Crazy Bishop of League of Legends

A few suggestions on techniques In fact, the author has a strong understanding of the history of League of Legends e-sports and the small details. But the writing is too plain. To be precise, this book is called... Lpl major events yearbook or oma fortune history and auspicious examination may be more appropriate 😅. Suggestions 1. Increase the details of the BP of both coaches and the intellectual competition in the game (also known as the whole work:), and focus on the psychological activities of the coaches of both sides and the dialogue between the players. 2. There is too little dialogue between the team members. It is necessary to write more about the interactions between the players on the field and more about the first-person perspective of the players so that the article can have a sense of immersion and highlight the coach through the interactions between the players 3. Weaken the background introduction of other teams. Those who have read this novel will know the background of many teams. There is no need to write so much. The same is true for the players. 4. Don't use the tone of commentary and game analysis to write about the game. It is boring and has no sense of substitution at all. It means xx goes to get the dragon, and xx squats down and leads a wave of group destruction. When watching the game, it is okay to have real-time pictures to explain it, but novels cannot. 5. There is actually no problem with Quanhua. You can also find Korean aid, but pay a little attention to the stance of Korean aid. The novel is just a novel. Everyone knows that it is not true, but the story you wrote is wonderful and everyone still loves to read it.

During the competition, you can write more about the inner communication between the players.

The whole Chinese class made my blood boil with excitement.

Express your personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it. As soon as I saw that the supporting character was a Korean guy, I was persuaded to quit.

It'll be great after just one update, come on

I thought it would be great if I could lead an all-Chinese class

After rebirth, Korean aid will be needed as the core. It can be seen that lpl is really in decline. Fortunately, I quit lol after the loss of the Bird's Nest. Even though I won two championships, I felt nothing. The commentators boasted a lot, and there wasn't even a single outstanding local player. The two finals MVPs were given to the junglers out of consideration for the lpl.

Except for the fact that the Chinese team was able to compete with the Korean team at the beginning (I forgot whether it was S1 or S2), until the S7 season, it was the Korean team that unilaterally crushed the world. This leads to a result: all professional players are ranked in the Korean server! This will inevitably lead to the emergence of a large number of talented people in Korea! The high scores in the national server have always been retarded (more than one professional player said) and cannot achieve the ranking effect! And RNG, the first to introduce Korean aid, discovered that introducing Korean aid could win the game, so the era of Korean aid began! Objectively speaking, the reason why LPL is currently the strongest competition area in the world is that Korean aid plays an important role. Just like everyone says that the LPL is a division rich in top ADs. That is because of the pressure put on top players like Little Puppy Smile. If a team is not good at AD, it will basically be defeated by them! Similarly, FPX's Doinb and IG's Rookie force all teams' mid laners to become powerful, otherwise they will either be defeated or their rhythm will be disrupted! IG's thethy is even more so. If you can't top order in S8, you will be out of line directly. If you go to the jungle, you will be double killed. RNG, which was the first to market an all-China class, was also the first to introduce Korean players. Isn't it ironic? The All-Chinese Class TES just posted a Weibo post not long ago. The general meaning is that the plastic surgery of the All-Chinese Class this time was just an accident. There is no banner of the All-Chinese Class, and future players may not necessarily be from China. Why, the person who posted this on Weibo was not the brain-dead fan of RNG's all-China class. It caused a bad smell among TES fans. For a confident person, is it necessary to always emphasize that I am confident? This is obviously a sign of lack of confidence.

The coaching system is redundant. What improves is not your coaching level, but the players' level. But you only look for famous players in the future. In this case, you are enough as a reborn player, and there is no need for a coaching system at all. You don't train unknown players anyway.

How about the Korean civil war in S7 where you write a bunch of Korean aid and you are pulling your hair? It's great if Koreans beat their own people, right?

Let me complain about two things. First: the coach with the experience of later generations was targeted before he had the capital to enter the game on a large scale. When the coach was still ordering takeout or doing other logistics, the BP was targeted in various ways. It was not an LCK start. In addition, team building is really difficult to describe and does not conform to the setting of rebirth. Second: Tianhu started with cheats and knowledge of later generations. As a result, the reverse cheat forced a 50-50 draw with the opponent (especially the second point, which specifically discourages people from retreating. Reverse cheats like me will never read it again).

