Why Are There Only Arrow Keys?

When reading a novel, if you only read the first 20 chapters, you may not be able to see the layout, but you can see the author's shaping of the intellectual level and outlook of the supporting characters, as well as the author's inner positioning for the novel. After reading about 20 chapters, I saw that Classmate Chen Mohan absorbed 10 high-grade spiritual embryos and died of poison, so I abandoned it. The setting of the novel is very good. The protagonist is a young master who is pregnant with a system. Fighting depends directly on the combat power. When leaving the city, you only have the arrow keys. It starts with a classic royal novel. Since I know that what I am reading is a royal novel, a cheating novel, I have high requirements for the protagonist and low requirements for the supporting characters. As long as it is not poisonous, I can say anything. This novel is poisonous? Classmate Chen Mohan: ⑴ Analyze the characters from the story: ① Her family is poor and she has no money. She got her parents' jobs through a contract she signed with the Kong family son. At a young age, he is responsible and thoughtful, and has a sense of independent personality. Parents will never allow their little daughter to sign a fighting contract with someone. She signed this contract with the Kong family son. It is initially judged that her parents are not aware of it. This is the setting of Classmate Chen Mohan in the novel. Since it is a setting, follow it. But judging from the following text,after signing the contract, classmate Chen Mohan did not have a strong sense of autonomy. It is reasonable to come to the protagonist's door to seek help. There is a young master from a higher-status family who is willing to help. From her personal point of view, it is reasonable and humane to escape from the sea of ​​suffering. However, her speech is too bitchy, and her brain circuit is no longer within the normal thinking. ⒈I went to the protagonist's house without an umbrella. 2. The purpose of looking for the protagonist is to let the protagonist watch the cheerleading performance, and the performance is suspected of seduction. When the protagonist realizes the problem, it is outrageous to refuse help... ② The plot is too self-deprecating, "This (spiritual embryo) is an important thing. I will not use it to exchange the contract. I will throw away such a good thing and not give it to him." This part of the plot not only makes the female supporting character appear artificial and scheming, but also lowers the image of the protagonist. The protagonist of Wangdao novels has the highest status, and shaping the protagonist is the most important thing besides the plot. When the classmate made it clear that he did not need help, the protagonist acted out of love and went to help. Even if he was kind, it was not described. Moreover, the author used the whip marks on the girl, and the marks were caused by driving a small car, which makes the protagonist's image lowered and turned into a character suspected of being a "sex bug". What I am most dissatisfied with is the president of the student union. Is this the student council president? That's it? To put it bluntly, the plot creation and character conflict. If there is a reversal later, I will be even more speechless. First of all, readers are not the tapeworm in your author's heart, and I don't know if there is any reversal. The character creation of this woman is really a failure. Some people say that poison is human nature. There must be a degree of restraint before rising, so that the reversal is not too abrupt. Slip away. I am writing this because I saw some people in the book review section saying that all those who talk about poison are trolls. ??? What is the navy, brother??? Isn't the book review section a place to express opinions? Control reviews?

I would like to say again that the first fifteen chapters are pretty good. In the sixteenth chapter, I just start to feed you. If you scroll down, you can probably still see my comments at that time. To be honest, Sanjiang has really changed. In the past, Sanjiang was the focus of the book shortage. Now, I am thankful that there are three good books in Sanjiang in one issue. I saw this in this issue of Sanjiang, so I decided to come back and comment again We agreed to stay out of other people's business, but the class conflict is strong, and you will directly come to the rescue of the working girl in the next second, okay, I thought you were trying to draw out the plot, but as we continue reading, the protagonist asks this girl to come up and eat together? What are you here for? You came here to treat someone to a meal, and you went out to get some relief in the middle of the meal. When you want to show off, you ask someone you don't know to come over with you? What do you like about this girl? You, the young head of a big family, are in need of a woman? Are you kidding me? Skip this section first, and then let's talk about the captain. Are you a little captain threatening the protagonist? Who is the protagonist? The young leader of one of the best families in the area, do you think the family does not exist? What are you threatening as a little captain? Okay, let's talk about that girl later. I'm really convinced. I don't want to say anything more. You can see the specific comments{"NickName":"Fox Tail kiss","UserId":210640258}This analysis is right. He said everything I want to say. Are those people who scolded scumbags in the comment area not children? Anyone with a bit of logical thinking will find it poisonous. When the book was only fifteen chapters long, I might have scolded him as a sunspot. However, starting from chapter sixteen, I became what you call a sunspot. Yes, not a sunspot that simply talks about poison, but a sunspot that tells you where it is poisonous with reason and evidence. You don't even dare to face those people who just say "book poison, give up". What do you mean by eternal ban? Made me laugh so hard. Come on, come on, I'm here, welcome to the line (you don't need to analyze to refute me, just come in and scold me, leave your contact information, I will have a good talk with you) I would like to praise the author again, if you don't delete the comments, you can really put aside the book.

