Abnormal Opening Position of the Apartment

For a slow-burning novel, the choice of the heroine is a bit abrupt. This book will not be toxic in the short term. In a twist of the plot, Xinling suddenly became critically ill and was frozen. The most poisonous point is around chapter 290. ps: If the plot comes full circle, remember to call me. I gave up the book.

Author: I have finished reading. I heard that you have anti-theft equipment? Do you know what the anti-theft author looks like to me? You have already dropped a level, and I won't tell you what my standards are. The author plans to write copies of other locations? I thought about it and I actually felt unhappy watching it. Since it is set in a love apartment, I am quite willing to continue watching it. I may not be happy every time, but there are tears and laughter. Overall, I am very happy. Can you write more about interesting and wonderful daily life? Lol Yumo, you need to change the way you write the battle scenes or omit this, and just write about various interactions with DPP and other lol celebrities, pretending to be slapped in the face. I'm actually quite willing to watch it. There are also two commercial dramas. When you wrote about the campus, you clearly wrote out the two beauties of Teacher Xiaobu, but you didn't dare to write about the refrigerator. What's wrong? Don't you know how to write if you don't have enough imagination? Pity! Do you dare to write the one about Master Kong? I'd love to see it. I would also like to watch Yoyo's stage play, in which Guangu and the ticket seller argue, oh, what a good plot... There are other plots... I wonder if you have a lot of inspiration for other places that are not in the love apartment? This... I don't know if I'm interested in it, because you're trying to... Stretch your crotch. My current thought is that I don't want to try to see it. I don't want to see it. I just want to watch the daily life in the apartment, the ~~wonderful~ and funny plots that happen every day. For reference materials, I recommend you to copy American TV series, that is, the Big Bang Theory type. They are copied anyway. What are you afraid of in online articles? Then copy from there. I haven't seen it anyway, I'm interested. As for whether you have enough imagination to delete, create, or not, I don't know. I hope you are awesome! Okay, I don't know if you will be raised to death by me, hey~ I don't know! After all, you really have no motivation for me to catch up. Hope to see you again, because I have been in a book drought recently and I don't know when I will find something to read.

Alas, I came across this book again. I think I used to catch up with updates every day... Now I have a headache when I want to pick it up (´;;`) I voted from dozens of chapters to 200 chapters every day. This is one of the best iPartment fanfics I have ever read... In the end, I stopped watching it because of Xin Ling. To be honest, I don't like Xin Ling very much, but the author spent 200 chapters sprinkling sugar, and ended up being offline. I heard at that time My mentality is broken. In comparison, it's good to take her offline. At least I didn't open a harem directly. I really can't understand why I beeped so much. Maybe it's because this is my second disciple. There will definitely be more negative comments in the future.

After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to write down my opinion. There are indeed a lot of love apartments written recently, but this is the best one I have ever read. It takes into account both the original work and the original work. I saw many friends complaining about whether this is poisonous or that is poisonous. I would like to ask, which online novel is not poisonous? Maybe you think it is not poisonous but it is poisonous in the eyes of others. At least the regrets in the original novels in this book have been made up. Sometimes we don't read fan fiction just to see the protagonist killing everyone. Fang or the Crystal Palace just want to see those fictional characters who have accompanied me in the past years be reborn in the writing and make up for the regrets. If you don't like this book, you can just not read it. There is no need to disgust people in the book review area. This is like eating in a restaurant and feeling that the food is not to your liking. You blast the loudspeaker at the door of the restaurant and want the whole world to know that the restaurant is not delicious. In addition, I hope the author can continue writing and finish the book well. Don't be a mess and eunuch. That's my expectation. Come on.

The previous parts were all very good, but when it came to Xin Ling's part, I was immediately poisoned and died. It looks so inconsistent and very dramatic. Slip away! ! !

There are so few books supporting Yibo Love Apartment

Although there are a lot of poisonous points, most of them are in the heroine, and the rest are pretty good. I can be considered an old bookworm for seven or eight years. Although I used to read pirated versions, it is quite strong in resisting poison. I hope the author will not hesitate and stop updating. The votes will be there. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I just read a dozen chapters, and it is the most touching love apartment fanfic I have ever read.

