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In fact, I have struggled with this issue myself for a long time, and many people have suggested that I separate the paragraphs more, preferably one sentence at a time, which is the so-called "telegraphic style". Frankly speaking, it's not like I haven't tried to write an article like that before, and it's not the first time I've picked up a pen to write a novel. I think I have some little thoughts about segmentation. I don't know if that's right, but that's what I think in my heart. The most famous author of "telegraph style" in China should be Mr. Gu Long, and his unique writing style and language charm have made him a top martial arts novelist and received very high praise. As a fan of Mr. Gu Long, I also tried to imitate him. Even when I came to Qidian for the first time, I decisively chose the traditional martial arts category and wrote a martial arts novel that I thought was okay at the time, but now seems to be full of mistakes. (The book is called "Blood Rain and Misty", and you can still see it at the starting point. It's not that I want to advertise or anything, I just want to prove that I have written like that and divided it into paragraphs like that.) The use of telegraph style for online articles seems to have become a default "unspoken rule", and even books that are not divided like that may not even have a chance to be signed (it seems that my hope is very slim). The reason for adopting telegraph format is to adapt to reading on mobile phones. The best result is that readers can see all the content clearly at a glance. It is undeniable that the benefits of such segmentation are obvious, and for the author, such segmentation is also a reasonable way to "water down the number of pages". A person who writes two thousand words can probably write about 12 to 13 pages (the word count defaults to size 18). Prompted by many advantages, more and more authors have adopted this segmentation method, and readers have also defaulted to this method - after all, it seems easier and more convenient. After summarizing the many advantages of the "telegraph style" style, I decisively gave up on that method, and instead chose a very unpleasant segmentation method - a segmentation that seemed so random that it couldn't be more random. Some paragraphs are so long that you may have to turn three pages to read them on a mobile phone screen, and some may only have one word per paragraph. It can be said that we are at two extremes. Many people ask me, why do we have to segment it so much? I have only one answer - that is, I hope that the articles I write are divided into paragraphs according to the needs of plot points, rather than splitting complete sentences and paragraphs to suit a so-called "certain style." In other words, the number of pages in order to get rid of the water. I hope to do my best to write a good story so that all the words go to where they should be. The essence of novels is to tell stories. As a writer, your responsibility is to do your best to tell a good story. I don't know how my story went, but I know that I tried my best to make it look the best and most appropriate in my mind. Even if it may not be so lovable, even if it may not be signed, even if many people open it and then close it in a hurry. Maybe I am stubborn, but young people have to be stubborn once in their lives. Even if no one reads it, I will still finish it. Maybe many people will say, wouldn't it be good for you to follow the popular trend and write two cool articles? Wouldn't it be nice to write two books that require no brainer and make money at the same time? All I can say is that it was great, but it wasn't what I wanted and it wasn't the story I wanted to tell. Finally, I hope that every author can meet his soulmate, and I hope that every reader can meet his or her favorite story.

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Collection support, great support.

Damn, can you divide the paragraphs into more paragraphs? Seeing the dense words makes my eyes a little uncomfortable. 😭Of course, your writing is very good. Come on💪.

I finished reading the two chapters in one go😂 Looking forward to the update

Dear, your writing style is very good, but some paragraphs are too long, which can easily affect reading!

The author's writing is fluent, and the structure also shows the style of a large-scale production. It brings us that magnificent era from a novel perspective. The description of the language is vivid and literary. The characters created are flesh-and-blood, rather than label-like, and each of their choices is driven by social reasons and their own personalities. The writing style is delicate and exquisite, comfortable to read, and suitable for publication. (It brings me back to the feeling of reading real literary works) I really like the author's introduction. When I saw the original English sentence of the first sentence of A Tale of Two Cities, I searched for the Chinese translation. I liked this sentence so much. It's very relevant. The author also wrote about the "best" and "worst" eras. Thank you very much! I look forward to the author bringing a different story, looking forward to their ups and downs of life and magnificent destiny in that era.

The writing is very good (better than mine), and the arrangement of meaningful details enhances the overall atmosphere. This is a book that requires people to calm down and read it carefully. Perhaps the segmentation problem affects the look and feel of reading on mobile phones, but I still think this is a very good book. It may be different from the popular style and rhythm of online articles, but it is worth reading.

This is a thoughtful work, a somewhat heavy work. The author's description of the plot is spot-on, and the psychological activities are even more empathetic. Ordinary people live as tenaciously as weeds, facing all kinds of injustices in life. Yet he didn't give up. From the bottom of my heart, I hope the fate of the protagonist will be better in the future. One final word, it is difficult to read in paragraphs.

The writing style is smooth and delicate, the details are very realistic, the characters are very realistic, and the various descriptions and plots can be traced in reality. I felt like I was watching a living real-life story, and I instantly traveled through time and space and returned to that era. The kindness, simplicity, sincerity, philistineness, greed and other characteristics of a group of little people are all reflected. Every character in it is very real, with all kinds of sentient beings, good and evil intertwined. Even the vendors selling Yangchun noodles on the street and the travelers in the passenger cars have their own characteristics. This is not like today's fast-paced entertainment products, but more like literary works.

Did the author really stop writing? What a pity 😢 Be sure to tell me when you open a new book next time. Can you give us a preview of what genre your next book will be?

Don't give up. Come on sister

The writing style is very smooth, the storyline is real and can arouse resonance, and the description is also very sophisticated. It feels like reading an article in a physical book haha, good review 🌹 but I suggest you pay attention to dividing the paragraphs into paragraphs and try not to have a whole page full of words. Come on, update, I look forward to you~

Keep your claws, the writing is calm, thought-provoking, and meaningful. I'm following you.

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Already collected, great support, hope to visit again

Boss, don't go away.

This is the best of times and the worst of times. We have nothing, but we move forward bravely.