The Peerless Domineering and Cold Emperor, Get Out of Here!

The Ghostly Emperor——Di Lingye! Acting vigorously and unswervingly. Bloodthirsty, ruthless, and absolutely doting on my wife! Loving you is a lifelong journey that I will embark on. ——Di Lingye

Character descriptions need to be strengthened. The language of descriptions and narratives should not be too colloquial or naive. The paragraphs are actually well connected and not stiff, which is quite acceptable. However, I personally don't like a lot of stories that set a lot of realms at once. It feels very messy and has no sense of substitution. It is very important to grasp the rhythm and shape the world view well. Also, the title and introduction of the book are quite discouraging. If they don't have a fan base, many old white readers will no longer like to read this kind of article that feels quite ancient from the title. At least attract readers to read the first chapter, big brother, come on

Great book, collected👍👍👍

Well written, wonderfully written