Don't use so many words like ah at the end of the chapter It will affect people who listen to the book Like me

It took me one night to see the update, but overall it's not toxic. It's the most beautiful one among the love apartments I've seen. Let's look at the author's consideration of starting a harem again. Having a harem in a love apartment is the most poisonous thing to me personally. Now I am still chasing more updates and fully pre-ordering. If we start a harem, let's forget about each other in the world 😂. . . Also, it's good not to write about strong female protagonists. Some time ago, there were a lot of strong female protagonists, the male protagonists had the same settings, and most of the plots were so-so. I felt uncomfortable after reading a few books. Now I don't really like stories about strong female protagonists, and it's difficult to write. The plot of this book seems to be very grand. It is not just an apartment, but also has the author's original plot and a narration of the original plot, which looks very comfortable. But don't attach too much to the country, 404 warning. I don't want such a beautiful book to be cheated

This book is very interesting. I hope the author will work hard. I am looking for a love apartment fan novel with Wanyu as the heroine. I don't know if there is one. If there is one, I hope you can recommend it. Thank you.

The character of the male protagonist is not obvious enough, and the storyline is a bit loose and unfocused. After seeing dozens of pictures, it feels like a running story.

It's been two days since Xin Ling's plot ended before I mustered up the courage to write such a post. This matter was entirely my fault. I took it for granted that I imposed my own ideas on the readers, and committed what novices call literary youth disease. As a result, many readers were very dissatisfied with this plot. I am sorry for you and failed to live up to everyone's expectations. If you have any dissatisfaction, please feel free to scold me. I have not deleted any comments on this book so far. I also ask other book friends not to speak for me under posts that scold me. This is all my fault. I am really sorry. －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－ Also, a little spoiler for those who have just started reading this book. The two heroines in this book, the heroine in the first to second seasons is Xin Ling, the girl with a heart attack who was magically saved by Sekiya in the fifth episode of the second season. She will exit at the end of the second season. The way she exits is that she suffers a heart attack and goes into cryo-hibernation in order to be cured in the future. Then the heroine after the third season is Nuo Lan. If you are disgusted with this setting, don't waste your subscription money. I will definitely not make this mistake in my next book. See you again. －－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－ After apologizing, I want to say something casually. Before writing this book, I had imagined writing a love apartment fan novel with Nuo Lan as the heroine, because Nuo Lan really fits my aesthetics so well that I am despicable. When I started writing during the Chinese New Year, I discovered a problem. The heroine Nuolan would cause the protagonist to be alone throughout the first and second seasons. If Nuolan's appearance was brought forward, I did not have the confidence to control the rhythm of the entire plot, so I wanted to find a temporary heroine to accompany the male protagonist through the first and second seasons. After watching it twice, I locked on to the role of Xin Ling. She is really suitable. She only appeared in one episode as a supporting character with a small role. As soon as we met, she committed herself to Guangu Miraculous because she was rescued. She was seriously ill and even had a reason to leave the show. Sure enough, when Xin Ling first appeared on the stage, it caused some controversy. Although some book friends like this character, there are also many book friends who are not interested in the character of Xin Ling. This made me take it for granted that Xin Ling's exit would not receive much opposition. However, when I actually wrote about the plot of Xin Ling's exit, I was deceived by the opposition from the blockbuster movie. In the final analysis, it was my own actions that caused this situation, so I really feel sorry for those book friends who like Xinling and have always supported me. I don't dare to ask for forgiveness, but after learning my lesson, I will definitely not make this mistake in my next book.

Recently, many book friends have given me good suggestions. The most outstanding ones are the Golden Armored Warrior Zhang Wei and the Thousand-Hand Avalokitesvara Tangmen Youyou. In addition, the Variety Witch Yu Mo... I would like to share my own thoughts. I am a person who pays more attention to logic and rationality. The current super development of the identity of the characters in the apartment is traceable in the original plot. Hu Yifei's force value is unusually high. Lu Zhanbo is excellent at computers, and in one episode Zeng Xiaoxian once said that Lu Zhanbo claimed to have been captured by aliens. Guan Guqi Qi often held a knife and shouted to commit suicide by caesarean section. Lu Ziqiao knows a lot of miscellaneous things, and even knows lip reading. These are my bases. If I let myself go without any basis, the plot will have a serious sense of fragmentation (of course it is also because of my lack of writing skills and poor control.) So I won't arrange any too bizarre settings for other people in the apartment. They will achieve success in their own fields as ordinary people. For example, Zeng Xiaoxian will become a well-known host, Tang Youyou will become the queen of the Cannes Film Festival, Qin Yumo will open a beauty chain, etc... The exception is Zhang Wei. He was born as an orphan, which gives him a lot of room for manipulation, so I want to arrange for him a distant relative who is very rich but has no heirs (similar to the setting of the richest man in Xihong City). You can even use your imagination a little. Zhang Wei's distant relative is not only rich, he is also a scientist like Tony Stark. In addition to the huge wealth, the inheritance he left to Zhang Wei also includes a pair of powered armor... (Barely close to the Golden Armor Warrior). Of course, I am still thinking about this paragraph, and I will tell you how to write it in detail later. That's it... Above.

