Jackie Chan's Adventures: Lord of Shadows

If it doesn't become popular, you can just write it for yourself. I read forty chapters, half of which is the original plot, and I just watched the show from the side. The presence or absence of the protagonist does not affect the development of the plot at all. If this is foreshadowing, it is too much.

I thought my novel for newbies was just silly enough.

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Isn't the author Jia Jia Wen updated? I am also ready to invest

To be honest, the weak are afraid of changing the plot. The protagonist can protect himself now, why not find treasures and knowledge to make himself stronger?

The protagonist must grow, but about 50 chapters is enough. Otherwise, 99% of readers will be discouraged. I think 50 is the limit.

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Too diaosi, soft-hearted, extremely childish,

The protagonist is a bit childish, and many of the settings and descriptions added by the author in the book made me feel something was wrong but I couldn't tell, it just made me uncomfortable to watch.

Is it because I can't understand it or something? I feel so confused…

I asked why it looked so familiar. It turned out that I had seen it before 😅

I also wrote a fanfic of Jackie Chan's Adventures and I would like your advice

Is the protagonist lawful good or chaotic evil?

Come on, the author is very good. Don't stop updating.

To be honest, there are so many systems. I don't even understand the author. What's your purpose in letting the system come out? Or is it necessary to let the system come out? 🤔🤔

I don't like the protagonist's character or behavior. Goodbye 🙂

In terms of content and adaptation, I feel that the author has written quite well, but the protagonist is not particularly strong in existence. Personally, I can add some drama to the protagonist; because everyone knows the content of the original work, this may lead to book lovers preferring more new content that revolves around the protagonist.

Update, update, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

How to put it? I feel that the author describes too many details, just like the beginning of Balzac's "Petro Goriot". This is certainly not a shortcoming, but it is difficult to attract attention. Just a personal opinion, don't take it seriously.