Man of Steel in the Comic World

The author's writing is quite good, I hope he won't be knocked down by trolls. But I also have some suggestions: 1. The protagonist has too few roles. The author said that you arranged it this way to create supporting characters. But now the supporting characters in the book are all characters who have appeared in movies. Readers already have a certain understanding of them. Do you need to create them again? If you want to create supporting characters, I hope you can create some characters that appear in comics, not in movies, or your own original alter characters in parallel worlds, such as the Supreme Mage Stark, the Four-Handed Hulk, and the Sentinel who swings between dual personalities. 1.5: The fact that the protagonist has too few scenes is because you didn't write a character who can compete with Superman. 2. The growth of the protagonist, Superman's power is close to invincibility. The description of the growth in strength is meaningless. I hope to portray the psychological growth of the protagonist, like: I am invincible and I will do whatever I want → The world is suffering and who will save it (it has nothing to do with it) → The world needs a hero, why can't it be me 3. Too rigid in the plot of the movie, I can understand so many movies in the Marvel Cinematic Universe. Once the plot is destroyed, the next plot will be difficult to write, but this is also the meaning of fandom. If the author has difficulties in this regard, he can refer to "Developing a Superman" or follow a video called "lorre" on the Xiaopo website for inspiration. After all, the title is American comics. I hope you don't stick to Marvel movies, Marvel comics, DC movies, comics, animations, TV series and even Dark Horse comics. There are many things to write about.

Ah, how can I put it this way? I can only say that it is really well written. Please keep writing. I rarely agree with a fan work so much. Putting aside the values ​​embodied in the work, the writing, character design, and character interaction are all quite good. I don't know how the author performs in original novels (because originality can best reflect the author's structural layout ability, writing power, and character setting skills) But judging from this Marvel fan novel, so far, no matter how good it is, Both the characterization of the protagonist and the reproduction of the supporting characters are made of flesh and blood and have their own thoughts. They can think, express their emotions, be happy, sad, angry, and perform activities that best suit their character settings in different scenarios! This is very rare. It proves that the author has really carefully analyzed each character, restored their respective personalities, and brought them into the work. This alone is enough to surpass 90% of Marvel fan fiction. Since I am currently following the plot and there are not many chapters, I cannot tell how well the author controls the overall plot. However, judging from the relaxed and relaxed plot description so far, I believe that the author will not disappoint readers in the future. Let's talk about the description of the protagonist. At present, it seems that the author wants to show a superman who not only has powerful power, but also has more flexible thinking and leadership ability, rather than a lone ranger. This is a good point. I am trying to write my own Kal-El based on the Clark Kent set by DC writers. However, this is also the point that worries me the most. DC's Superman is endowed with god-like power, but has a human soul and is a guardian. The author's Karl is endowed with the responsibility of a leader in addition to divine power and humanity, so he will eventually become a pioneer. The conflict between responsibility and individuality, sensibility and rationality will escalate. How to deal with these conflicts or the final decision will not be a simple Spring and Autumn writing method. This will greatly increase the difficulty of writing. I wonder if the author can control such a complex character setting and inevitable plot direction. Finally, I wish the author to write better stories and get more tickets, come on ^0^~

There wasn't much originality in the early stage, but the author knew a lot about memes. Until Zhang said that I saw the author tearing people up in person, I was worried whether there would be any problems with this temper update. Exit and take a look, okay, 25 days ago. I don't understand why it is recommended...

The irritable author criticizes trolls online, come on, keep going, bookmark and follow

The Superman of the Silver Age could already use biomagnetic fields to drag the solar system. The Superman of that period had no weaknesses and was not afraid of magic or kryptonite. He only needs to sleep in the sun for 15,000 years to become a golden superman.

You can never wake up someone who is pretending to be asleep. It is clearly written in the book that this nebula is not that nebula. The nebula in this universe have been restored to flesh and blood through the regeneration cradle technology. Some people insist on calling them robots, which shows how rigid the thinking is. If you like watching robots so much, why don't you go to the movies instead of coming here to watch the fandom? The universe this book is written in is not the MCU, but the Marvel parallel universe that is partially similar to the MCU. If Natasha, Pepper, Wanda, and Jane must be the heroines, there are many fans with this setting in Qidian. It took a lot of effort to publish a book with different female protagonists, but it's really low-key to force them to assimilate them.

