Eighth Crown

The author says that he pays more attention to the plot and characters, but I feel that most of the fandoms are just to make up for some dissatisfaction in the original work. Moreover, the plot and characters themselves are not created by the author, and there is no story. As for the fun part, it only comes when the strength is improved every time the spirit base is updated. This book is not as good as the previous one, Fantasy Realization. I have read 80% of Fantasy Realization. The description of the fighting is not outstanding or grand. I feel that the protagonist is very strong.

Ah, it took me three days to read it day and night. Of course, this is my second time reading it, but the first time I only read a thousand and a few chapters. Then I thought about it and read it again. It really lived up to my expectations. When I first saw this book, I was intrigued by the lack of emotion in the protagonist, because what I like is the ruthlessness of the protagonist. Although I didn't finish it the first time, I put it on my bookshelf and didn't delete it.       ，，，，，，，，， The above are my remarks about this book. Now, I will go to the author's next book.

The protagonist takes Esdeath to travel through other different worlds. If you can't accept it, you can just abandon this book. I originally liked this book, but I ended up here.

It's a rare fan fiction with a complete closed loop!

Shuhuang, daily guide recommendation, so I read it. The two volumes of Demon Slayer and Holy Grail feel almost the same as the original plot except for the addition of a protagonist. The narration is also like writing a diary. The additional protagonist does not have much impact on the plot. The fan fiction is a re-creation based on the original work. I have read the original work and I don't need you to retell the plot again. And can the words you write be more expressive than the original manga and animation? When writing fan fiction, you need to use your imagination. The plot still follows the original work, so why don't I read the original work. Overall review, the protagonist did not leverage the plot, the narrative was too bland, there were too many explanations, and the character of the protagonist collapsed in the later period. If I were not interested in the world of Xingyue, I would not even finish the Clock Tower volume. I would like to give some advice to the author, don't let yourself be boxed in by the plot of the original work. How can you write a fanfic without some imagination?

Is there any chance to write about Devil's High School and Blood Devouring Raid?

I have read too many fans in this category, and I have some personal feelings and suggestions : 1. Control of the chapter timeline, and a superb grasp of the plot. Arrange a plot point every few chapters, which will make the plot more attractive. This requires reasonable changes and re-creations of the original plot, and at the same time controlling the writing speed and word count. The plot cannot lose the sense of continuity just because a few more chapters are added and the word count is lost. 2. Fully understand the original work so that the characters in the original work match the image, and at the same time do not put too much emphasis on unnecessary characters. 3. Clearly define the main line of continuous progress. It is best not to make the main line vague so that readers cannot understand what the purpose is, nor to make readers forget the purpose of the main line because the fan plot is too long. Otherwise, it would be a good imitation of the original, rather than a good work. 4. Turns or changes beyond the original work. A mind-blowing operation. For the time being, I hope the sun will cheer me up. Oli gives! ! !

Keywords in this book: Xingyue, Infinite Flow, Crystal Palace, System, Boss Conspiracy. The main story is that the protagonist Liu Xia was born without emotions. In order to experience emotions, she chose to become a suppressive thug. She went to various two-dimensional worlds to complete tasks, get to know the characters, and change the plot. As the protagonist gradually becomes stronger, he discovers that there is a big conspiracy in the system itself, and finally solves the conspiracy and reaches a happy ending. The plot outline of this book is pretty good, and the different worlds we go to all contribute to the plot. However, just like the protagonist, the plot also lacks emotion. Many characters never appear again after completing the dungeon, which is a common problem of infinite flow. In addition, the protagonist spends most of his time following the cycle of plot → getting stronger → next world, which inevitably leads to aesthetic fatigue.

I feel very good about the ending written by the author, especially the part about Liu Xia's missing memory, which really surprised me, but! This is not a reason for you, the author, to be lazy and skip other unique points! ! ! (The dog's head saves life)

The novel is quite good, but it has too much OOC, which is not good for people who have read the original work. For comprehensive comics, it's better to write daily-type comics, as combat-type comics tend to fall apart. The author can try writing something original in his next book.

