Don't Think of Otakus as Goddesses

I feel that there are no particularly big flaws, but the plot is too tight, there are too few sub-plots, and the plot is not rich enough. The subscription results may not be very good. I suggest you write it as a short or medium-sized novel, finish it quickly, and ask the editor or other experienced authors to comment, and then sum up the experience in order to write more exciting novels. Good luck, author.