Thoughts after reading: After reading it despite the poison, I felt that a good hand was beaten to pieces by the author. This is a relatively new subject matter. If you keep writing and borrowing from other authors, it will become a cool book. It can be regarded as food and fodder. I didn't expect that it would become an urban novel cloaked in a fantasy system. I almost thought I had entered the wrong channel. Dufa is dead, and I am no longer interested in reading it. Newbies can read it, but forget it Lao Bai, this book is really not good.

The plot of Chen Mohan was so irritating to me that I said goodbye. Apart from this part, everything else was very good, but this part was so irritating to me that I couldn't stand it anymore. Highly recommended to readers who can stand this plot.

Originally I didn't want to criticize this book (mainly because I was afraid that the Olympic horizontal bar king would bully me), but seeing so many people complaining about this book, I will also talk about the minor problems of this book (I have only read Chapter 25, mainly because I really can't stand it anymore, don't criticize me). This book is a very good subject, and the direction is also very good. However, the details are too bad, and the emotional lines are mixed. Are you really not afraid that it will collapse in the later stage? Let's talk about the male protagonist Note that the male protagonist is a very wise person. For example, the two mutated monsters can obviously persuade Han Long not to commit suicide, but the male protagonist doesn't say anything. He can just find an excuse to fool him. For example, we haven't explored that place, so we told the madman not to go. Later, the male protagonist returned to the city. When he returned to the city, he received a harem, and his IQ also increased. More importantly, the issues within his clan were discussed with those outside the clan. This was probably a problem with his brain. Sure enough, his IQ increased, and the information within his clan was too easy to find out. In other novels, when checking past events, there is simply an overview, an explanation, and a process. But this novel is NB and gives you the answer directly. Later, Han Long's brother came and looked for the male protagonist. The male protagonist is called NB. I thought he was a villain. I didn't know that this behavior was a crazy way to attract hatred. I was afraid that he didn't know that the madman's brother was a villain. Besides, Han Long, as long as his Dantian is not destroyed, he can continue to cultivate immortality, but you told me that he is crazy, why is he crazy? Just because it left a shadow? In short, this novel is really too toxic, and the subject matter is good. To be honest, the direction keys really interest me, but it is too toxic and I can't stand it. I also read other comments and said that the latter part is inexplicable. In short, if the author doesn't revise it again, this novel is really unreadable. And now Sanjiang is really getting worse and worse. There are all kinds of novels.

I was confused when I watched the plot of the Golden Tower. The evil young man attacked and the protagonist went up to save the siege and pretended to be B. Hmm. . This is a common method to introduce the plot or characters. There is nothing much to say. I think it is irrational to start complaining when you are tired of watching it. However, I saw the protagonist's sentence: Let's eat together? Exist? What? Inviting acquaintances and cousins ​​(this is very controversial, but regardless of the specific relationship, do you only look at the last name to decide the title? Are you out of your mind?) To eat, you come out to help a waiter, and then invite the waiter to come up and eat together? Besides, the manager used the excuse of being busy to ask the waiter to leave. But you said, "I'm busy eating with that evil boy just now. You idiot (original text)" and then asked the waiter to go upstairs to eat together? Then the waiter entered the private room and chatted happily with the two guests? Exist? Are you so familiar? I was scared to death just now, but now I'm so relaxed? The first few chapters of this book are really good. Although some trolls never know the foreshadowing and start criticizing without reading the next sentence, there are still many people who read it with their brains in mind. But when it comes to these chapters, I suspect that it's not me who has a problem, but the author. Exist? Can you change it? By the way, let me say a few more words. I also use the words of an old man in this chapter. Since you have already said that you should read a book and if you think it is harmful, you have to say it out to make others uncomfortable. Why do you still jump out when you see my comment? Typical double standards? Are you not allowed to speak out or give opinions if you write something poisonous? Then why isn't the comment area called the Kua Kua area? It doesn't matter if you say so much, you're welcome to come and try