It's okay, I'm not a moon cook at all and I can keep up to date with the latest. Although there are many jokes, world view settings, and characters that I don't understand at all, which affects the reading experience, it does not affect the completeness and flattering description of the protagonist settings and fighting scenes. All in all, if the author did not focus on FGO, a remote world setting that is not popular (it is indeed considered remote in the world of online literature), I am afraid the results will be much better. It does not change the protagonist's abilities, personality, growth methods, and gold finger acquisition, but only adjusts the world experience (emmm if this is the case, the protagonist's strength growth must still be changed), such as dnd, coc, popular comprehensive comics, DC, stars, fairy tales, traditional fantasy, etc. It should please more readers But how to say, each has its own advantages and disadvantages. Just like the super-righteous Annan, a player with a slightly similar character setting to Liu Xia, although it uses a more obscure secret cult theme (although it may be due to a slightly mysterious color), the popularity is not bad.

How come the title of this book has four characters, implying that five characters won't work?

I just want to know if I will have an encounter with Jin Shining, and how to deal with it. Should I ignore his bad mouth or retaliate fiercely?

What is our slogan? Do it! Do it! Do it!

Come on, I really like this kind of protagonist and the setting 😡

In my opinion, the author's style is somewhat similar to Luo Qing's. This style is a double-edged sword. When it comes to radio waves, I feel comfortable with it, but when it doesn't, it feels "light and airy". Some details are too detailed, and some places are too brief (actually it's just an illusion caused by comparison). It is suitable to read a volume in one go. It is very comfortable for a drama that you don't understand, and there is almost no self-exciting, kitchen-oriented language and dialogue; but for those dramas that you have a certain understanding of, it seems that there is some water in some places, and the settings you know are thrown out without advancing the plot. It will be a bit painful to catch up with the update.       ，，， Especially if the author writes it in this way, it will look very watery. So my suggestion is to make trade-offs when choosing a dungeon. It is best not to choose a linear map where you have to follow a group to advance the plot, such as Sword Art Online and FGO, especially the first part of Sword Art Online. Writing in this way is at most just walking Master Tong's path in a different way. At first glance, it may seem a little different, but in fact it is just to go through the plot again and leave SAO in advance. Of course, FGO can pick a singular point to write about, but it would be really boring to write about it one by one. The plots of the first few singular points are also average. On the one hand, it is difficult for readers who do not understand the plot to empathize with it. On the other hand, readers who have played it will find it boring and it is difficult to feel like a game. Luo Qing's Summoner book is often criticized, partly for this reason. It is best to choose some map copies similar to the open world, with different forces. This way it feels more convenient to deal with. At worst, it will not be the same force as the protagonist. Personally, I prefer the dungeon of "Zhi Die Infinitely Learn to Fight the City". It is different from the plot and focus of the protagonist group. It is not very novel, but you can enjoy it regardless of whether you understand the plot or not. You can also create some original plots based on the original. Another thing is that if it is the same copy as the author's previous book, it is best to take a different route from the beginning. This writing method is not suitable for simple reuse of a copy. It is also best to avoid the things of the original protagonist. It is really boring not to take what the original protagonist takes and then take it again. Luo Qing's book was criticized partly for this reason. Xx From the original protagonist to Wu Yan/Noah/Fang Li, and then to Luo Zhen, the effects and similar plots have to be repeated every time, which is endless. Since the protagonist is aiming to find emotions, he can even choose some daily dramas to transition to, and there is no need to forcefully design each world to be stronger than the previous one. The [combat power upper limit], [main combat power range] and [special characteristics] of the world can be arranged more freely, and the focus can also be made clear. For example, the combat power of Demon Slayer World in this book is not as high as that of Zhanmei World, but the emotional expression is better. Return to Demon Slayer, you can focus on the description of the feelings between the characters, and you can also create some small plots to express these emotions. In fact, the degree of originality in the world of beheading girls is good, but I personally feel that the detailed treatment is not very good. The interaction between Esdeath and Lu Xia on the desert island can be written in detail, so that Lu Xia's emotional fluctuations later will be more natural. What I mean is that if you decide who will bring emotional fluctuations to the protagonist, it is best to use a larger amount of pen and ink to describe it. After all, if the reader does not have emotional fluctuations, how can it affect Liu Xia (laughing) Of course, I am just making suggestions. It is the kind of thing that can be done without back pain. The author still chooses to accept it or not.

