A Cluster of Pear Blossoms Presses Against the Crabapple

Once upon a time, there was no water in the sea, but nothing except Wushan was like clouds.

Ah! What kind of fairy are you writing about? She was clearly a annoying little goblin, and the old aunt's old heart was aroused, and she suddenly remembered that I am only eighteen years old this year - no, I am eighteen years old every year (manualizing her arrogant face). For the old aunt, they are at least grain-level seedlings, so let's not talk nonsense. 1. Overall story. Li Qian, a straightforward little fairy from the upper world, unexpectedly gained the favor of Beichen Jun from the Upper Realm and Mo Tang, the prince from the fairy world because of the faulty Ruyi Hair Lock jade she wore around her neck. The two of them had a secret love for Xiao Li Qian. As the prince, Mo Tang chose Li Qian to fall into the mortal world together to find a human being. This is the story in Chapter 22 of the first volume. From a visual perspective, the story that follows is the mortal relationship between the three of them. The plot feels familiar. This is the reason why this book was not classified into the fairy grass level all of a sudden. The old aunt rationalized for a while and judged that the plot was actually quite old-fashioned, but it was also so old-fashioned that people couldn't put it down, which is the law of true fragrance. Girls from eighty to three years old do this (most?). It can only be said that the author has a good grasp of girls' minds. 2. Stunning first-person perspective. A true first-person perspective, instead of "I" narrating on the surface, but actually jumping into the third person's perspective. The story unfolds from the perspective of Li Qian. She is a carefree little fairy with untapped love. She is only interested in eating, a little clever, but unaware of the deep love between Beichen and Mo Tang. This perspective is so suitable for this story, giving Li Qian's various childish behaviors a reasonable explanation without the strong indentation caused by the third person. In a trance, I feel like Wang Shuo's "Looking Beautiful". The world in the eyes of a child has a sense of magic that cannot be understood from an adult perspective. As a reader with a higher level of perspective than Li Qian, I am really itching to see this lively and cute little fairy trying to kill herself. When I saw her teasing two male characters unintentionally... Please spare me... I, the female, wanted to knock her down directly. 4. Tell me about the title of the book. To be honest, if I hadn't signed up for the drug test, I wouldn't have read this book just by looking at the title. First of all, it feels like the movie " Lolita" is also called "A Pear Blossom Pressing Begonias". I have never liked the title of "Pengci" type of book. Secondly, the title of the book is really a bit boring. Although the title of the book hides the name of the protagonist, it also hints at the plot content. Well, I'm a bad namer myself. 5. Character creation. The character of Li Qian is very successful, she is ignorant, fearless, simple and delicious. Mo Tang is cold and cold, while Beichen is warm. They have also been basically created. I hope that after arriving in the mortal world, these two characters can be displayed more vividly. Personally, I don't like the character Qiong Hua very much, not because the character is unlikable, but because I think it's flat and facial makeup. Positive characters are easy to create, but villains are the most difficult to write. Try to put yourself into the villain's psychology. Don't write superficially. If you understand a person, you will find that everyone is multi-faceted. This kind of character description will be more three-dimensional. The old aunt is so demanding! There is nothing you can do, she has such high demands on the seedlings with the potential of fairy grass! I will continue to read, but I'm afraid that I won't be able to catch up if I don't read in time. Sorry, I'm too busy.

Come on (*'▽'*)♪

It's almost 1 million, come on little fairy

Little goblin, I'm here again. Since I can't post a long review, I'm going to post it section by section to see which section has the problem and can be modified. Don't mind if there are too many posts later, I will modify them and delete them.

The writing is great. I feel ashamed. Come on, great masters are not made in a day.

The beginning is very funny, which is rare for female videos. Let's collect it from each other. It has been voted for collection.

I have been updating continuously, and after persisting for so long, I finally broke through 100,000 words, which is quite happy. It will be v on the 31st of the month, and there will be two or three updates on April 1st. If you like it, come and support me 😁

Come on, it's easy to do. Don't give up, eh!