and seemed that the protagonist was not decisive and could not achieve anything big. Third, I can't see the collection of this book. I guess it must be around 100. I estimate that apart from the robot trumpet, most of them are colleagues of the author, such as me. Just like the second point, sometimes, choice is far more important than persistence. When it's time to break, break! Then I will sum up my experience, re-polished the story, and learn the skills of signing online articles. I believe that if I write another article with great writing power, I will definitely be able to sign a contract. Making a simple conversation and speaking deeply is what a gentleman should do! I am not a gentleman, and I admire Dada's persistence even more, so please forgive me for breaking the precept! 🙏

Keep up the good work! 😡

Already collected, keep up the good work! Let's encourage each other~

Well, it's not easy after writing so much! Come support and cheer. 😁

Awesome, author, you are really great, vote for it, come on