Starting from Being a Grandpa

I wanted to endure it, but when I saw my daughter marrying a trafficker's son and giving birth to a granddaughter, I was so angry that I died of poison.

The characters are a bit messy in the first few chapters. The protagonist's children, friends, friends' children, children's friends are okay in the first few chapters. Later, the characters are intertwined and become very confusing. It is difficult to tell them apart. It is also a bit slow to enter the main plot at the beginning. You are a trumpet, the author, and you have no fixed readers. The pace should not be so slow. After all, those slow-paced authors have their own team I can't even talk about the foreshadowing, because the foreshadowing can't be watched anymore, and the foreshadowing plot is completely incomparable with the main text. In short, the excitement is not enough, especially if the plot has special routines. I don't mind the routines, but to play with routines, you have to make readers feel happy. If you don't feel happy, you have to contrast it with the previous routines, which makes them look poisonous. > There are also characters. I feel that there are only a few people who are related to the protagonist, and there are not many passers-by. The most important thing is that there are no impressive characters. Good characters can make a book come alive Author, you are a trumpet and have no regular readers. What you have to consider is how to attract passers-by and then form your own team, rather than writing like those old authors, who are like me and imitate others

I beg the author to close the book as soon as possible. It's too poisonous and the writing is too bad.

For those of you who haven't read it, you can check out some of my impressions. The writing was pretty good at the beginning, which is to say, it was good at the beginning. As you continue reading, it feels like you're making up the words. The protagonist comes back with more than 5 billion, and he keeps hiding it from his son and daughter. He also writes about his son and daughter's life and work troubles. I feel like scolding people when I read it. You write about you🐴 Then, it's fair to say, Momojiji, fuck you🐴

I traveled back in time and went back in time. This kind of design is very interesting, but the design of the property is depressing. The state collects it well. Others say it is swallowed by people, but this one feels a bit fake. The design of not letting children know about one's wealth may be correct, but it is not very reasonable. If children know that they have wealth, they will definitely become bad? The family is not getting along? This is unacceptable. Huo's excessiveness also makes people feel unreal. It is obvious that she loves him so deeply and sticks to him. She shrinks when they meet, and then restrains her feelings and disappears. This design makes people feel very awkward. Overall, the story is a good one. As long as it doesn't go too far, it's still worth reading. The key is to make it enjoyable. The pretense of coolness has come to an end. I can only say it's disgusting after reading it. Several slap-in-the-face plots did not attract people, but drove readers away!

I downloaded the Qidian app specifically to read the comment section. The author's autobiographical novel is so well written! The writing is excellent and the plot is smooth. After reading it, Lao Ba said he was an expert. It combines meat and vegetables, and is nutritious and healthy.

Is there too little description of the protagonist? And what kind of system is it? It's almost on the shelves and I haven't figured out how awesome it is... It's all soy sauce gangsters, and the protagonist is just a cold observer?

The idea is good, the writing is just okay, and the plot** 80% of the content is about supporting characters. Does the author want to use supporting characters to make the protagonist awesome? It's a pity that I didn't feel the awesomeness Also, the system is also a bit tricky I have it on my bookshelf. I'll look at it when I think of it someday or after I finish the book.

Haha, if you become famous, your wife will die. It's just a different way. The protagonist can understand it, but the author cannot forgive it.

I thought the first 100 chapters at the beginning were good to read, but I felt the following chapters were a bit watered down, especially the part where the protagonist finds someone to help He Qing vent his anger. It was very awkward to read, and I almost skipped it. But overall, this subject matter is very new. I can say that I have never seen a similar subject matter. I hope the author will work hard and write well in the future!

Zhang Yan's brain was stuffed with tofu, right? One time, her classmate's father cheated on her and she was not clear-headed. The other time, her classmate borrowed millions of dollars 5 or 6 times. Didn't you think something happened? What kind of pig-brained thing is this? Sure enough, I was beaten at my former mother-in-law's house, and I was punished for no reason. If I didn't have a capable father, I would have jumped off the building and committed suicide!

The idea is great, but the writing is poor.

Very good creativity, ordinary writing style, and routine plot.

I haven't seen much of Shuangdian. Why do I feel it's a bit cruel? Although I'm writing an urban novel, there's really no need to write it strictly like this if you already have a golden finger. I don't know about others, but I can't stick to your Shuangdian. I slipped away.