I have tolerated other people's abuse in other places, and I even helped scold several fws, but why should I care about that woman? What the hell is that Chen? He was poisoned. Really. Tianhu started the game earlier and exploded here💥. Does the author have any background? Or is it the trumpet account that plagiarized the fairy king? Is this still recommended?

The setting is great, but why do we always have to write about the family so cold-blooded? If you can't trust all the relatives in the family, who can you trust? Can't understand. Ancient Chinese clans took great care of their people.

This Chen Mohan and this Chen Long are poisonous. The protagonist is the Virgin? This book is disgusting

Author, I suggest that you change the previous content, even if it is a major change, it is better than continuing to write like this. You are definitely not writing to fight against the public. In this era, you have so many poisonous points and it is absolutely not possible. At least half of the people can't stand it and leave, so why do you need to keep writing? I don't mean anything else, I just think it's not easy to write a book. Dozens of people who say poison may be false, but most people say you can't deceive yourself and others like this. It's really not easy after you have worked so hard to write so much. If you continue like this, you may not get good grades. Why bother? The idea is so good, why not revise the article, it will definitely be much better than now.

Touch your nose and smile bitterly. Han Yun could save the life of Han Long, a man with cerebral palsy, and choke his brother to death, but he didn't. Instead, his brother went to threaten the young patriarch without thinking. The family rules are already disgusting, and now he wants to challenge the minimum limit of readers. The contradictions are monotonous and forced. Otherwise, it would be impossible to create a villain, right? How many years ago was this novel? Writers don't ask for plots to keep pace with the times, so they should at least understand the writing skills, right? One poison after another, I took it

There are some poisonous points in this book, and there are some issues with the writing of the female supporting character (I'm immune to this, so I finished reading it), but it fills in the holes pretty well. As for the villain's IQ, it's okay. After all, this book is an invincible and cool novel.

I clicked on it to watch the protagonist fight monsters and upgrade, let's just complete the harem, but the description in the middle. . .

I hope that after the author rectifies this book and cleans out the shit in it, someone can call me and I can read it again.

The overall style is quite stable, the character of Pig's Knuckle is well written, the world structure is novel, and the supporting characters have different character descriptions. Although it is a little lacking, it does not affect the way it is read as popcorn. It is considered good in your spare time and you can check it out.

Can Han Yitian, that **** woman, kill her quickly? I'm tired of looking at her! ! !

The author wins. Is it because I can no longer see people with normal eyes or because the author's description is wrong? I think the woman who was the student council president in the early stage was a conspiracy or a calculation, why is this plot

I read part of it to chapter 39, and I just couldn't stand it anymore. I wonder if the author writes romance? Or the overbearing president? I spent a lot of pen and ink writing about one thing, and the twist was abrupt. I skipped half a year, changed my hand to write Inspector, and then changed my hand to the bar. It was messy and illogical. The young master of a top wealthy family took a golden elixir-level guard to wander around outside. He also went to the cemetery in the middle of the night, killed people and erected a monument, and finally broke it. He explained that there would be no flaws, so why not just not erect a monument? When I go to a bar, I only order the cheapest fruit wine, and I even meet a drunk woman. . . . Sorry, my poison resistance is too low. Goodbye! . .

After reading this book, only two words can describe my mood, "boring"🤓

Hey, why did the girl change from pretty to stunning? Has your appearance improved?

