Easy to See Zhong Qing

1. The narrative structure is relatively reasonable, with a climax at the beginning and the end, setting up suspense, and in the later stages, the suspense and foreshadowing are always followed, and they are linked together. However, it may be the first time for the author to write a book, so it seems a bit green and immature, but he can do better, please work hard. 2. The writing style is good and very delicate. The language in the front is beautiful, and some of the words are too gorgeous and have no practical meaning, but it can be seen that it is very thoughtful, and it has some ancient charm but is not too white at the same time. The latter part is more casual, the language is fluent and graceful, but it is a bit bland and there is nothing particularly amazing about it. Unlike ancient proverbs, it is more suitable for fantasy and fantasy language description. 3. In the introduction, you can see the characteristics of the characters, the plot and the style. I like it quite a bit, but it can be polished a little more to make it more interesting and attractive. 4. Book title. This kind of title is not uncommon, but it can be considered clever. Tell the protagonist's name directly and point out the love at first sight, which is intuitive and clear. 5. The plot is average, not particularly amazing, but interesting and meaningful. There is no pure romance, but a good plot and telling some stories through the plot. There is emotion, resonance, and regret. But the rendering is not enough, we can work harder in this area. The story is about romance in a dramatic style, warm and harmonious. It is speculated that under the influence of evil spirits in the later period, the protagonist's personality and experience may change, and the plot will be more ups and downs and attractive. The first few dozen chapters are more like foreshadowing. I feel like there will be a big explosion later, so I look forward to it. 6. Concept of love. I like the author's setting of a pair of people who will live their whole life together. They firmly believe in each other and love only one person. There are no bloody misunderstandings. However, this may lead to fewer readers because readers seem to prefer conflict. Yes, the emotional plot can add some conflicts. 7. The characters are vivid and the characters can be described. There are no absolutely good people or absolutely bad people. The author holds on, keep writing hard, don't be frustrated, come on, don't give up, and try to update.

The writing is great. Come on, let's encourage each other.

The suspense is set up very well, and the identity and background are explained in the dialogue between the characters and the progression of the plot, without seeming stiff. I also like the names of the male and female protagonists 😁 Good luck to the author.

1. I think Yi Ci is the kind of person who is a bit cold and arrogant, but only gives his tenderness to Qing Yan, and he is deeply in love... If the story is moving, then you must be the best one. The characters have distinctive characteristics, and I also like the "enemies" Yi Ci and Qing Yan very much. The writing style is light. If it were pure ancient Chinese, I think the look and feel would be better. Bi and ink~ 2. This summary made me cry, I will beat you... The story of Yu Niang and Liu Jiang... Ended with regret. You bastard, you really shed tears. I think there won't be many people like Liu Jiang! There is also Yu Niang, who is lonely and miserable. Half her life has been wasted, and all of it is empty and full of regret. After crossing Naihe Bridge, we drank Meng Po Soup. No one will remember anyone, it's just us imagining a "happy" ending to the story. It's just self-comfort and satisfaction of one's own selfishness. Half life is dusty, half life is ups and downs... When will I cry while reading novels... I remember the last time I cried was five or six years ago! It's been a long time. Every story is a journey of mind. Perfection or imperfection no longer matters, if I can understand its depth, if I can understand its proportion. I can learn a lot from this book, or from every book. For example, I can learn from Liu Jiang. He has the courage to drown himself in love. Be braver than brave. 3. It is easy to stop a boat, but it is not easy to sail... The words are profound, I am very curious about the next story, the story of Yi Ci... What the hell, Yi Ci is this... A maniac who dotes on his wife. And your little theater, crying one second and laughing the next, do you want to do this to me? I am tired... I don't love you anymore. Do I understand? Maybe, maybe not. When a person walks through a fork in the road, he always habitually uses his sixth sense to tell the difference, while some people never look at the road and don't care what is ahead, they just keep walking forward. After experiencing the wind and dust, I have seen the end of thousands of sails. May you still be you and live up to your affection. Yi Jian Zhongqing I walked with him at first, and saw more and more people here slowly, and I was happy, because I have been here before... This time I didn't comment on the writing style or anything~ If so, just pretend you didn't see it (there may be typos, remember to remind me.) Remember. Ah, I don't have money to count, I want to subscribe to the later ones, I want to read it all at once, and then read it again and again for the second and third time as a habit~ Until I understand its profound meaning... In the book, the experience and story of every character can be moved, as if I had been him, walking through the same deer/, riding the same boat, having the same dream, deep and shallow, babbled and hummed. This story is both sweet and salty. Crying too much means loving too little. Finally, I will write it first and read it here first. Leave a deep impression. Liu Jiang and Yu Niang. Going through the dynasties, how many are like this? It has been five years since I joined the army, but no one is sad when I return home. How many long-lasting regrets remain unresolved?