In fact, as long as the character of Superman is written, I like it very much

The first time I spoke, I was a little nervous. The author writes very well. . . But Superman is now starting to level up in a parallel universe, which I feel is unnecessary. It is even more necessary to weaken super talents. Because he is too strong. This makes describing his battles very boring. You can see it from his changes in the history of comics. The Superman of the Silver World is invincible only in kryptonite. Now he has almost no magic resistance and his character is even weaker. (Of course this is also the fault of the screenwriter) Marvel and DC handle Superman and villains completely differently. Marvel admires heroes with humanity. Whether it's Thor or Iron Man, they all have their own human flaws. It makes them more real. In times of crisis, they overcome these shortcomings and come out to fight evil, which makes them even more charming. The villain is a bit vague in comparison. All in all legendary evil. DC's classic villains are all charismatic heroes. And Superman, Batman, they are the perfect heroes. It doesn't look like a human being, but a symbol, which is hope and justice itself. Therefore, there is no sense of substitution. In terms of Superman settings, Superman is very strong. The Infinity Stones in the movie universe are not as powerful as in the comics. So I have a little suggestion. Or according to the original work, let him be restricted by magic, so that only half of the people in the universe can hang him. (Poison Ivy can be controlled, why not the Asgardians?) Or make him more of a saint. (I don't recommend this. Although I think Holy Mother is a complimentary term, and Madonna is a derogatory term, many messy guys don't think so.) The growth of the protagonist is necessary. But we all have to see that there is no point in simply making him stronger. There are already some bugs in the plot now. The only reason Superman didn't kill Thanos seemed to be that he didn't think it was time. . . . . By the way, it suddenly occurred to me that there is another way to deal with it. Just like One Punch Man, Superman comes to the rescue at the end every time, and the early battles reflect the glory of the heroes' humanity. But in this case, Superman will ****, isn't the protagonist Superman? . . . . . . Generally speaking, there needs to be a villain who can fight Superman for a long time (even overwhelm him), and the heroes must compete with each other in wits and courage, so that the plot can continue. Unlike the development of Xiaobaiwen. (⊙O⊙)

I don't know how many old American comic bookworms here are. If you have been following American comics at Qidian, you will know that Stranger's work "Superman: The End of the Future" is the best Superman fan work and the best American comic work in my opinion. It completely connects the "Stranger Universe" created by Stranger. The three protagonists from the past have all appeared, and they have a complete multiverse view. Of course, The Stranger still has major shortcomings. Two of the protagonists have relatively cold personalities, so the superhuman protagonist he created is even more outstanding. The heroine Helena Wayne is also the best portrayed heroine in history. There is also a Stranger's law, which is that in any universe written by Stranger, Supergirl will always be unable to get together with the protagonist. After Mo Ke wrote his last book last year, he basically stopped writing due to changes in his personal position and busy official duties. Although Moke's universe may be coming to an end, Moke's creation of fan comics, I personally feel, is worthy of learning from other authors. What is pure American comics?

I just don't understand why Superman from DC should travel to Marvel. The world view of DC is huge. In the American TV series The Flash, a multiverse is created. In addition to the single Avengers series universe, Marvel also has at most an X-Men series. The problem is that Marvel has been terrible at writing in the past few years. Forget it, I won't say it anymore, I'm actually just complaining, complaining, why the DC universe has created a film and television multiverse. This subject matter is so good, why no one writes about it? Sorry.

The heroine is a mistake. Regardless of what she looks like when she returns to her original appearance, we think of Nebula's "first impression" as having a blue bald head, which is really difficult to bring into the world. The other heroines in Marvel fandoms are Black Widow, Scarlet Witch, Jane, you are so "pop", come to Nebula, just think about it. And many people don't know what Nebula's original appearance is like, and they can't get the heroine's face at all, so the heroine is a mistake.

If you can attack Nebula, I can only say that you have a very strong taste 👍

Fan fiction is a secondary creation based on the original work. Whether the author copied the whole process from the movie or is just a superficial account, he doesn't even have his own understanding. In other words, it doesn't matter whether there is this injured useless superman or not.

The bastard protagonist, this Superman was written like shit. He came towards Superman and ended up being fed non-stop. The author disgusted all the viewers who like Superman.

I found a book of food. I think the author's writing is very good. Starting from Guardians of the Galaxy, it gradually gets better. The image of the protagonist is very consistent with my idea of ​​a superhero, capable and responsible. After reading the book carefully, I didn't find the Virgin Mary mentioned in the book review. Some people in the book review area are too violent, and the author has not done anything heinous. Some people have really bad mouths. If you don't like it, just leave. I'm looking for trouble at the same time. Is prostitution still reasonable? I hope the author will not be influenced by these stupid people, write well and stick to it (ง •̀o•́)ง

If you were to write about Superman and copy all his character and abilities, you would be dead set.

