Zhuge Dali's Cheating Boyfriend

? ? ? I've been reading it for a while, but this book is actually a eunuch? ? ? This book's performance is not bad compared with other new books of the same period, and it is the best among Aiwu. Are you giving up now? Love Five is over, and there is indeed a lot less attention from new book fans. Then you don't care about us book friends who reward you and accompany you all the time? No matter who you are, no matter what book it is, it is impossible to be praised by others all the time. Even if "The Lord of Mysteries" is as popular as it is, there are still people who don't like it, because just two people criticize you for a few words, and you give up on yourself?        ，，，，， Then you said you were going to open a new book? ? ? Brother, didn't you say that coding until two or three o'clock is exhausting? ? ? Let me tell you, even if you open a new book, some people will still criticize you for poor writing, and without the gust of wind of Aiwu, your new book will be even worse. Of course, I also hope that you can stand out among thousands of new books and become a great master. I think back then I made some suggestions for this book and wrote a long article to praise you for your good writing. When I found out that other books had plagiarized this book, I went to the book review section to defend your rights. But now, I got the news that you don't want to update this book anymore. This book is a eunuch. Author, even if you open a new book, I will never read it again. Thank you for writing this book. But goodbye, and best of luck to you.

Brother, reading your novel made me feel emotional. 🙂

To be honest, the author's grasp of character creation and language is really great. There have been many fan novels about Dali since the release of Love 4, but this one is the most vivid and beautiful one. Although there are problems with the arrangement of the plot, the flaws are not concealed. This is an excellent fan novel. The author said that he regrets writing this subject, but I am lucky that you still wrote it. This gives a new story and sweetness to the love apartment in my heart. Thank you, cheers

This is one of the best love-apartment fanfics I have read. As a reader, if you don't know how to write a book, I won't give you any suggestions. I just hope that the character of Dali will not collapse. After all, the character is what makes this character likeable. Come on, author.

Before Liu Jing met Zhuge Dali's mother, I always thought that Liu Jing might have had something with Zhuge Dasheng. First, Liu Jing has two ex-girlfriends. The first one is Huang Yao. The second one is not introduced by the author, but she is said to be a mature and rational sister. Zhuge Sage is a lawyer, which fits this characteristic very well. Second, Zhuge Dasheng lamented in Chapter 34, "I can live a good life without you." Please note that this is not necessarily Zhuge Dali's father. It is more like Zhuge Dasheng saying that he does not include Dali, so he may not be Dali's father. 😁 Hehe, to make everyone happy, the main reason is to let the author update quickly to fill in the pitfalls!

It's a very good book. Keep it up. I wish you will sign up soon.

Let me read the book you recommended. To be honest, what he wrote is not as good as yours. To read his little novel, I might as well watch TV. It has no content at all. In fact, I feel that you are at a disadvantage because you write fan fiction, but it is divorced from the content of the TV series. So your content is really well written, but the results are worse than the fanfics that are written according to the plot of the TV series, because they will have a group of TV series fans who will follow it, even if the writing is like saliva, So actually I feel that you can actually write it with originality and abandon the character design of the love apartment. In fact, the novels that are really popular are all original, including content, characters, etc., And in fact, most people will not pursue fan fiction unless they like this TV series.

Come on, come on Love it

The original plot is very good, and the character of the male protagonist is also very good, which deserves recognition, but to be honest, I feel that the character of Dali is not right... Dali should not be the kind of normal girl in love. She is quite slow about emotions and has an absolutely rational feeling. It does not mean that she cannot be shy, but her shyness in the book is too ordinary... Not so ordinary as Zhuge Dali, so she is no different from the Mary Sue heroine in other romance novels, and it does not fit with the character. My personal opinion is that I hope this book will get better and better. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

It's my personal feeling! Chen Nuo can elaborate a little more. As the boss of a listed company, the protagonist can still be outside for six years without absolute controlling rights. When he comes back, the company will be stable. This secretary is absolutely loyal. Don't forget that the boss of a listed company has not been seen for six years. If it takes more than a year, the stock will decline and the directors will make a fuss. The protagonist has been away for so many years. To be honest, Chen Nuo's value has been proven. In this regard, Chen Nuo can also be regarded as a friend! After all, even if you are the author's friend, you can't guarantee that he won't be moved if you put tens of billions in front of him, right? So while Chen Nuo's character remains unchanged, you can change the way you get along with the protagonist, or if your writing is good enough, you can highlight Chen Nuo's difficulties. Although he is a secretary, he has helped you accomplish so much, just like Pepper and Tony. Try not to make the characters so simple and crude. If you are sure, you can try to add a conversation between two people to prove their friendship in turn. Readers will not like the current state. Personal suggestion, the above!