I think this book is very good. It is written in great detail. The protagonist gradually advances, slowly evolves, and is combined with reality. I feel that this book has the potential to become a god in League of Legends and even e-sports. As a veteran player from S3 to now, I like this style. There are good and bad draws, and the coach's skills are definitely the best. You can write about some of the protagonist's evolved skills (tasteless rewards). If the coach is the king of the kimchi server, he can be an emergency substitute to win a game, which will be very interesting. Also, I hope to get more bonuses for the protagonist, so that whichever team you go to will improve faster. When the protagonist leaves, the bonuses will also follow the protagonist. In this way, the protagonist becomes an enhanced version of Coach Jin. Let's see if we can kidnap little peanuts here... RoxTigers (called KOOTigers in S5) have been SKT's biggest competitor for two consecutive years. Coupled with their twists and turns, they have left a different brilliance in the history of LOL, which is really impressive. 🤭

Before I see it on the shelves, let me share my personal opinion Writing articles about coaches is different from articles about players. Since the protagonist is a coach, the fun part is to crush the BP and be proactive about version changes. For example, when Riot makes changes to the version, you will be aware of them as soon as possible. For example, when a new hero comes out, you can practice it immediately and become proficient in a system. Another example is your BP, you can set up traps to fool Sister Bu (before S7, Sister Bu was considered the top coach in lpl). The reason why Edg dominated lpl before s7 was because his style was more operational, and because Sister Bu was the top coach of lpl. Don't think that a team formed by a few strong and talented players will be truly invincible. These are completely ignored, or briefly mentioned (this is one of the areas where there is no outstanding cool point.) Then there is the role of the system, which is to train players and develop the potential of players in advance. As well as player discovery and development. The cool thing about trained players and developed players is that they can suddenly make a comeback when they are at a disadvantage. In this way, the depression can be erased. Don't think about getting famous in S5, getting grades in S6, and getting into the all-China class in S7. It's too late The most important thing about writing novels is the pleasure. What you write cannot make the readers happy, it just feeds the readers with drugs. If the readers stop reading, do you still have the motivation to continue writing? Also, there is a system to punish Han Yuan. , Want a hammer system? It's better to just remove the system, not to mention the protagonist has been reborn, how many versions ahead, and experience. Take the simplest example: line control. Before S8, except for the king, could ordinary players know the importance of line rights? But now, anyone who has played the game knows the importance of line rights. This is the importance of the prophet! Another point is the system function. If the players are not strong, they can be supplemented. If they cannot be supplemented, they can be mined. If they cannot be mined, they can sign the top LPL players first. You have to know that most of the people who play games are teenagers addicted to the Internet. Can't you find people in an LPL league? I have discovered the players. If my current strength is not good, I will not go to lpl and play in the secondary leagues more, and cultivate the protagonists (one step, mainly transition) S5lpl achieved such a bad result, I actually don't feel regretful. One is because of the expansion of the competition area, and the other is the version. At that time, lpl was all blue-collar and no one could c. Even the biggest reason for the disastrous defeat of s6 was the version problem. Facts have proved that the road for teams that are against the version is very narrow. The team that follows the version and can fully control it will have the last laugh. The reason why Lck was able to win consecutive championships before s8 was not just about operations, but because it perfectly fit the version. How else could the s8 champion come about? It is because the s8 version is suitable for lpl, and lck expands itself... So, since it is a novel, there should be no limitations. The greater the limitations, the more restricted the logic. What you write is entirely based on the personal strength of the team members. You don't write anything about BP, which completely goes against the core of this book. In this case, you might as well write that the main character is a super rich second generation, put the factory and the puppies into the same team, find a great coach, and then create a luxury-level analyst team... For novels, pay attention to the coolness The coaching article forces you to write a history of LPL, (Personal opinion only!)

What's the use of this protagonist? Is it poaching people? I don't see any tactics being taught. BP is being designed at every turn. I really can't see what the protagonist's use is.

Who would read LOL novels if it weren't for coming to the all-China class and finding spiritual comfort? It's outrageous. When I went back, I found a bunch of Korean aid and left.

