Nightmare

This newly updated chapter, about brothers and love rivals, is really awesome, it made me laugh so hard hahaha 🤭

1. The first few chapters are short and the number of words before and after is unbalanced. 2. The method of expressing horror is too single. It is recommended to use multiple people to contrast and highlight it. (Sorry, I only remember this much...) Regarding the above two valuable opinions put forward by a reader friend, Mo Chensha will adopt them one by one. Later, Shensha will rearrange and allocate story chapters, keeping each chapter at about 2,000 to 3,000 words. At the same time, Sinking Sand will also try new ways to create horror, including humor, of course. Finally, I would like to thank again the reader who deleted his post for unknown reasons for his valuable comments. Your criticism is the greatest help to Shen Sha!

I have always believed that a book does not belong to the author alone, but is shared by both the reader and the author. A book can only become a truly good book if it is constantly criticized by readers and the author continuously improves it based on readers' opinions.

During this holiday, Shen Sha has revised the entire novel based on everyone's opinions. I rewrote a wedge at the beginning, streamlined the text and corrected some typos and incorrect sentences, deleted some plot content, rearranged the chapters to maintain about 2,000 words per chapter, and repaired some loopholes in the novel. You are welcome to continue to provide comments in the future!

Thanks to Beihai Children for their suggestions: 1. Some paragraphs are unreasonably allocated and the details are inappropriate; 2. Some setting names are not concise, such as space blockade, which can be changed to lock space. These issues will be fixed later. Finally, I would like to thank Beihai Children again for their suggestions, especially the four recommendation votes. We also welcome Beihai Children to provide more opinions. Thank you!

Coming, coming😁😁

Why not just write about the modern one? As long as the real name is not used, it will generally not be replaced by ※. I have been looking forward to a novel that truly reflects the epidemic. I want to write it, but after all, I am not a medical staff and I have never seen the real situation in the hospital.

Be full of energy every day✌✌, come on, come on💪💪.

Thanks to Cangyu Mayfly for your valuable suggestions. Shen Sha will modify the opening wedge in the later stage and make sure it plays its intended role!

It has been added to the bookshelf. Thank you to the author for writing such a beautiful book!

I read a few chapters, the writing is good. The paragraph structure is a bit too big, it should be 4 lines per paragraph, otherwise readers will get tired of reading it. Some sentences are very long and are not separated by punctuation. If several long sentences are not separated together, it will consume the reader's patience. They must read carefully to know what they are talking about. There is nothing else, please support 🌹🌹🌹

Come on, go for it ✊✊✊

Happy Double Festival😊

Congratulations on finishing it, looking forward to the new book. Go, go, go!

Thank you King of Glory for your valuable opinions in Chapter 5, Shen Sha will adopt them, thank you!

After reading the introduction and the previous one or two chapters, I still have little idea of ​​the genre of this novel. Maybe I will understand it later (›´ω`‹ )

The writing is delicate and the plot is attractive. Are you a female channel or a male channel?

Thanks to the King of Glory for his careful correction: 1. In Chapter 62, two words were misspelled, trance and three times five divided by two. They have been corrected now. 2. Xiao Qiuyue was originally named "Caiyue", but later became "Autumn Moon", which is inconsistent. It will be corrected to "Autumn Moon" later.

Thanks to LWX Xiangzi Liupan for pointing out the errors in Chapter 5 and for providing other comments. Thank you!

When I saw the title of the book, I thought of nightmares, which are rather scary things, personally. When I clicked on it, the author said it was "Angels in White and Us", so I really wanted to read it seriously. The author's writing style is good. The foreshadowing could be shorter at the beginning, but then it becomes less of a problem. The story is quite exciting. In my opinion, it's pretty good. Come on⊙▽⊙

What a great opening, now back to the end, great

Come on duck😁😁😁

Can't stop coding, daily greeting cards, come on

6 Votes support! 🌹🌹🌹