You spent more than 200 chapters writing about Xin Ling, and then you took her offline. I really can't understand your brain circuit, it's like (someone think of a word for me)

The limited exemption brought me a large wave of new readers. While I was happy, I discovered that what everyone criticized the most was the exit of the heroine Xin Ling. Readers are the basic necessities of life, so I am launching a vote here. Option 1: Xin Ling wakes up early at the right time, and then the protagonist's 1v2 Shura Field mode with Xin Ling and Nuolan begins. Option 2: Xin Ling will sleep for fifty years, and the protagonist will wake up in the extra episode after dying of old age. (I would like to mention here that some readers say that cryo-sleep is cruel. In my book, this is a black technology, similar to the hibernation chambers used by astronauts during ultra-long-distance space exploration. It is safe, painless, and has no side effects. It is just like sleeping.) Voting instructions: 1: The deadline for this voting is 12:00 noon on November 8, 2020. 2: To vote, please leave a message 1 or 2 below this post (Qidian app). 3: Each person is limited to one vote. If you vote multiple times, the last vote will be taken. 4: Because this is a major adjustment involving the main plot, this vote only adopts the opinions of apprentices and book friends above the apprentice level. Please understand. 5: That's all for now, I'll add more as I think of it.

This is my first time watching an apartment fanfic. Not to mention anything else, being able to read the latest chapter almost in one breath means that I highly recognize the interest of this book. But I am still dissatisfied with the ending of Xin Ling. Whether Xin Ling is cured of his heart disease in the end, or simply writes to death, or he and the protagonist have a conflict and break up, no matter which ending I think is better than the current setting of introducing a new heroine after the freeze... Even if Xin Ling is a "dead person" in the plot, it is very She won't appear again for a long time, but she is a living person in the setting. There is actually not much difference from Zhang Wei who "temporarily does not appear in the main line because he goes abroad" (it is just that this "temporary absence from the main line" lasts a little longer), so if the protagonist ends up with Nuo Lan, it will still be considered a transference. Be sure to quote Nuolan's words. The ideal plot line in my mind is to simply write off Xinling to death, and then Xinling recorded a video before his death to tell Boyu that she was very happy with him in the past two years, and hoped that he would forget her after she left and pursue his new happiness again. Boyu, who deeply loved Ling, became depressed and devastated because of this. Everyone in the apartment tried their best to enlighten him (here are some original story lines about how people enlightened the protagonist that were not in the original plot), and then introduced Nuolan. With the influence of Nuolan and the help of friends in the apartment, Boyu finally emerged from the gloom and regained his strength, and really began to pursue his new happiness as Xin Ling said. Fu... In addition, I think the author should write Xin Ling to death not because I hate this character. On the contrary, I like the character of Xin Ling very much. The author has greatly expanded the plot of this character who only had one episode in the original drama. In addition to maintaining the original gentle and lovely character of Xin Ling, he also designed interesting new settings for her such as "a bit rotten", which is actually quite brilliant. Therefore, I feel that this character should not be left with the flaw that "her boyfriend fell in love with another woman while she was still alive", even if her boyfriend did so at her request. Xinling could ask Boyu to forget about finding someone else before freezing, but Boyu couldn't really go looking for him! Otherwise, it would be disloyal to Xin Ling and damage to the male protagonist's character - you and Xin Ling have been sprinkling dog food for hundreds of chapters, and then Xin Ling is frozen and not dead, so the protagonist should change to another person to continue spewing? Doesn't the protagonist really love Ling? Therefore, writing Xin Ling to death is cruel and reprehensible, but it is the best solution while maintaining the author's outline of "Xin Ling in the first place and Nuo Lan in the later"... Moreover, although the original work of this book is a comedy, sometimes the tragedy in the comedy story will be more touching and impressive. Having said so much, the author has already written that the heart is frozen and Nolan is about to appear... Although I am dissatisfied, I can barely accept it. I hope the author will continue to write a good and interesting story.