Xinjiang's foreign players also experienced severe beatings from society before reaching the top. They didn't need a mid laner like Tai Tan at the beginning.

Let me first say that I have fully booked it, and then some of my recent feelings 1. Each game is based on time to deduce the overall situation. Each time there are multiple players' perspectives, which makes some details that appear during the game look a bit tired. Can you try describing a game from the perspective of one or two players? For example, in the recent EDG game, the top lane is the breakthrough. It can be described as the top lane position of Brother Gongzi. It can also be combined with the team's command. Now, play the top lane, push the middle lane, and then go to the counter and counter jungle... I feel a little tired after watching too much. To describe the game from an overall perspective, it is better not to write too many chapters for one game... Just like the recent EDG, because there are multiple perspectives, when watching the latest chapter, you will forget a lot of chapters from the previous few days. Now that there is no main perspective to connect in series, I feel so uncomfortable and the rhythm cannot be connected 2. It is still the main problem, it is all one game after another. The rhythm of the game is still too bland. Once again, the description outside the game is too little or a bit pale 🤫 (lack of writing power? Come on). None of the characters has unique features. It's so uncomfortable to complain about it At the beginning, I was quite interested in the overall description of the game. After watching too much, I felt a bit too tired. I couldn't catch up when there was no competition in reality...

Why do you think there are so few good mid-to-top local players in LPL? FPX and IG are both mid-to-upper-level in Korea, but there is no better mid-to-upper level in the country🐴?

It feels like I'm reading an outline, a very detailed outline...

Let me make a suggestion to the author. The game you are writing is a bit like data analysis, minutes and seconds, etc. It is recommended that you write the first three minutes of the game in detail, and then write the team battle strategy in detail. Skip the laning that is not very exciting. Don't write it in one stroke during the development period. The main thing is to write about how to turn the adverse trend into an advantage, turn the advantage into a victory, and just crush the game. Just write about how the first wave of advantages was established. Don't write about what you did in the next few minutes. Instead, write some saucy remarks from the commentator, or wonderful comments from the audience outside the venue and the comments in the live broadcast room. This may attract readers. After all, the protagonist pretends to be so cool that he wants the audience and the commentator to brag about it. Only then will the readers feel comfortable taking on the role of the protagonist.

The poor are happy together, the rich are speechless. I support Le Ye, come on, sit on the water dispenser!

After seeing the introduction, the team members actually have smelly shoes? What's the point of someone who has an improper attitude and loves to show off? Isn't it better to choose Xiaotian than him? The wild core version doesn't know any strong points and doesn't practice, and blames Lese for not being good in the middle. Is he ready to self-destruct when he is put in the team?

It's so funny, these people in S5 are not strong enough at all. Wanna win the championship?

I hope you will support me and vote for recommendation, thank you! 🙏

Come on author✊✊ don't enter the palace

Personally, I suggest that the protagonist should not show off to himself. You should also write about how the team members communicate and how they feel. If you keep writing about the game, you will get tired of it the more you watch it.

Let me first say that I think it is very interesting, and then let me talk about my feelings Every time you have a competition chapter, my reading time is longer than other LOL articles, and I read it very carefully. I don't know if this is good or not. You have written most of the whole game. The rhythm and countermeasures of both sides are written in more detail. Therefore, if I read it quickly, I will feel that I do not understand it. The last few paragraphs cannot keep up with the rhythm and I look back. I have to follow the simulation in my mind to understand. I am not a novice and rarely make jokes. I don't know if this will be considered a niche for LOL writing. Other articles about players, just write one path for the competition, and then the details only follow the player. Many other competition rhythms are skipped, so you don't need to read in so much detail. You can still read some paragraphs skipped, so it will be more popular?

I just voted for a monthly ticket, can it be recharged?

，，：        1 2. The content is that the game has no off-site parts, which is too boring to watch, and the climax cannot be reflected. Watching too much will make you tired, resulting in insufficient appeal 3. The protagonist's usual off-site plot is appropriately interspersed to mobilize the reader's concentration Finally, cheers, author

If there are no Korean players in the LPL region, it will be a rubbish region. What is there to worry about? Even if there are no Korean members in the novel, it can't be saved.