Proud of the World Xuantian Ji

Come on! It feels like a fairy

The author's writing is very delicate and the characters are well created. Come on.

Well written, thank you to the author! Take good care of you

It is a very traditional fantasy about immortality, which should attract many readers in the future. Personally, I don't like the background introduction in the first two chapters. I suggest that the author can split the background introduction into subsequent stories in the future. It may be better to write it more obscurely. Personally, I think the advantage is that the writing style is stable. The whole work is relatively stable so far. It continues the traditional style of fantasy fairy tales, and it reads like that. The disadvantage is that this book came out too late, and this style has begun to be eliminated by readers. Now it is more inclined to be more cheerful, with more jokes, or more focused on shaping the emotional conflicts of the characters, as well as articles with updated styles and more niche settings. The story has just begun here. I hope that the author can break the routine of fantasy cultivation novels in the later period. After all, there are already many articles about cultivating immortals, fighting monsters, being crushed and killed, and then cultivating immortals again. Newcomers are commenting, please comment back. If my comment is not good, please tell me directly. I can delete the comment and correct it immediately. I hope to wait for the author's reply. Thank you 🌹🌹🌹

Very well written in big letters (✪▽✪), come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! 🌹🌹🌹

Add it to your bookshelf and read it every day until you die.

This style of writing gives me a sense of memories 😂, this type is not very popular now, but it is very comfortable to look at ~ The writing is very good, keep up the good work! (Ps: I thought I hadn't seen it, but as soon as I opened it, yo, I've seen it!)

The writing style is delicate, but it is too delicate, which leads to a problem. You talk too much, which will make readers annoyed when reading. You can delete some irrelevant words, and you don't need to adopt my suggestions. Your work is actually very good. The writing style is that of a fairy, unlike other works of the same type that often have a fantasy feel. Looking forward to a return visit.

Shuquanlai It's not bad, a recommendation vote But I feel that the language is not refined enough, for my mother-in-law Most people may not be so patient to read on, so let's improve slowly

Ladies and gentlemen! I! Here we go again😄

😏Here I go again, hahaha.

It feels pretty good. Come on, keep an eye on you.

The new book "The Miracle Life of a Fisherman" has been released. Everyone is welcome to collect and recommend it! ! !

Received, please accept each other

All the books in my collection have been discontinued recently.

Brother, how many books do you have in your collection?

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