I have been following the latest chapter. It is very well written, but there is a small problem that I am quite concerned about. After collecting Zero, the protagonist takes him with him anytime and anywhere, even in this latest chapter. Logically speaking, the loss of contact at the transfer station is a big or small thing, but it should not be known to people other than the top management at the first time. This Zero is a woman who has not practiced before. At present, it seems that she has no special skills except a little courage. From the perspective of other people in the family, the young patriarch found an unidentified and good-looking woman from nowhere and took her with him at all times, including when handling official duties. Do you really have no doubts about this person? The latest chapter states that no one cares about this woman's identity and no one checks it out. Is it really possible? We are from God's perspective. Of course we know that there is no problem with this person, but does such a big family just let an unknown and beautiful woman follow its young patriarch casually? And I don't know about these things. Why does the protagonist take him with him to handle official duties, including meetings and killing high-level traitors? It's not like this if he wants to train people. . It's only been a few days since I joined

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I thought that the rules of a wealthy family were strict: unity, healthy competition internally, unity with the outside world, the main family as the main body, branches assisting the main family, the status of the patriarch and the young patriarch are high, the elders check and balance the power of the patriarch, and the interests of the family are the priority in everything. Even if a tribesman becomes a useless person because of his sacrifice for the family, even if he is just a helpless ordinary tribesman, the family will take good care of him for the rest of his life, becoming the support of ordinary tribesmen and enhancing the cohesion of the tribesmen. The author writes about the strict rules of a wealthy family: people of no use value can be abandoned and killed at will, and internal fighting must lead to death. Unity? Doesn't exist. For example: The protagonist is a young patriarch. Even if he fails in the competition and loses the position of young patriarch, he will be exiled to a marginal position at most. As a result, the protagonist says that he will die if he fails in the competition. The elder's grandson, Han Long, encountered a mutated monster and became a cripple when performing a family mission. As a result, the family did not raise the cripple and directly expelled him from the family tree. This is a tribe with the elder grandfather and brother Jin Danqi as backers. If ordinary tribesmen become cripples, why not just kill them? The family is so ruthless, so which clan member would dare to serve the family? Each and every one of them is hiding and not daring to try their best, for fear that if they charge forward and become useless, they will be abandoned by the family without any use value. The branch does not deal with the main family, and the younger generation of the branch blatantly does not give the protagonist, the young patriarch, face. To be honest, even if the branch and the main family are at odds, at least on the surface they should give the young patriarch face, right? After Han Long became a cripple, his brother Han Hu openly rushed into the protagonist's yard and threatened to kill him. How could Han Hu, who was so capable, let his brother Han Long be expelled from the family tree? The protagonist, the young patriarch, is really pitiful, and anyone can step on him. The protagonist said that in the history of the Han family, there was a young patriarch with a thunder-based spiritual root who was driven to death by his own clansmen. This led to the family being almost wiped out. Wow, look at the level of internal strife. The fact that the family can continue to this day is really because of the author's cheating. Be more rigorous in setting, don't write such intellectually depressing content, it will simply rub the reader's IQ to the ground. Of course, these weird family settings are just a little bit poisonous, and they will be over with a little resistance. What is really poisonous is the plot of the female partner Chen Mohan in the back. The protagonist loses his wits as soon as he meets Chen Mohan. It is completely different from the previous description, and the character collapses. So I suspect that the front and back are not written by the same person. Author, how much did you spend to buy the first one? Can you recommend it?

Finished reading. Poisonous point: That Han Long jumped around and never died Chen Mohan, who looks like the heroine, was trained and raped by others and has always been disgusting (for those who have not read the book, please substitute the enhanced version of Matou Sakura, who was trained by the villain from childhood to adulthood, and was taken over by the protagonist) Filling in: Han Long disguised himself as Chen Mohan and jumped off the building. But my personal opinion is that it has been suppressed for too long and cannot be promoted. . . It's inexplicably frustrating. After all, reality has tortured me thousands of times. If I hadn't just wanted to see how the author fills in the holes, I would have given up on the book. It's much better later. It's just that I originally wanted to watch the young master of a big family meow meow meow all the way, but I only saw the protagonist fighting monsters meow meow meow, and was disgusted by his own people. Later, a law enforcement captain appeared and was even more disgusting. . . The patrol brought out by the protagonist was taken away by the elders. . . Summary! The author's writing is good and he doesn't abuse the protagonist, but the villain is too disgusting! ! ! ! ! Sure enough, a novice like me is only qualified to read invincible novels. . .