Collect and recommend this chapter to talk about it, etc., Give me more motivation. Now I update it about twice a day, and one chapter is about 3,000. In fact, my coding speed is quite fast. The results are pretty good. The popularity may have something to do with it. I thought someone was collecting it and it scared me. I hope everyone likes it.

，， The consequence of incorporating lines directly into the novel is that there are too many dialogues between the characters, making the whole article look like a running account. But the author's original plot of this book is eye-catching. The overall reading is very smooth, and it still retains the charm of a love apartment, which surprised me. This kind of re-arrangement and re-creation of the character stories that everyone is familiar with (those who read this book should have read Love Apartment) is a very difficult but necessary thing. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will definitely support you. 😁😁✊✊

Seeing it now, it is undeniable that, as the male protagonist said, I seemed to be able to feel the will of the whole world, asking me to get close to that girl. Of course, the male protagonist did not refuse, but tried to accept it. No matter what Hu Yifei said, she is Hu Yifei's number one! Not only Hu Yifei's second best, but also the charm displayed by Zhuge Dali himself will make the male protagonist feel that she is different from other girls. To be fair, there are many girls who are more beautiful than Zhuge Dali and have good figures. Needless to say, why many people still like her is probably because she has light in her eyes, a vast starry sky, and a sea of ​​stars. It is a paradise that the male protagonist has never seen. She is rational, she is sensible, and now, Zhuge Dali is not a straight woman in movies, but a straight woman of steel. She will be jealous, but her jealousy should not be unreasonable. It is her own way of jealousy, just like when she acts coquettishly, it is unique to her. So the male protagonist said, I am testing, I will pamper you to the sky, but Zhuge Dali will not go too far. She knew what she had to do, and it was just right, just like being a human being, and it was pleasing. You should be emotionally attracted to the male protagonist. Sweet love, when the relationship is confirmed. This is when Zhuge Dali's plan to capture was successful.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​The original characters of this book are actually very well drawn. To be honest, I can't tell that it is a novice novel at all. I don't know if the author has written novels or something. The writing style is very good. At least I feel comfortable reading it. After reading novels for so many years, I can still tell which novels can only be read roughly and which novels should be slow. Read slowly and carefully, because only those who can withstand the taste will read slowly, and if the subject matter is interesting but the writing is not good, you can only read it roughly, otherwise it will be too confusing. This is the way I read novels. When I read novels, no matter whether I am a novice or not, as long as the subject matter attracts me, I will definitely read it until I can't stand it I actually quite like this book, but I also understand that I can't continue writing it. This is not the kind of book you want to write. This is inconsistent with your original intention. How can it be written in the right way? Although I have never written a novel, I have thought in my mind that writing a novel should be a story that I wholeheartedly devote myself to, think about and be willing to write, so that I can write a good story, so I support the author to restart the original work The purpose of life is to reduce regrets. I believe that your writing will succeed sooner or later. Don't seek success or fame, just seek no regrets.

In fact, I jumped out of the love apartment. If you only write about the people and things about the love apartment, you won't be able to write about it for long. Two ex-girlfriends, one Chen Nuo, and the unspeakable bond with Hu Yifei brought the book to life and escaped the dead end of the original love apartment. Adding something of their own to the character cores of Zhuge Dali and Hu Yifei makes people feel brighter. Some people complain that the author writes romance, which does not exist. If you look at the title of the book and the character of the male protagonist, you will know that the female protagonist is strong from the beginning to the end. Doesn't writing about the emotions of the supporting characters also enrich the image of the male protagonist? Moreover, it is written that some people even came up with the idea of ​​​​letting the male protagonist have a harem. The portrayal of the supporting characters is not bad. To sum up, there are two roads in the forest, and this book just chooses a road not often taken. People who come here purely for Love Apartment and Zhuge Dali may not like it, but some people who don't usually read fanfiction and accidentally click in will find the highlights of this book. I don't know how this book will end, but I will still praise it for being well written.

I'll open a post to explain, a little bit of character spoiler, and it has nothing to do with the plot. In fact, there is a gap between Dali in the article and Zhang Wei's. This gap comes from the personality gap between Zhang Wei and the protagonist. One is Dali's chosen intern boyfriend. At best, he is very rational, but after screening, he is actually very casual, as if Zhang Wei just passed the exam and has no emotion. The protagonist's character is Dali's ideal goal, just like the theme of the first volume, the encounter between two mountains. Zhuge Dali is also a human being, and he will fall in love at first sight. The heartbeat at the beginning is just a normal human reaction, and Dali is not a normal person. Her special handling method and way of treating love will be reflected later, which is worth looking forward to. Nowadays, boys feel that falling in love is too tiring. It is rare for a girl to be as proactive and independent as Dali, with a rational and good outlook on life. So don't worry, the heroine will be Dali who is more worthy of liking, she just has a little more heartbeat.