The book itself was okay, but I felt really uncomfortable reading it with Nebula as the heroine. I can understand that Star-Lord is looking for Gamora because he grew up in the universe and has unusual ideas. I can understand Scarlet Witch and Vision because of Vision's own charisma and the fact that the two experienced life and death threats, and then their emotions broke out. So, what about the protagonist and Nebula? Nebula was captured, and then although the spacecraft had an accident, it was not in much danger. He was rescued a few days later, and then the two of them were together? ? ? It's quite clear why Nebula likes the protagonist, but what about the protagonist? The protagonist and Nebula don't like each other physically, right? The protagonist has lived and grown up on Earth, and his aesthetics are also from Earth, right? That's heart-to-heart talk. So how long did Nebula stay as a prisoner for an uncertain period of time, but it shouldn't be too long, and they had a few days of freedom. During this period, the two of them did not communicate much and did not encounter great danger. How did the protagonist stay with Nebula when it was not in line with his own aesthetics?

Who plays Nebula?

It seems like the 4th or 5th person is writing Superman novels. I don't know if it's a curse. All the Superman novels I've read are eunuchs.

The content in brackets affects reading. How should I put it, it's a bit of a drama, and we should try to let readers get into the drama instead of the other way around. Use fewer parentheses, preferably none. You can also mark Note 1, Note 2, and Note 3, and then write them at the end of the chapter.

Isn't it fun to write about superpowers? It's hard to write Superman, and various weakening can only defeat the minions. It is the plot of the movie from beginning to end. Even the supporting roles have to follow the plot. I dare not make any changes for fear that it will not be the same as the script. Excuse me, are there any interesting novels in which the protagonist of Superman has the same process and ending as in the movie (including the fate of the supporting character and the unnamed villain's henchman)?

Superman is not invincible in Marvel! Like a sentinel! Sword fight! Hyperion and the like have similar abilities to Superman! Of course it's not in the movie! It was completely inspired by Superman! What is a hero? Be fearless and save others! He who does not bow to the evil forces is a hero! It would be boring if the protagonist was as invincible as Saitama! Doing good things is just something that comes naturally! The power is strong! What about thoughts? Do you feel like Iron Man? Half the chance of snapping his fingers would not cause harm to his family and relatives! Why should he sacrifice for others! The wife will lose her husband! The daughter lost her father! He knows! He was a sacrifice so that others would not lose their loved ones! To achieve great righteousness, sacrifice small righteousness! He is not the most powerful in the Avengers! But he made the biggest sacrifice! This is the awakening of a hero! A hero may not be the strongest! But the heart must be strong! No matter how powerful the enemy is! When necessary, you will be a hero if you step forward without hesitation even if you die or get hurt!

What is it about? Haven't we seen the movie? The plot is all the same as the movie and the protagonist is dispensable. So why write this novel? Just give me a link to the movie and watch it yourself.

The heroine is Nebula, which is really dissuading. If Nebula is just like Gamora, but her skin is different from that of the people on Earth, I would be a little more accepting. The key point is that Nebula is a modified person and can only be regarded as a robot! And they are not yet a human race on Earth. No matter how good your writing is, you will still be persuaded to quit.

Two shortcomings ①The heroine Nebula. Writing a novel is not just about what you think is good, it is about being read by readers. The first image of Nebula in my mind is that of a robot. The author has such a strong taste! ②It feels like the protagonist has no sense of existence. Listen to me, you are not a master, you cannot control the portrayal of the protagonist and supporting characters together.

By the way, did the author refer to Heng Chao when writing Superman? I feel like this is super cool

Does the author have a book club? Please reply, please reply, please reply, please reply.

Say it anyway! Anyway, I quite like this novel, and it is one of the few fan novels with relatively positive views. It's not as pedantic as the original Superman, nor as dark as other fan fiction. Moreover, the funny dialogue among the Guardians of the Galaxy team is very similar to that in the original movie, which is quite funny.

There is no need to question Superman's status in American comics or even the DC universe. If you are interested, just read Doomsday Alarm and Dr. Manhattan's evaluation of Superman... Why is the version of Superman in the main universe changed every time the DC universe is restarted? Among the most important events in the past, including the Crisis on Infinite Earths in 1985 and the Infinite Crisis around 2006, the rise and fall of the DC multiverse are all related to Superman, like a fulcrum. Due to the impact of the epidemic, DC and Marvel may consider cooperating again to publish comics and stay together for warmth. And this year's big death metal event, Dr. Manhattan is coming back...

To be honest, this is almost the best fanfic about Superman that I have seen. I really feel that the willingness of a mortal to become a hero is also rare. It is not like other fanfics where they go around flirting with girls when they get to Marvel. To be honest, the look and feel is really bad. It is rare to see a book with a single female protagonist. The writing is great.