My System Forces Me to Lose My San Value

I rarely read systematic articles. There is nothing wrong with the beginning of the article. It goes straight to the point and attracts readers. The beginning of the nightmare is the beginning of this book. Some places can be divided into small paragraphs, which is more suitable for readers to watch!

New book investment group: Cthulhu has become popular recently, and this book also belongs to this wave. Advantages: The author's plot arrangement is still very good. The protagonist has obviously gone through a process from the beginning to getting familiar with it, and the plot logic is good. The author knows how to set up foreshadowing, and the plot transition will not appear awkward Disadvantages: It was released too early, it was released after chapter 20 The character creation is not good, the protagonist reveals his identity very easily, which is very childish. The impression I left on the female characters after reading chapter 20 is that they can shoot arrows and have a cheerful personality, which is obviously too facial expression Summary: Try to avoid going on the shelves too early, practice more on weekdays, and learn to shape the character that suits the personality.

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Chapter 20 will be available...

Come on! Very well written! I hope there won't be any eunuchs!

This kind of subject matter can cover thousands of chapters, but you only wrote a few dozen chapters and then ended it?

It's very well written. Come on, be sure to finish it 🤭🤭

Why is the update intermittent?

The name of this book is interesting, I couldn't read it after thinking about it for a long time

Come on update(ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, I wish you can become a god soon

I haven't been here for a few days, but most of them have signed contracts. Come on!