Yao Gong's Case History

[Reviewer] Sws (Cilian Sheng) [Date] February 2, 2020 [Advantages] ①Strong storytelling ②Good historical skills ③ The book cover is more beautiful ④The poems are quoted appropriately ⑤The logic is strong ⑥The language and writing are good [Disadvantages] ①There is a problem with paragraphing (very important, I hope it will be paid more attention to) ! I have been advised by many readers or authors before) (For example, some of the author's paragraphs contain five or six sentences at once, and the movements, expressions, and tone are all in one paragraph. It looks very uncomfortable. One sentence + some tone can be counted as one paragraph, or two sentences, no more than three sentences at most. Five or six sentences in one paragraph will be very confusing, especially in a conversation between two people.) ② Bringing in subjectivity (I can't tell how) Edit, you can understand it by yourself) (In some places, the feeling of each explanation is a bit like what I want. The verdict is inexplicable, that is, the person who decides the case concludes: because a is b, because b must be c... The final result makes people a little confused. I have this problem when I write a book myself. I can't give any good suggestions, so I suggest that the author revise it himself.) ③There are a lot of poems (this is a big deal) You can take a look at it and change it or not as appropriate.) (Although the author quotes poetry very well, the cultural heritage and cultural dissemination are very good, I also support it, including myself, but sometimes it can be used directly, sentence by sentence, which is too much, which is a bit too much, and it is a bit suspicious of trying to make up the word count. Of course, the huge update speed is definitely not to make up the word count. But it is indeed used a bit too much.)

As of Chapter 14, let me sort out the rooms chosen by everyone: Yue: Tongue Pulling Hell, Chen: Steamer Hell, Jin: Blood Pond Hell, Bai: Stone Mill Hell, Master: Spring Mortar Hell, Xiao: Oil Pan Hell, Su: Stone Pressure Hell, Yao: Bronze Pillar Hell, Song: Sword and Saw Hell, He: Punishment Hell, Hua: Knife Mountain Hell, Xie: Scissors Hell. So far, Chen and Xiao are dead, and Song Ji is missing. However, because he swore a flag to protect his master to the death, he may not be the one who dies in the next chapter. As the protagonist, Yao Gong should live to the end. Hua and Xie are not affected by the Evil Mirror Hell and will not be punished like ordinary people. These are some of the situations I have sorted out now. Let us stay tuned for the specific funeral details. The author has worked hard 👍