Ma Xue

Although I only updated a few chapters, I took a look at these pictures. What can I say? Even if this writing style is not as good as that of a high-quality author who has written several books, it is still a little better than that of a novice who has just written a book. It is not as good as the previous one, but more than enough! But! ! I feel a sense of literary youth. It is not advisable to write a book like a composition. I think some places can be deleted, and some places do not need to be overly modified. If a book has too many narrations, it will become a narration only. What do you want to write? Which groups are you writing for? When we look at novels, most of them are read by yourself, leaving aside those who want to be eunuchs. If you are confusing yourself with your writing, let us look at it. I feel that your book should be a hands-on work, but you also need someone to give you experience, otherwise your writing will only stay in that place for the rest of your life. I think you should read more novels written by other people. I feel that even the female-channeled palace fighting novels are better than yours. After all, people have to have a main theme, follow the outline, have content, add narration to foreshadow the protagonist, and then highlight the personalities of each character, so that the novel can be barely readable. But this one, the writing style is a little better than that of a rookie who has just written a novel, and it is best not to write provocative titles, such as whether tofu is sweet or salty, and whether you like Cai Xukun or Qiao Biluo. It's a provocative post, and you're the one who gets scolded in the end. That's all I want to say, come on. If you want to keep writing novels, I also hope to see the emergence of a great god. It has an outline, a content, a main theme, plus a certain amount of conflict and struggle, the protagonist and various characters, and this is a good novel. Come on, it's pretty good that a newbie can write such good writing.

The author sucks, everyone, please leave! Give the author some incense