Comprehensive Comic: My Good Food

It's really strong for the author to persevere. My current personal impression of this book is that I think the author's shortcoming is not the "few detailed descriptions" as I said before, but the "plain" narrative. What should have been intense fighting scenes and conflicts between characters failed to break out through your descriptions. It gave me the feeling that the conflicts ended peacefully. In addition, the change of perspective may occasionally feel abrupt, and the description of group portraits is relatively difficult. If the perspective of two or more people is described in a plot, if it is not managed well, the reader will lose the sense of substitution, and may even be confused by "Who is he? Where is he? What is he going to do?" The impression I want to complain about is probably the above two points. I hope the author can see it.

I found a book of food and started testing the waters. After reading the first three chapters, I think the author wrote it very well. But it's full of flaws, the character's combat power is not good! What the hell is it that the protagonist got his sternum kicked by a girl in the first chapter? And it was so inexplicable that it would poison some people away. But it doesn't matter to me, because the author's writing has the same flavor as the novel I just read~, so if there are not too many plots to persuade the author to give up, I will continue to follow it! 🙂 Come on, just fall!

Please recommend some worlds. Games and anime are all ok. The author needs help writing an outline. Thank you very much!

I read the introduction, it's pretty cool, let's take a look. It's okay to cast a few votes.

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Any anime is fine, but JOJO is a bit embarrassing. I basically don't read the original works, and I only read the old comics.

Game of Life The Movie, Three Questions of Doomsday, Grimgar of Ashes and Fantasy, Black Contractor, The Legend of the Object, Steel, Inuyasha, Monogatari Series, Blessings for a Beautiful World, Webmaster, The Seven Deadly Sins (the third season collapsed), The Slippery Son, Magic Flute MAGI, Bungou Stray Dogs, yes, I am here to make supplementary recommendations to the author. . .

Will the author return to the world of Missy?