Escape from Death Mystery Game

The first chapter seems a bit novice, and the protagonist's character is very flawed. Chapter 2, a little trick, there are many characters, don't describe them all at once, focus on one or two, and others as the plot unfolds. Language is the weakest way to describe characters. Too much dialogue will bore people. Poisonous tongue, dislike, delete.

The writing is good. Also, author, have you started updating three times a day now?

It's up to you to decide who can reach the top of the game Please pay attention to the character development in this book Make your own judgment! Leave a message below which one you think is the most suitable candidate Let's discuss it together

It turns out that Qiuqiu is a woman, so doesn't that mean she has to lose weight?

I have just read a few chapters, and the writing style is, of course, excellent. Speaking of plot alone, a game like this "escape from life" is great. Aren't those born in the 1990s and 2000s like this? How to say it? That's great! Like, support, come on! When there are votes, I will vote for you!

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Not bad, not bad, very nice, collected, and replied 🙂

It's very well written, keep up the good work! Received

Very interesting novel! Very easy to relate to (escape room)! I just suggest that you enrich the description of the characters a little bit, keep up the good work!

Well written 😊, keep it up!

The setting is very good, I hope it can be updated daily.

We are all newbies, support and come on!

Not bad, come on, come on 😊

Damn, if this kind of game is really developed, how many people are addicted to it. Come on!

The trumpet account 6224 voted for it. It would be best if we can vote with each other every day 😁

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