The original plot also fits the characters, awesome.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​            Off out of my mind, there are some small parts of the plot that are a bit unreasonable, and the traces of artistic processing are a bit heavy. It's just a little unnatural. But it does look good, and the minor flaws do not affect the brilliance of this book at all. What makes this book different from other iPartment fans is that the protagonist's personal personality is very full and the process of integrating into the apartment is very smooth. And it does not feel limited to the framework of an apartment at all, but expands into the daily lives of various characters, breaking away from the limitations of TV series, and satisfying readers' desire to understand more different aspects of each character's life. Moreover, the author's writing skills are still very good, making it very comfortable to read.       ，，，，，， 😜😜😜Finally, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

If you have ideas, come on, I'll vote for you and keep up with the new ones.

Dear author, I would like to ask why the new book has been removed from the shelves after being constantly rewritten?

Basically, you just don't want to change it anymore, right? That's all you have for a new book? To be honest, you are just playing, not really writing a novel. Whether it is fan fiction or original fiction, as long as you have the support of readers, you should continue writing it, so that you can live up to your original intention of writing this book. You should be lucky that at least your readers do not complain about your novel, but support you and hope that you will continue writing it. I hope you can find your original intention.

Since the airing of Ai Wu, the character Zhuge Dali has been loved by many people, and there are many fan fictions. I don't know why, but after watching Ai Wu, I feel very reluctant to let go of Ai Wu, or the character of Zhuge Dali. I even watched another TV series starring her. But I suddenly discovered that I just like the character Zhuge Dali. Everyone of us wants to have a significant other like Zhuge Dali. This is why Zhuge Dali's fan fiction is so popular, but we can only fantasize and immerse ourselves in the novel. The character of Zhuge Dalu is fictional after all. This book touched me a lot. Even if there is someone like her in reality, I am self-aware, so while we are reading the book, we should also look at ourselves and see if we should work hard. May you always be kind and clear.

I hope to continue writing. It doesn't matter if it's not this book. I've been reading online articles for a while. Your book is really good. Come on! ps: If you want to change your vest, please tell me. I must read it when I open a new book 😃

Is it over so soon? Just over a hundred chapters?

So far in this book, the four female characters around the protagonist have basically appeared. Looking at it, I feel a little interesting. This is simply a big meeting of the descendants of Ji Han! Liu Jing (after Emperor Zhaolie) Zhuge Dali (after Wuxiang Hou) Huang Yao (after Gang Hou) As for Chen Nuo and her sister, these are the two Chens of Ji Han (Chen Dao, Chen Shi) This book should be renamed Make "Stories that have to be told between Liu Bei's descendants and Zhuge Liang, Huang Zhong and Chen" 🤭🤭🤭 Following this idea, it's great! Huang Zhong, a veteran general in Jingzhou, according to Liu Bei's foundation, Huang Zhong is also the person who accompanies him to conquer the world. (The sword that beheaded Xiahou was given by Lao Liu, and Lao Liu got the sword very early, but gave it to Lao Huang, hehehe) And just when Liu Bei became famous, Huang Zhong died of illness and had no descendants (emphasis added) Chen Dao stayed by Liu Bei's side throughout his life, and never left regardless of his official position. Chen Shi was the general who Liu Bei regained when he entered Shu (when Liu Jing was on his way to success in life). He once defeated Xiahou in Hanzhong and was one of the few generals during the Zhuge Liang and Jiang Wei periods. Tsk, tsk, tsk, look at it carefully, it's scary to think about it! 🤭🤭🤭{"NickName":"wbsgw","UserId":342333338}

Author, how about you write an entertainment article about a dog with a single female protagonist? I will give you all the money 😏😏😏😏

In fact, everything is okay, except that the plot control is not good enough and the subject matter is not good. Because everything in fan fiction is basically fixed, it is really difficult to recast an image that has been fixed in everyone's minds. Otherwise, why do so many people in the entertainment industry want to transform, change their persona, and become more popular, but the result is basically nothing. There are simply not many people who can actually do it.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Actually I quite like this book. But there are no perfect people in the world. Those perfect people only exist in fiction and are not real. But this male protagonist has some shortcomings, which is pretty good? Because there really are no perfect people in the world. Some are just people who work hard to pursue life.

Just by reading the title of the book, I knew I wouldn't be able to go far.