Out of five stars, give it 3 stars! It's considered barely passing. It's not very cool, it's all just foreshadowing. You can ignore the first 50 chapters because they're quite toxic. The role of money must be described later. The protagonist's so-called worry about getting rich is a poisonous point... This is a novel. The most important thing is to cater to the market, otherwise it will be on the shelves waiting for you.

This book is really a good book, But how should I say it? The current online novels are basically fast-paced novels. This statement only represents my personal opinion. So I cannot say that this novel is not good, It's just that the beginning is too big, Updated to the latest chapter I saw, The plot is not fully developed, There are still many good plots being updated, A very good novel, It's just my personal feeling, Reading online articles is an entertainment to pass the time, the layout is too big, I don't have much patience to continue reading**, it's like watching a good TV series Like this, watching dramas is too uncomfortable, But the reason may be that I read too many interesting articles. I don't have much patience to read such books. This is what happens after reading too many fast-paced books. I need to be constantly fresh. Only in this way can there be novels that you can read and forget. In other words, you can forget about novels after reading them. To meet the needs. Here I can only wish the authors all have over 10,000 orders and become extremely popular.

The front is pretty good, but the back is getting boring.

One of the best novels in 2019-2020

Let me just say a few words. I read a few chapters to foreshadow the character relationships, but I didn't get to the main theme. I was a little tired of reading them. I personally feel that the foreshadowing of the character relationships should be laid out layer by layer, and all the relationships are laid out at once. It will look like a big pattern, but it also completely frames itself and limits the development of the plot. It is like you take out the character outline at the beginning and tell everyone that this is the character who will appear in my book. In fact, it is very taboo to start a book like this. Looking at traditional literature, I have never seen such a foreshadowing of the beginning. It is also rare for online literature to have such a foreshadowing of the beginning. There is a foreshadowing of the relationship between the characters, but it will not be written about the relationship between the characters other than the protagonist in Chapter 8 or 9 after the protagonist has just appeared at the beginning. This will make readers feel aesthetic fatigue. Because you just started the chapter, it will make the readers unwilling to sort out the relationships between too many complicated characters, which will lose a large number of readers. Of course, there are more than ten chapters in which the protagonist does not appear, such as the Condor Shooting, but the narrative techniques are different. It is still useful to read the author's assistant's experience if you have nothing to do. Although my own score of 404 on street fighting is not as good as yours, at least there won't be so many people complaining about it. I hope you can see it. It is best to intersperse the protagonist's current scenes and plots in the first nine chapters, instead of just enriching the protagonist's image with the empty and distant memories of the supporting characters. If you can adjust it, adjust it. I don't want to pretend that I didn't say it.

Dear father-in-law and mother-in-law, the safety of father-in-law and mother-in-law comes first. To be on the safe side, book early.

The first part is good, but the more I read later, the more tired I feel.

The first few chapters are very well written, but the later chapters are almost boring, and they are quite interesting too.

All the tickets have been given away, hurry up and put them on the shelves. I can't give away the 4 monthly passes.

It's very immersive 👍👍. It's different from other pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles, but there are too few updates.

One word "drag", the rhythm is snail

Back in time, my wife died of overwork, I watched my son worry about the company going bankrupt, I watched my daughter-in-law struggle for life, and my daughter was so violent that she was hospitalized every day. Do you think there is no rush and you can take your time? Are you writing about your daughter marrying an enemy and being exported every day? You can only write this plot. It's so damn poisonous. Are you writing it to take revenge on society? ? ?

Am I the first? ? It's very well written, don't be disappointed!

I read it all in one night Bookshelf, do you understand?

You Western readers, one by one, catch the author and criticize him. What happened to the protagonist's daughter who was domestically abused? What happened to the daughter's husband who is the son of a corrupt trafficker? What's wrong with my daughter being exported every day by her enemy's son? I'm so angry, what's going on in this society, when will the niche readers who like ntr plots stand up? The author understands us, and we just want to vote for it! It's not easy for the author to code. I went to visit the author's wife and daughter. No, no, no one really thinks that readers who are so poisoned and angry will not come to the comment area to be weird. There are also navy troops. I will match the key. Do you match it? How many to match Let me tell you, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Readers who feel that this kind of ntr plot is not harmful, you can continue reading. You can subscribe, reward, and vote monthly. Put your name high on the fan list, so that no one will question your true love for this work. For people like us who are addicted to drugs, just take an apprenticeship. Do you still want us to subscribe and spend money to buy shit and feed it to ourselves?

It's so uncomfortable to watch 2 updates a day. I've been closed recently so I need to write more. Available for full order🥺🥺🥺