Candle of Light

It is still necessary to carefully consider the design, sense of substitution, freshness, fun, and even rhythm. And don't write too poisonously. It's acceptable if the holes are not filled. Try not to touch the poisonous points, such as the harem. Other problems such as inconsistency, missing words, inadequate character characterization, unnutritious dialogue, and insufficient emotion are all trivial matters. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I feel a little bit baffled, and it's not even fun yet.

The writing is really good, and then I just want to work hard and sign the contract as soon as possible!

After reading the introduction, I was thinking, wouldn't it be appropriate for the protagonist to be raped?

Come on＾0＾~, occupy the front row, accepted, I wish you can become a god soon, hope to visit again, collect and comment

Whether it looks good or not, let's put it aside. The introduction of the book is not correct.

The sudden flirting made people uncomfortable, especially the Jinyiwei woman. . Learning is very stiff.

How inexplicable! Does the protagonist have to fall in love with the last person he sees? Just because he is a groom, why should a girl who already has a lover like him, and if she falls in love with him, he has to force her to whitewash her innocence? I'm convinced...

Collected, the flame of the end came to say hello

Already collected. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. If you have nothing to do, you can read my book. I hope you can give me some opinions after reading the comment area. Work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

Traveling through time will destroy Ming and Hou Jin! In the early stage, just open the cheat cheating uprising!

Isn't time traveling just for fun? Depressed

How to say it? It feels bland, without any passion, and there aren't enough points of conflict. What's the point of writing?

It's a bit watery. After the first chapter, I didn't see the development of the storyline.