The Demon Who Kills Heaven

I've read a few chapters and it's really interesting. I'll continue to follow up.

I don't know what you think. I think it looks pretty. I think it's disgusting. A man from the army, or an old subordinate, wants to take someone away without saying a word. He doesn't say any explanation. When others don't agree, he just wants to force him. As a result, he was injured. Another stronger one came, and he hit him seriously with a slap without saying a word. It feels like people have no brains. When others don't agree at the beginning, you explain it completely and say it's just a trip. Then it belongs to the country. If you don't leave, Violating the law basically means this. As a result, it's okay to just start a fight. After being severely injured by a slap in the face, you still have special respect for the person who hit him. How can you be so big-hearted? Don't tell me about reality. A novel is a novel. They are all in the second grade of middle school. They have won gold fingers and are still like this. It's really hard to stand it.

Rubbish, the relationship is like a younger brother fucking an older sister. Evilheart

Come on, the author has already signed it, so let's start the book club!

Chapter 31 has been blocked and has been changed. I am waiting for notification. Chapter 32 will be posted tonight.

Sorry, I will repost Chapter 31 after making changes.

Come on, come on, I just read a few chapters and found it very interesting✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

As a newcomer, I advise you to avoid romantic relationships, especially love and family relationships! Because this emotional line is particularly difficult to write, a new author will basically be disappointed as soon as he writes it! So don't write if you can. If you must write, try to write it in one sentence and finish it in one sentence! Don't be self-righteous and forcefully write about emotions. In the end, it will only serve to dissuade readers! Also, since your book contains the word "demon", try to make the protagonist as cold as possible. Don't risk your life for someone you haven't known for a long time because of his sudden kindness later (this feels a bit nonsense, but I still talk to the author) Even if he is "good", now In reality, we won't help if there is no benefit (after all, there are superficial friends like that) Also, as a new author, you should read more readers' comments and correct your shortcomings and bad points (even some great masters will copy readers' book reviews 😏) Finally, I wish the author good grades, good health, happiness, and a good mood every day😁 (Also, No eunuchs! No eunuchs! No eunuchs ! Say important things three times, otherwise, you will be considered useless! If you are a new author, you will have the negative thought of "it doesn't matter if you have one eunuch anyway") I am very tired of typing, I hope the author can see it

The emotional line is very challenging to Siling Temple! Moreover, blood relatives!

It's quite well written, but why is it written about the earth? It's very embarrassing to see it this way. It's just Chinese martial arts but also has super powers, and then there are space cracks. I'm convinced ┗┃ ■ ┃┛, I don't like it. Moreover, at the location of the space cracks, shouldn't there be chaotic winds or space turbulence and other dangerous substances?

The cool night makes me miss you like a river.

Everything else is fine, but the relationship between siblings makes me sick.

Can you reach 100% for all the previous ones? It's too uncomfortable to watch for obsessive-compulsive disorder!

Chapter 6 is so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore

It's so imaginative and the subject matter is novel! The author already has the strength of a young master! Please update more and become a god soon!

Author, I feel like you let the protagonist summon so many abilities. It feels gimmicky. Against the enemy every time. You have to think about your ability to compete with others. I feel so annoyed every time I write. Repeat number 1. The ending is that the protagonist conquers the continent, conquers the world, and opens up a big harem.

Your writing style is too dangerous. I have been having trouble with 404 since the first chapter...

What is the character of the sister? From the beginning, I looked at the background. She took care of the male protagonist and had a boyfriend. She was a standard family member. Will it be closed suddenly?

It's really beautiful. The author's portrayal of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing the Calabash Boy to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have thought of crossing the cliff with Linghu Chong to occupy the mountain as king, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character description of the protagonist is very good.