All Heavens Pirates

Emm has quite a lot of poison points. At the beginning, Saber and Tony fought over food? Were they attacked by the navy or did they continue to attack them, regardless of severity? Akainu's first reaction when he was hit was not to elementalize, but to use an armament color plus iron? It seems to me that these two cannot be used together, right? (Maybe it's because I've read too many fans) Then there's Xiao Fugui, who has awakened his avatar, Platinum Star, and is unwilling to be a Euler? That's not to say that you won't be allowed to awaken Star Platinum, but everyone is watching Star Platinum just to see the Euler people. The result? ? You can just change the name to something else. Then, use ripples on an island to sense the ripples of other people's bodies and then go on your way? In my impression, ripples don't seem to have such a use, right? (Maybe my memory is not very good. I didn't play JOJO twice or three times. I only watched it once.) It would be better to fly to the sky and watch the road as a substitute, right? And there are some characters.... I can't stand it. The author's imagination and ideas are still very good, but the writing is broken, and the three golden chapters at the beginning have not been written well. It is still too late to revise now....

You'd better revise the first few chapters, otherwise not many people will be able to understand what you started. Of course, I'm just giving suggestions, it's up to you, the author, to decide

Although the author's creativity is very good, his ideas are also good, and he is very supportive, but the problem is that the three golden chapters are incomprehensible, which greatly affects the reading, so I quit.

Come in confused, go out confused

The last members of the pirate group, Quanwang, Ziya, and Baldhead

Why do I feel like the first five chapters are such a mess?

The writing style is a bit strange, it feels like I'm writing an outline

The subject matter is very good, but it feels too confusing. It's uncomfortable to read with limited understanding.

Can you let the readers design the characters? For example, I want the protagonist of "Shaman King" Asakura Yeyue to appear, and then the author can add it to it. Is it ok?

I took the first blood without mercy.

This book is full of the author's thoughts. It's not written according to the strength of the original version at all.

The books are not bad, but there are too few. Wait a little longer and reward again

The person riding the white horse may not be a prince, but may also be Tang Monk.

It feels like it's all messed up, it's reincarnation or something, but we already know each other directly.

I didn't understand it so I sent it back. I'll look at it again when the first few pictures are changed.

Looking for a Yingying monster who can say blessings for Everbright Sanbengzi players

The image of Tianshajie has been completely ruined by you, the Lord of Shadow Stream 🔪

It's good, why doesn't anyone see it?

Don't understand? ! I'm sorry for my low IQ. I'm really sorry.