Sand Sculpture Group Friends in the World

[Book Review] The writing is solid, and the characterization is very precise and full [Advantages] The writing is excellent, the settings are complete, the plot and characters are novel and interesting, and the sense of substitution is strong [Disadvantages] The main plot line is not prominent enough, and the conflicts are not enough. The IQ of the system is a mainstream poisonous point, so you can reconsider it. [Evaluation] B [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you like it, please add more.

The beginning was good, but I was really confused at the inn. I checked repeatedly to see if I had missed a chapter. The plot was too confusing. One second, Mo Diantian and the others were chatting with Fu Hua in the temple, and the next second, they were fighting with the protagonist... And Xingbu Ji was also trapped inexplicably. Although the settings such as Gu Xiaoya Lingpo's shadow week were good ideas, the author couldn't control the headaches that gave me, and the early stages were very discouraging. Let me give you some suggestions by the way. 1. One or two group members in the martial arts world are enough. After all, they are not very popular, and other chat group novels also feature these people. 2. It's not that exciting. The part where the inn was knocked on the door was very annoying. 3. The description of the combat part needs to be strengthened, and the most important thing is smoothness. 4. The current number of group members is just right. If you want to add new group members, I hope there will be something new. Generally speaking, I am quite optimistic about this book, and there is nothing too unacceptable about it. But if it still makes people feel headache and angry after reading it, I can only say goodbye with regret.

Very good, come on! Wu Haoliu, stick with it and become an author!

Everything was pretty good in the beginning. Although it was a cheat at the beginning, the IQs of all the characters were online. It was good that I didn't forcibly lower my IQ and was fooled, but when I got to the inn, how should I put it, wouldn't it be good to happily cook and open an inn? If a fool comes up, I'll beat him up. It's hard to watch, and I'm still doing this after several chapters. It makes me want to give up the book. I'm here to watch the daily routine of sand sculptures, not long-form fights 😅

It was fine in front, but it was too chaotic when we arrived at the inn.

Suddenly I got stuck on the name of the dish...😂 I can only ask for your help |•'-'•)و✧You all know some good dish names, please refer to your opinions. You can't even have a menu, right? (Looking at the sky)_(:з∠)_

After arriving at the inn, I became more and more confused 😵😵😵

In modern society, practicing the method of covering the sky is not courting death. You don't even have the resources to practice it. The method of covering the sky does not cultivate spiritual energy and uses source ores to practice. It is not a universal cultivation method. The protagonist has no resources and relies on deception

In fact, when the chat group system was first established, it was mainly for daily use. For example, a bunch of characters from the daily world are chatting and spanking, or the game world is conquering the game together. I don't know when it changed. The group leader became more and more arrogant and began to preach that he could predict the future and be omnipotent. The IQ of the group members also dropped drastically.

I looked confused, it was too confusing.

The author writes well, but it feels very depressing, because as a reader, I can't understand it from a God's perspective. Even if the protagonist has a chat group, he is like a puppet being held in someone else's hands. Everything is blurry... The layout is too big (?) And I don't have the patience to find it!

Emmmm, does anyone want a supporting role? 😂I don't have enough imagination on my own, so I need to brainstorm ideas. Probably, these are the only elements needed. As long as it's not too buggy and difficult to write, it's fine. [Name]: [Gender]: [Ability/Cheap Finger]: [Item]: [World Preference]: (This refers to what type of world you want to appear in. If it is not filled in or is not in the follow-up outline, it will default to the main world) If appearance is used, the expression of the ability may be appropriately modified based on the rationality of the plot. ps1: This is for you to set your own characters, not for me to find group members. ps2: If you specify the xx world, since it is not in the outline, if it is used, most characters will default to the main world.

Author, I have a small suggestion for you. Don't recruit too many people at once, otherwise it will easily collapse. After all, characters are difficult to write and grasp! I hope you, the author, can work hard and update more! 😁😁😁 (If you think what I said is bad, please scold me lightly)

The author's system is a bit low, and it seems that he jumped directly from Explosive Star to Diversity. What about the intermediate levels? If you hit the mainland at level 7 and level 8, you will be able to move the world. The span is huge.

Fu Hua? Could it be that the author has played Honkai Impact 3?

The strength is too vague. How many levels does Fu Hua have? The second collapse was an incomplete state. Fu Hua opened the Taixu Sword God and defeated Xilin in seconds. Xilin at that time was real and could leverage the continental energy level. If he didn't waste it, he could wash the surface of the earth in space.