Weird Bus

I came from Wu Bar. Now I'm not afraid of a female protagonist, but I don't want a eunuch.

It's quite good, but this book... Is so thin, so thin, so thin.

It's on the shelves, it's so strong 😊😊

Every time I see the name of the male protagonist, it automatically sounds in my mind: Old priest, take me, I want to learn to drive a goose ~ And, my brother feels like a humanoid Erha, silly and cute, and also a road idiot\(//∇//)\

It's a boring piece of writing. I only read the outline of a story after reading it. There is no description or atmosphere at all. A primary school student's daily diary?

I feel that the comment section is inexplicable. I think this book is very good. Now I feel nothing when reading formulaic novels. I just pretend to be cool and slap in the face. From fantasy to history, I have read all kinds of novels. Even if there are new formulaic novels, I will only read the first one. I found this book from the No Heroine tag. The reason is that I don't like procrastinating works and word-count routines. Now when I read novels, I just want to read a storyline. The stories in this book are very exciting. At least the author is serious about presenting a world of his fantasy. It may be because of listening to the book, and the sense of immersion is also strong. Come on, author.

I originally read it because of the large number of words and the supernatural elements, but the large number of typos and illogical sentences put me off...

Why do the style of writing in the first few pictures from the beginning of the subscription feel so awkward?

With this junior high school student's writing style, I suddenly felt like I could be a writer.

It's okay, but I don't know if it's because I didn't read the book seriously. I feel like I didn't understand how they met the protagonist's bus? Who does the protagonist do things for? It feels a bit like the main god template or something, but it is just for survival and no tasks. What is it for?

Let's test the waters~ There will be more updates next week

Come on, love and support, the priest is driving...

I don't understand what is being said. The writing is not fluent. I feel like there is a lack of information. Maybe the information that the author knows is not written in the article. It has nothing to do with the writing style. There is no logic. Of course, the writing style is also not good.

Is this an upgrade stream? After reading more than 10 chapters, I found that the protagonist, who has experienced more than 10 dungeons, is just an ordinary person with only some props. (In my personal opinion, props are always just props. If you are not strong, relying on props is very unreliable)

I bet 0.0001 Points, in fact, my brother is the big bass behind the scenes.

Supernatural infinite flow, wow, my favorite suspense style

Supernatural writing is very difficult to write, and it is extremely brain-consuming. Already invested, come on!

Come on and sign the contract, I have already invested, please be the first investor in your work.

I just received the QQ message from the webmaster and editor this morning. I don't know if the contract can be signed successfully!

The author of many stories in the first 10 chapters has just brushed it off without writing anything. I hope the author can write the story more fully.

Woohoo, I finished reading it all morning, it's so well written and it's my favorite flavor! Come on, wife of the author, come on! ! (Comparison ❤️)

The plot is actually very good, and I also like the character of the protagonist, but can we use punctuation other than commas and periods... It feels too bland, and it would be much better to use ellipses or exclamation points in many cases.