I Am the Overlord in Zhetian

The writing is pretty good, please continue to pay attention and ask for more updates. Don't write the main character as impotent.

I think it would be better to write more about competing with the Son of Heaven.

Author, you can first go and read Gui Deng Qingyue's Enlightenment Starting from Covering the Sky. Other protagonists are also overlords. Although they don't have double pupils, other people's writings are better than yours. The protagonist cultivates both the ancient chaos method and the cover up the sky method, and the protagonist's overlord body is still the ten evil gods of the ancient immortals! We have also prepared soldiers to prove the Dao, soldiers to protect the Dao, and soldiers to fight! It perfectly references the settings in Perfect and Holy Void, and it doesn't make people feel that it is reasonable. The most important thing is that the logic of others is smooth throughout the book. It makes people feel that the protagonist's path is a feasible avenue, but it just happens that the protagonist just happens to create it! And author, your selling point is nothing more than a domineering body and double pupils! As well as romance and empty talk, it completely fails to describe the special features of Ba Ti and Chong Tong compared to other owners. Moreover, those who read Zhe Tian Dou Ren want to see the vast world, invincible, conquering everything, and I am the strongest! Others add emotions as a seasoning, but the main theme for you, the author, is to open a harem! Don't deny it, it's so obvious! Does it make people think that this guy is worthy of being a Taoist Emperor? There is no mention of the difficulty of attaining enlightenment at all. How can you make Gai Jiuyou, Hua Yunfei, the emperor's son, the ancient prince, these great emperors who have their hearts set on proving the truth so unbearable!

Is this a fellow Zhetian fan? Why do I feel like it's romance?

The configuration of this book is Cangtian Baxue + Double Eyes. After arriving in Beidou, he and Ye Fan will be separated and they will meet occasionally, but mainly to write more about the customs and customs of Zhe Tian, ​​making Zhe Tian more like a world of cultivators. It will not be against Ye Fan, but it will be involved with some of the original female supporting characters (not Ji Ziyue, An Miaoyi, Xiyao and others). Chance is mainly original, and there will only be a dispute with Ye Fan. And some characters will be strengthened. The author's favorite ones are Golden Winged King Zhao Peng, Hua Yunfei, Ji Haoyue, Xiang Yufei, etc. Their strength or role will be strengthened, which will not weaken the protagonist's strength, but will also speed up the process.

Currently, there is a huge market for Zhetian doujins to dominate the body genre.

Zhe Tian Zhi Eternal Sovereign is the best Zhe Tian fan. If you are dissatisfied, leave the title of the book to argue with me.

I couldn't understand what the author was writing, and the more I read, the less interested I became. I like Zhetian fan very much. With the mentality of the protagonist, not to mention the Forbidden Zone Supreme in the back, his cultivation is so exaggerated when he reaches Sendai. At that time, does the protagonist still have to care about those irrelevant people? Not to mention the great sage, the quasi-emperor would blow up the stars with his hands. This is the normal situation in Zhe Tian, ​​where gods fight and mortals suffer. Also, the protagonist's weapons are all broken, and there's no such thing as a sword. There are always irrelevant things coming out.

Really, the style is getting lower and lower. If I write a fan story, the pattern has changed, or something. Compared with water, what is the reason for covering the sky? Pattern, are you writing an adventure in the countryside? When others are fighting against the same level, you use your special physique to beat ordinary people. Phew, I laughed. Haha, there are countless opportunities. If you don't try, you can still be so good if you join a sect. People who have the backing will have to fight for opportunities. You are still bullying the children with your domineering body. I'm just complaining┐('~`；)┌

Why use jade as a melee weapon? Why do you think jade is more suitable for making seals? 🙂 Metal-based melee weapons are better

The author's writing of Zhe Tian as a Liaozhai is also a talent. If you are a eunuch, writing about the Yang God who dreams about the divine machine is very suitable for your style of writing. I don't mean to be sarcastic, I just think that you write such a grand and majestic novel as Zhe Tian. It's not suitable to say that it's not right. There's nothing wrong with writing fan fiction and writing different stories, but it's also about choosing what's suitable for you. It's always weird to force Zhe Tian to be written in a Liao Zhai style 😅😅😅

The double pupil can crush all of Zhetian's physique, and the double pupil can kill the giant of the Immortal King. It's a pity that Shi Yi sacrificed himself for Shi Hao. I don't know if Chongtong can kill the Immortal Emperor.

