Sword Cultivation Starting from Douluo

Tang Brothers

This is my first time writing a book. Please stop complaining. Please point out what I didn't do well when I was inexperienced in writing this book for the first time.

This is the one with the best storyline among all the Douluo fics I have read. I was deceived when I saw the destruction of the Qibao Glazed Sect.

🐮, Ning Rongrong liked the protagonist, and then the protagonist killed Ning Rongrong. Ning is leading the evil star?

Is Wujue's sword martial spirit more suitable? When I read the title of your book, I thought it was from Shushan Sect of Sword Martial Arts. When I came in, I saw that it was the Clear Sky Hammer Martial Spirit. Why don't you buy dog ​​meat with a sheep's head?

A sword cultivator awakens a hammer, and you play with your balls.

Nothing new. Same old stuff.

The main reason for the poor performance was that the martial arts awakening was restricted by the Tang family where they were born. They were all rushing to the Shushan sword cultivation point. However, they awakened the Clear Sky Hammer and those who came for sword cultivation had no intention of continuing to pursue books. The immature writing style is not the main reason. People who read fan fiction generally don't have high requirements for writing and can read it. Cast three votes first to make up the number

Two updates a day, but you are too naive, you might as well update one chapter a day and combine the two chapters into one

It's so damn toxic now, I really can't stand it anymore

Now that we are all in the killing city, we can't think of a way to save our great-grandfather?

Since it is written that the sword cultivator also has the Clear Sky Hammer, it should be two martial souls, and they are still practicing in the Haotian Sect, and then they fight against the Spirit Hall and let the Haotian Sect come into being.

After reading so many novels, I finally come across one with only one martial spirit. I'm glad to say that

The protagonist's brain is flooded. According to the protagonist's thinking logic, he should kill almost everyone in the entire continent.

Why are emotional scenes so casual? Why can Feng Xiaotian squint under the murderous intent of the protagonist? Why not make the Wuchen Sword the second martial spirit? Why are the villains so brainless? Why can the protagonist kill hundreds of people with one sword? Why are Douluo Continent's novels written like fairy tales? Why does Tang Hao know how to practice when he hears the protagonist? Dan is not surprised why the protagonist can fight Contra at the age of 11, why the protagonist has passed the Hundred Levels of Killing City at the age of 11, why the protagonist has become the Soul King at the age of 11, why I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 80, why the author wrote so poisonously, is this a loss of morality or a distortion of human nature.

Zhu Xian is gone! Zhu Xian watched too much and found it boring! Might as well watch Douluo!

Update more😍

Suddenly I thought of a cool operation, why can't Tang San control Lan Yincao to launch hidden weapons?

If you want a heroine, who do you want?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, you are a little cruel. I saw that the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Sect was destroyed in the later period, and the credibility of the Haotian Sect was lost in Tang Er's hands!

There are typos and some punctuation marks are used incorrectly. Forget it, you actually use punctuation marks as words. You are so cool! Author

Your paragraph is too long, it's embarrassing to watch

It's a bit poisonous. I don't know what the use is of awakening a Clear Sky Hammer martial spirit. Really, if you can't accept it, don't read it. I'm afraid you'll criticize others. Anyway, I couldn't stand it after watching it for a while

Bye bye, author, I stopped reading when I saw chapter 131, bye bye

I said why does he look like a novice?

New book Douluo: Rescue Bibi Dong

By the time Tang Xuan was born, it basically collapsed and I couldn't watch it, which is to say that it was embarrassing for me. . .