Film and Television Adventure System

I don't really want to post a post, but I think you should think about the length of The Sword, How to write a good plot, a time travel novel, In fact, it is an alternative version of a fan, It is not easy to be outstanding, and it is very easy to see if it is not outstanding, Just like the plot in The Sword, it basically cannot be said to be intact! But you have written down most of the dialogue plots of the Liangjian TV series intact. If you are an author who makes money from novels, it is better not to use this writing method. It will not improve your writing level. I hope my suggestions are useful to you, Hide it I'm really poor and look down on novels, I'm sorry that I've read pirated copies and come here to give you opinions. So embarrassing

Is the plot of this part of "Bright Sword" okay?

Is the protagonist in God of Gamblers inactive? His character is like a teleprompter.

Regarding the recent low ratings in the comment area (basically 1 star), Lao Wang would like to say that this book has its own writing plan, and Lao Wang Huiyou's own insistence on the emotional line experienced by the protagonist, especially the relationship between men and women. Since it is infinite time travel, the protagonist will definitely experience love between a man and a woman when he enters the world of film and television works, and definitely more than once. Readers who think the protagonist is a scumbag will have nothing to say if they abandon the book. For some readers who say that the protagonist robbed Li Yunlong's wife, Lao Wang just wants to say that this kind of plot is not unable to withstand scrutiny. He can only say that Lao Wang wrote it as logically and rationally as possible. He was mentally prepared when he wrote it like this. He believes that Lao Wang's writing style is immature and he is not good at writing emotional dramas. Lao Wang accepts this with an open mind. Lao Wang himself thinks so. However, Lao Wang cannot stop writing emotional dramas just because he is not good at writing emotional dramas. This is a necessary part of plot development, so Lao Wang will work hard to improve his writing skills and strive to write emotional dramas better and better in the future. There are also quite a few people who talk about Lao Wang Shui's word count, especially the complete "Seventy-two Shaolin Skills" listed in Chapter 8. Lao Wang specifically stated that it is not Shui's word count, but popular science! This book has been loved by many readers so far. Lao Wang is very grateful to the readers who support me. Lao Wang also humbly accepted the readers who gave Lao Wang suggestions and faults and worked hard to improve. However, Lao Wang himself is an old bookworm who has been reading online articles since 2002, and has read hundreds of millions of words. How many stars this book deserves is actually a matter of opinion. Lao Wang thinks that it is at least around the passing level, and it will not be worth only 1 star in any case. Therefore, I hope that readers can be more tolerant to authors. After all, coding is not easy. One of your subscribing authors can only earn about 4 cents. An unintentional low score of yours may kill an author's creative motivation. Countless authors who live below the subsistence line are struggling every day. The hard work they put out day and night must be in the hope that everyone will like it. No author writes a bunch of rubbish! So even if you don't like it, please don't abuse me, okay? Here, Lao Wang once again thanks the readers who support me. I wish you all a happy day, good books to read every day, and never a book shortage! Thank you all!

The novel between China and the West is useless

I don't understand why you're giving away a girl right now. Bai Wuxia, you described a lot, and you even came up with a hero to save the beauty, but in the end, Zhang Xiaohu, who had been here for three months, pried her away. It's really good. I was so poisoned by you that I can't stand it anymore.

The first part is okay, but the second part is... I'm tired of seeing the reality of competing in martial arts. There are so many people writing about it, so there are so many good things to do for you. Isn't there also Xiao Huan Dan, which can increase internal strength? Instead of buying immortality cultivation techniques, go buy potions

What kind of nonsense is written about martial arts? Delete it.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the writing is really not strong enough. Some sentences made me dig holes with my toes in embarrassment. I just can't stand it any longer. Please do your best, author.

Can you stop arranging plot characters all the time? You can go in in person, just bring proof of identity or something.

You can try some anime such as Tian Xing Jiu Ge, Under One Person, Douluo Dalu etc.

Let's take care of other eunuchs first

Good writing, the plot is very compact. Come on!

Author: I just created a QQ group called "Share your writing experience" Remember to join. This is a place for all authors to chat, share and solve problems. When you have no inspiration and encounter a problem, you can go there to solve the problem. I'm going to drink a glass of water first. I'm too thirsty. I've been posting from 8:30 to now, and I'm very tired. Remember to join. It's great if you can join. I will make you an administrator. Then click on my avatar and just tell me. I don't know how to manage this group. I have just created it and have no experience. Okay, I'm going to rest. I'm so tired!

What's wrong with Squat Ju? It seems that it was founded by Bald Eagle, but it was actually commanded by the five gangsters, but Bald Eagle just gave him more money.

It's a pity that the live-action version of Bleach has a low rating and is eye-catching. I don't know if anime movies are included. If it were Kung Fu Panda🐼, wouldn't the main character be a bald monkey🐵

The swallowing part should be written about having fun. If you say you are invincible, you are invincible. You can do whatever you want. It is generally a YY novel. The author gives a framework and readers can think about the plot by themselves.

Can you write some science fiction? It would also be okay to write some magic steam type.

Why won't my Huawei mate30Pro travel through time?