In a world like Zhetian, don't use urban memes or other inappropriate memes. It's very funny.

After reading thirty or forty chapters, let me talk about the reasons for my poor grades. This is my personal opinion. The first is the system. Generally, system books will briefly introduce the functions of the system in the first few chapters. The description of the system in this book is too unclear. The protagonist is given a domineering body at the beginning, and later on he is given skills and weapon materials. The rest is not shown. As a system text, this is very bad. There does not have to be many appearances, but it must be written clearly. Then there is the system summoning thing. I don't know what other people think. I personally don't like other world systems to get involved when writing fan fiction, because no matter which one you write is strong or weak, some people will not like it. I have seen relatively few of them so far, only the Sharingan, and later it is said that there will be double pupils. The things in the perfect world are okay. After all, the Perfect Holy Ruins of Zhetian is the same world, and other systems are better. Then there is the plot. It doesn't matter whether it follows the original plot or not. As long as it is interesting and interesting, as long as it is involved in some important plots, it will be fine. Then the biggest drawback is the women. After reading more than 30 chapters, several women have appeared. Although they don't look like the heroines, they appear a bit ambiguous and look quite awkward. The one with the river god is a group of monsters. All the ugly ones are killed, leaving only one good-looking one. Finally, it's fan fiction, which is relatively niche to begin with, so you should anticipate it before starting the book. My own opinion, if you don't like it just pretend you didn't see it 😁

It would be great to have a book about covering the sky. Come on! But I hope that the summoning thing will be closer to the fantasy novels like Zhetian. Even if it is summoning some things from the heavens, don't write too disgusting plots such as summoning martial arts, like the iron cloth shirt with 18 palms of subduing the dragon is really disgusting.

By the way, I wonder if the author has seen Zhetian. In the original book, after all the ancient tribes woke up, only one or two saint-level beings appeared in Beidou. It seemed that there was King Jiang and an old turtle. When we arrived at the author's place, there were several great saints from the Holy Land in the Tomb of the Blue Emperor. When Lian Ji Haoyue went to grab the demon emperor's soldiers, there were saints guarding him. She was really drunk. How do you explain it? Do you mean that this is the secret of the Holy Land and cannot be revealed easily? The human race was oppressed by the ancient tribe and could not be freed. If Xia Jiuyou and the Black Emperor hadn't gone to ring the Bell of No Beginning and urged the Gods List to create "There is no saint in the world", the human race in Beidou would have been raised as blood food. Finally, a Qingdi Tomb was opened?

The wunao water plot started when I left Ye Fan to go to Ma Yun's cave. First, the protagonist is very qualified, and then he is brought to the cave by Ma Yun. Then the brainless part-timer starts to trouble the protagonist, giant poison, and a mere disciple dares to mess with the genius recruited by the elder himself (as mentioned before, the protagonist has good qualifications, and he is rushed to accept it). Originally, the author of the first chapter said that he should not copy the original plot and write his own. I thought it was very good, but in the end, you wrote a brainless novel. Farewell!

If you want to draw a lottery, one hegemonic bloodline is enough. Sharingan is useless. With the hegemony of hegemony, Sharingan or other bloodlines will definitely be swallowed up by hegemony. However, when the time comes, I feel that the bloodline will become mixed, which is not conducive to the future. There are also talents and skills. I feel that it is better for the protagonist to cultivate himself. What the system instills in him is not as good as what he cultivates bit by bit. I feel that the system can extract some cultivation techniques, magic weapons, magical materials, etc. 😁😁😁 Of course, these are just some of my personal suggestions.

Several of the characters I wrote have no feelings. Bai Weiyang is a burden. What other ghostly descriptions are there? The other women also didn't feel involved in what they were saying and ruined the atmosphere! Just like when the protagonist was about to compete in ancient times, the girl he had just met suddenly said "Come on!" "Come on" is now common sense and means to charge forward with full power! What did they say in ancient times? Come on! You came from time travel! Just a metaphor!

Found a realm comparison chart about the Zhetian Trilogy

I found that the author actually copied this book, and I had seen the contents in another book. Don't ask me what that book is, just ask "Xinhua Dictionary"