When I saw Chapter 25, I thought it was fairy grass at first, and then when Mo Han came out, it became extremely poisonous! Taking a girl to a hotel for dinner and encountering a young man bullying the waitress, the protagonist was "forced" to step forward and save the waitress. Then I found out that this waiter is the president of the student union of xx University? The protagonist suddenly turns into a licking dog and leaves his phone number to the waiter and promises to contact the protagonist if there is any problem? ? ? Two days later, Mo Han suddenly came to meet the protagonist in the heavy rain without an umbrella and got wet, and invited the protagonist to watch the cheerleading performance? ? ? The protagonist agrees and then discovers a conspiracy on the way and then still goes to the trap? ? ? After arriving, the protagonist discovers that this woman or another woman with the same name as him signed something similar to a legal slave contract? ? ? I am a firm supporter of harem novels, but after reading the author's book, I still think you should write novels without female protagonists. At least the idea of ​​this book is good. This woman is so poisonous that I don't understand what she means.

Defeated in Chapter 31, this Chen Mohan is a poisonous person. I really thought you wrote "The Overbearing President Falls in Love with Me". Is there any overlap between the circles of a young team leader of a big family and a waiter (ps: from someone else's family) who they met only once? Can't we design the plot well? Let the protagonist force it? Don't you read it over again after you write it down when your brain is hot? I'm really drunk... Another failure and investment. Just this one character can ruin the whole book. I suggest the author choose one of the three (①Change these pictures, change a reasonable contact method, and let the two people tie up their interests more appropriately. ②Hurry up and write Damn her, just look at her and she will be poisoned every time she appears. Not many people are so resistant to poison. ③You eunuch, if you don't change the results of this book, it's better to open a new book) It is recommended that the author find the right position and clear the audience when writing the book! !

A strong author, I don't rule out the possibility that it's someone's trumpet. The protagonist is not a licker and has an IQ. It's really good! Positive reviews

[Try to modify the poisonous points in Chapter 15] "Han Yun?" Seeing Gao Ershao's expression change from arrogant and domineering to panicked, and then knelt down and begged, Han Yun expressionlessly raised his feet to Gao Dongsheng's shoulders, took out some tissues and wiped his pants. Foot, and then said lightly: "Is there any problem?" Gao Dongsheng's face was red, his expression was distorted, he just swallowed a breath and said: "No, no problem." At this time, Han Yun, who was feeling a little boring, heard something in his ears. System voice: [There is a monk at the first level of Foundation Establishment (hostile) ahead, with a combat power of 250, please make your choice] [Move forward, your combat power is 1504, and the kill rate is 100%] [Turn left , kiss the wall] [Turn right, talk to the lobby manager] [Back up, comfort the scared and crying girl] Han Yun was stunned for a moment. It turned out that not only did he deal with monsters, he also had a choice when facing people who were hostile to him. Not wanting to get entangled with Han Handuo, a young master with a combat power of 250, Han Yun casually chose to retreat. In an instant, Han Yun returned to the private room on the fourth floor. [Successful comfort, information obtained: the girl's name - Chen Mohan, Chen Mohan's favorability, +20] Han Yun was confused. This system can not only fight for you, but also capture girls for you? I don't know what I said to the waiter named Chen Mohan, but she actually followed him back to the private room? At this time, the orioles and swallows were singing in the private room, and the atmosphere became excited. "In other words, you went out for five minutes and brought a girl back?" "Young patriarch, it turns out you like this..." Han Yunsheng leaned on the sofa helplessly, feeling that it was too difficult for him.

Ahem, it looked pretty exciting in front of me, but I started getting poisoned when the woman came out to eat, so I said goodbye. . . .

It suddenly occurred to me, and then I found it, but it was a pity that it was a eunuch.