1. Please rate the introduction well! Although it is not too stunning, and the writing is a bit too much, which ruins the beauty, but I can see your meticulousness and attentiveness. I like it (´∀｀)♡ 2. The writing style is very beautiful, and I especially like your description of the characters and part of the environment, which is elegant and full of charm. 3. The bad thing is that each chapter does not need to be written too much or too long. Just 3,000 words is enough. As long as you use your heart, what does the number of words in each chapter have to do with it? What readers look for is not the word count. 3.1. Some sentences are not fluent and look a bit tiring. It is not just the few sentences I pointed out. This has something to do with the number of words in each chapter. Don't be too tired and take your time. It is right to be too deliberate in seeking the best, but the problem lies in the deliberateness... 4. When writing, it is like a spirit, and the tranquility reaches far. I felt that it was relaxed after all. It was mainly the introduction in the middle paragraph and some good sentence descriptions in the article that attracted me. It was very nice and my literary skills were very good. 5. Also, I feel like some plots ruined the atmosphere between the two people! A little bit unexpected, this is a relatively difficult thing, the road is long, and you have to work hard to move forward. The wind passes without leaving a trace and spreads throughout life. When the idea comes to mind, I gain confidence in writing. Writing does not only rely on imagination, but also draws nutrients from life. Finally, let's encourage each other

The writing is very good, the writing style is good, I look forward to the update I would like to ask you, how did you get the like vote for the male protagonist and female protagonist?

Mu, heng mu, Mo Mu, heng mo lin mu. Imagination with nowhere to vent, wild imagination, breaking through time and space, are all gathered here. 😁 (The reason for the name will be known later in the novel)

There are surprises in the introduction, please compare your feelings 😁😁😁 Don't miss it if you pass by💓💕 Please compare your feelings for the characters💖 💖💖 Thank you for your support (≧∇≦) I will also follow my heart and go there💗💕 My heart❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💕💞💗💖💝💟

Yi Ci is finally out, isn't it going to be sweet next time😈

It will be on the shelves at noon today, May 29th. Please be the first to order. 😜🤭 Everyone's support is the author's motivation. 😁😁 Thank you (❁´ω`❁) Thanksgiving (≧∇≦) Bow🙇🙇

As soon as Yi Ci came out, the style of painting changed, so sweet

The writing is really good, and the plot is also very exciting. Come on, the author will become a god soon! Welcome to visit us again!

Looking at the front, the big foreshadowing is buried so deep.

I just like Xianjun, hahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

A wonderful dayIt's about to begin _∧＿∧_ ((∀｀/ ) /⌒／ /(__ノ＼_ノ (_ノ||| Awesome~~Like~~ ∧＿∧∧＿∧ (( ∀ ))∀) ) `＼ ∧ ノ /｜/｜ （＿ノ＿)_ノL＿)

The leaves are stacked, bringing good luck.

Happy Xiaomu Double Festival🌸🌸🌸🌸

Come on Twilight (๑>؂<๑)

I saw it, collected it, come on

Twilight~Merry Christmas~🎅🎅🎅

Good book collection, vote for it (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on, come on

Just like the title, I can only roll like a baby

Hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia Mu Fushu's scenes are so awesome

The writing style is exquisite, the language is fluent, and the conception is exquisite. The text is very comfortable to read and worth recalling. Come on! !

In fact, the style of the whole text is very clear and light. Taking the fragrance of pear flowers as an example, pear flowers have a slight sense of sadness. It is not only the fragrance of flowers that is extremely light, but also the connection between each character. Light is not a derogatory term. On the contrary, light fragrance comes from Qingyuan, and still water flows deep. I like this kind of lightness, maybe not like strong liquor, it is sweet and mellow when it enters the throat, but it has a long aftertaste. The first meeting between Yi Ci and Qing Yan was not spectacular, but it was beautiful. Yu Niang and Liu Jiang, although the ending is sad, it is also beautiful. This kind of beauty is like the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River in March, light and empty. When you look back, that taste will come to your mind.

Dad, I am just like the little potato downstairs, wishing you a happy holiday~~~

It's been a while since I've been here. Come over and have a visit.

It's hard, but it's easy😂The name is so random

It's another day when Boss Yi Ci beats up Mu Fushu~ This arrogant boy, I don't know what the princess likes about you, but why do you want your nose to be bruised and your face to be swollen? Picture you one, two, three, four, five? Princess: Qing Yan, please take care of him quickly, I'm afraid he will be beaten to death by Yi Ci~ Li Xiaoxiang: Yi Ci, don't fight, don't fight, let me do it~ Qing's words are serious: Fool, you don't look as good as others, you can't beat them, be good, go home and hide!

The first two chapters are a bit slow, and the third chapter is a little tighter. However, Dada's writing style is delicate and the modified language is in place. It is still worth reading. Come on Dada, ＾0＾~ There are also some minor flaws that I mentioned in the comments of the chapters. You can pay attention to them. I hope that Dada will improve his future creations~