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It's a pity that I can't read Chapter 777 anymore. As a time-travel novel, this work is not intended to be excellent, but the sudden appearance of Araya Soren disgusted me. You said you wanted to do unlimited PVP. You made it clear from the beginning. But suddenly you did this in the middle, which gave me a huge feeling of separation. , And this b thief occupies the grid, the fun point is occupied, the sense of substitution is gone, and the room for complaining is gone, just like you are having a good time playing the game, you can pretend to be a master, and suddenly a wise king comes out and points at you, but you can't beat others in tnd.

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When I see Chapter 1276, I always have an unpleasant feeling: To be honest, the author has been very sophisticated about the various settings of the moon world, which is much better than many brainless comprehensive comics. But I still feel very sorry. One is the design of the system plug-in. I feel that it is out of balance in the early stage. In the middle and late stages, the combat power has collapsed, and the strength of the Noble Phantasm is extremely unreasonable. Apart from anything else, the Cavalry-level Protector of the Country and the Spear-level Holy Spear are among the best light cannon-type Noble Phantasms. The functions of the two Noble Phantasms are highly overlapping. If you choose one of the two, there is basically nothing to do with the Cavalry level in the later stage. Also, you changed Miyamoto Musashi's sword skill Noble Phantasm Demon into your own Noble Phantasm, but Sasaki's Swallow Phantasm, Souji's Sandandu, and Yagyu's Zen Sword are all Noble Phantasms that have reached the realm of kendo. The protagonist can only use them as minor skills after learning them? It's equivalent to the sword level. Moves 1 to 9 are all small skills. The 10th move is supposed to be the final big move (Musashi's magic modified treasure phantom), and then there are small skills from the 11th move on. I don't understand this combat power setting. Another pain point is the character design. The author's description of Esdeath was the most charming during the sister volume. The conflict between the protagonist and the protagonist's friend and foe continued to develop, and Esdeath's strong, courageous, friendly and heroic female hero style was fully displayed. , But since taking in Esdeath, this young lady has become nothing but a nymphomaniac and an incompetent rage for love. Most of her usual appearances are just as a thug tool. It can be said that after the girl-killing copy, her character went crazy and her personality completely collapsed. The female alchemist is basically useless. The only use of the resurrection is to serve as a spy tool in the Demon Slayer dungeon. To be honest, I think it is enough to follow the familiar and monitor. I spent a lot of time to resurrect such a cumbersome character. It is useless on the front battlefield. In terms of logistical support, in the FGO dungeon, after the protagonist learned the runes, I felt that she had nothing to do with her, especially after the protagonist took the sacred bow. For a character who can't sleep, can't be used, doesn't dare to fight, and is lazy in leveling, I feel like I should give up after passing the Demon Slayer dungeon. It's really redundant. On the contrary, I think it would be better if we could save the words and ink about her and the one-time translation of the free-range chicken, focus on streamlining the protagonist's spirit base template, and integrate and optimize the Noble Phantasm and skills.

I feel like the protagonist is x-cold. There is basically no heroine in this book, and basically all women are marginalized. The so-called setting of the two ritual scenes for the heroine does not have more than a dozen chapters in total (I just read chapter 700, I don't know about it later). Esdeath, the only one who has the most scenes, kissed the protagonist once in a few hundred chapters... I think x-cold is not too much. If you like no heroine, you can read this book. If you don't believe it, you can read it. Don't regret it after booking it.

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Really, really, I think this book is really well written. As far as I can see, Esdeath becomes a companion, and it's very comfortable to watch. But why are my grades not as high as the books I read in the past? I feel that the level of this book is higher than many books.