No Harm

Well, after reading a few chapters, I roughly understand the author's intention and world structure. I haven't come across many articles of this type, so I won't comment. I'll tell you my feelings after reading it. It's a bit venomous, so don't criticize it if you don't like it. First of all, there is nothing to complain about in terms of writing and writing. It is guaranteed to be above the standard with great writing. Second, the problem of paragraphing is huge. Looking at such a long text, to be honest, my brain hurts. Third, the description is a bit confusing and the psychological grasp is slightly lacking. Fourth, some descriptions of situations should be more detailed Well, that's all for now.

The overall feeling is good. I don't know why, but it always feels like Game of Thrones. Are you affected by it?

The beginning of this fantasy is quite innovative, and the text is quite comfortable to read. Come on!

Well written, already invested. Come on.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, if you have nothing to do, you can come and read my book, leave some comments in the comments, and work together😊

Come on!

{"NickName":"Twilight Hanchan","UserId":209563249}Thank you to the circle owner for the big vote, I feel like I am being taken care of 😍

At the same time, 70,000 words have been collected, and 100 of them have been collected. It is truly a memorable moment 🙂

The writing is good, but the history needs to be studied a little more. During the Dazhong Xiangfu period, Zhong Shiheng had not yet gone to the northwest border, and there was no Zhong family army at this time. Prince Zongzhen was not born until the ninth year of Dazhong Xiangfu, so it is recommended to change the time and move it to the Tianxi year.

The beginning makes people think that the protagonist is the teacher. The protagonist appears a little late in the second chapter, but the character description is very good. At the same time, I also hope that the overt and covert struggles between good and evil, and ethnic groups, can be written more reasonably and delicately.

It's been 4 days, big 😫

It's well written, but I just want to ask if it's abusive?

Encourage each other! Come on 👍👍

Fantasy is very difficult, I don't even dare to think about it, come on, the author is great

Come and collect it, give it a try, and check back for my new book.

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Emmm, the writing style is so pure, 😁 I feel ashamed to be inferior to 🤭 Come on＾0＾~ Boss

Although little brother, I voted for you but not me, but I just need a little support from you. By the way, do you have a vote?