I can't understand the author's operation. The heroine in more than 200 chapters quits when she wants to. It hurts the readers too much. Not to mention that, within a few dozen chapters, Nuo Lan started to flirt with each other again, and they made an oath to each other. The key point is that Xin Ling is not really dead, but is just frozen and resurrected after medical technology advances? The protagonist is not as responsible as Lu Ziqiao. At least he will not shamelessly tell Meijia that polygamy is allowed in the UAE. Are you sure Nolan can accept it? What are you doing? It's better to just write it off and start the next relationship. Take care of yourself

This book by the author is considered to be the best in the apartment fandom, right? When you read other books, you feel intellectually inspired. The characterizations in them are incomparable with this one. Don't be carried away. This book is really good, and its imagination is great. You must keep reading.

I saw that Yu Mo and Zhang Wei couldn't stand it together and quit. Not to mention other things, these two have different values ​​and consumption concepts. Yu Mo's consumption of daily necessities was fine at first, but if they stay together for a long time, there will definitely be problems. Unless one of them can change their consumption concepts and lifestyles, they will definitely not be able to live together. Yu Mo's usual cosmetics and daily necessities are not ordinary. If Zhang Wei's character of saving money really gets married, there will be some quarrels in the future.

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I said I love you before, but after being frozen, I turned around and found someone else, really or I let Xinling die and then he became a prodigal son. The kind that only cares about the kidneys but not the heart. Until I met someone many years later. Either let Xin Ling live or be an in vitro fertilization baby. The male protagonist acts as a baby daddy.

I'll show you a recent photo, it's very beautiful 😍

If the heroine really changes, kick me so I can delete the book.

The first poisonous point. The part about Xin Ling is very poisonous, so it is recommended to skip it. If there is a plot later in which Xin Ling is having an affair with the male protagonist, I suggest you abandon the book. Nothing to say. A supporting character who only lived for one episode was promoted to the protagonist. It's so ambiguous. Moreover, I personally feel that psychological bullying is moral kidnapping. Save people and give you medical expenses. You still force people to take responsibility, what does this have to do with whether straight men are straight or not. Just write the interaction between the protagonist and the plot characters well. It's unnecessary for many people to feel sad. Annoying.

How did Dali get up?

The author is laying out the layout! I can feel that you have been screening readers since more than 20 chapters. You have been giving wisdom to the male protagonist since you met Xin Ling. Within a few minutes of meeting, you felt that the relationship was confirmed. Maybe you really don't want to hurt everyone's feelings when the heroine is changed later. It's that kind of thing. Keep reading without thinking, and learn to tolerate it or give up if you think about it, so that everyone can accept it when the heroine is changed later!

Hello, author, I really like your writing "Abnormal Opening Postures in Apartments". When I was in school, when I encountered something unhappy or frustrating, I would read this book again. Now that I am working and repeating the same thing every day, I feel very numb. Recently, I have encountered some things at work, and I feel really tired. I like iPartment very much. I don't know how many times I have watched it since I was in elementary school. That's why I particularly like love apartment fanfics, especially the one you wrote (whisper: I really want to hit you when my heart is frozen). I hope you can read this post, and I also hope you can write another love apartment fanfic so that the protagonist and Xin Ling can have a beautiful and heartwarming ending. As long as you keep updating, I will always support you. Finally, I wish all the friends who like iPartment good health, all the best, lots of money, your best friends by your side, and your favorite person across from you. Sincerely

You're being cruel, I said why I thought I had read it but forgot about it. I recently found the book again. It's a pity for Xin Ling, but it is true that congenital heart disease is difficult to solve unless it is a systematic article.

I'm so disappointed with the author! I saw the chapter where Zhang Chao appeared, and then I happened to watch a video yesterday. It was Zhang Chao who just told Hu Yifei and others to go to the bathroom, and then the camera turned and turned into the Snow Mastiff Saving the World! I was really cool when I saw this video! But the author actually wrote Zhang Chao as a Cowherd in the book! 😭 There can obviously be aliens, why can't there be armored warriors! 😭 Just write them like Kamen Riders, guarding the world secretly! 😭