Douluo's Dzi Bead Douluo

I think that when writing about the useless martial spirit, I should write about the butchering knife martial spirit. It is useless at a glance, but the result is time-related, and the years are like the butchering knife.

The protagonist must not worship the master as his teacher. Thank you. Tang San can worship the protagonist. Can you not? Thank you, brother.

Read a novel, there are so many things going on. How others write it is nonsense.

Very well written! As long as it's not too exaggerated and the slow spots are fine, it'll be fine. If today's recommendation ticket is gone, I'll give it to you tomorrow! Come on, author

Is Wuhun a Dzi bead transformed into a Dzi bead?

I really like this article written by the author. After reading the latest chapter, I can feel that it is not simply attached to the original plot. The character settings are all flawless, including the depiction of some personalities. The recommendation vote is for Dada. I hope I can maintain the style and continue to work hard.

Author, I have read a lot of Douluo fics, and many of them were raised by Jack, or were Jack's grandsons, and none of them remembered Jack when they grew up 😅😅🤫. Even if they don't even remember the Holy Soul Village, wouldn't this be the same for you? ? ?

Author, can you please open another timeline? There are so many blank timelines in Douluo. We have to grow together. Is that okay?

Why do I always feel that Tang San in this book is not poisonous, but more like a real child🤫

The author can also write that the protagonist goes to Lan Ba ​​Advanced Soul Master Academy! Anyway, the two protagonists will be able to be in the same college later, and it will be easier to arrange a girl for the protagonist! Anyway, it's hard to write about the beauty in Seven Monsters and how to arrange an emotional scene for the protagonist, so you might as well arrange one yourself. Besides, the female protagonists in Seven Monsters are also hard to follow. Zhu Zhuqing is Dai Mubai's fiancée, Xiao Wu is close to Tang San, and Ning Rongrong started out as a princess with many illnesses. You might as well write a heroine yourself!

Can the beads become like Yuan Tao's Jiulongzi under one person?

If you are writing a book for the first time, be sure not to have a harem, as it is easy to collapse 😂 If you have a single heroine, you can write it or not, as long as you can grasp it well (it is recommended to create an original heroine, not the original heroine, because there are too many people writing original heroines) 🤣

I read the introduction. Did Tenchu ​​become Tianzhu?

Brother, you are too glassy to write a book. There are good reviews and bad reviews, this is normal, even great people will be criticized. If you can't stand it at all, I suggest you close it. If you are starting a new book and end up in the palace because of readers, then your career as a writer will be like that. Look at the monthly votes people give you, invest, and waste other people's money. Although saying this is a bit of a moral kidnapping, people support you. Forget it, let's not talk about it.

Vote every day, more updates are needed😁😁

It felt like Xiao Wu came here just for Tang San. It felt wrong.

It was recommended in the light novel section, but it's actually finished? ? ?

Come on, author! This work is the most innocuous Douluo fan I have ever seen... Successfully avoided the invincible system flow, was born with full soul power, dismantled the original cp, followed the protagonist to death, licked the master and worshiped him as his teacher, the girl licked the protagonist without thinking and started a harem, and the girl agreed with her body after the hero saved the beauty... Instead, he started a new main line with himself as the main line, the original main line As a supplement, it also deepens the character and the village chief's role... I personally think that the Wuhun Palace was misled in the hands of Bibi Dong. The reason is that Yu Xiaogang and Qianxunji have to bear a certain responsibility. The last Pope Qianxunji's pursuit of A Yin is objectively understandable. It's just about killing soul beasts. Don't most Douluo soul masters' soul rings come from killing soul beasts? Even the gold coins that civilians get after testing their martial souls and becoming soul masters are all done by the Spirit Hall. What did the two empires and various families and sects do for the civilians? I have a small suggestion, I hope that Wuhun Palace will be clean in the later stage 😁 and establish a third faction to attract firepower for Wuhun Palace... Come on, author 👍

I'm on the street 🙂

What the hell, he actually entered the palace. . . . .

Why is there only one role?

Is the author no longer updating? I still want to see it, can I send it privately?

The author is great, borrowing the building to promote a new book, Jade Tiancheng of Douluo Dalu, If you don't like it, please delete it

Master Licking, I'm convinced by Tang San, okay?

I think it would be nice if the male protagonist was gay. Tang San is attacked by the male protagonist.

After seeing what the author said, I really respect his thoughts. Actually, I have some thoughts about the characters that I want to share. Judging from the first fifty chapters, the overall idea is to develop a separate plot without following the plot line. Shrek exists as an auxiliary, and there may be intersections in the future. But there are also some problems now that the characters are not three-dimensional enough. For example, in the character creation of Baili and others, there is no unique character point that can make a solid impression. It doesn't mean that it has to be like Douluo, Ma Hongjun's martial arts side effects, Xiao Ao's sausages and the like. Like the Sugar Bean Soul Master, the soul curse is actually quite interesting, but the character is not three-dimensional enough. It may be that it does not occupy a major position in the subsequent development of the work. But it should also be noted that when the text content reaches the current part, the subsequent plot should start to be extended to ensure continuity. The setting of Yin Zong is also very interesting, and you can do some more stretching or foreshadowing. In particular, it seems that it is not difficult to explain why supporting characters in the original book like Jiu Xin Begonia Ye Lingling can enter the Royal Academy in an environment like the Yin Sect. The continuity of the plot is worth looking forward to. If possible, I still hope that the author can persevere and continue writing. If you really want to retain your love for Douluo, you also hope to see the author's new works in the future😳