Why Are There Only Arrow Keys?

Hey, why did the girl change from pretty to stunning? Has your appearance improved?

When reading a novel, if you only read the first 20 chapters, you may not be able to see the layout, but you can see the author's shaping of the intellectual level and outlook of the supporting characters, as well as the author's inner positioning for the novel. After reading about 20 chapters, I saw that Classmate Chen Mohan absorbed 10 high-grade spiritual embryos and died of poison, so I abandoned it. The setting of the novel is very good. The protagonist is a young master who is pregnant with a system. Fighting depends directly on the combat power. When leaving the city, you only have the arrow keys. It starts with a classic royal novel. Since I know that what I am reading is a royal novel, a cheating novel, I have high requirements for the protagonist and low requirements for the supporting characters. As long as it is not poisonous, I can say anything. This novel is poisonous? Classmate Chen Mohan: ⑴ Analyze the characters from the story: ① Her family is poor and she has no money. She got her parents' jobs through a contract she signed with the Kong family son. At a young age, he is responsible and thoughtful, and has a sense of independent personality. Parents will never allow their little daughter to sign a fighting contract with someone. She signed this contract with the Kong family son. It is initially judged that her parents are not aware of it. This is the setting of Classmate Chen Mohan in the novel. Since it is a setting, follow it. But judging from the following text,after signing the contract, classmate Chen Mohan did not have a strong sense of autonomy. It is reasonable to come to the protagonist's door to seek help. There is a young master from a higher-status family who is willing to help. From her personal point of view, it is reasonable and humane to escape from the sea of ​​suffering. However, her speech is too bitchy, and her brain circuit is no longer within the normal thinking. ⒈I went to the protagonist's house without an umbrella. 2. The purpose of looking for the protagonist is to let the protagonist watch the cheerleading performance, and the performance is suspected of seduction. When the protagonist realizes the problem, it is outrageous to refuse help... ② The plot is too self-deprecating, "This (spiritual embryo) is an important thing. I will not use it to exchange the contract. I will throw away such a good thing and not give it to him." This part of the plot not only makes the female supporting character appear artificial and scheming, but also lowers the image of the protagonist. The protagonist of Wangdao novels has the highest status, and shaping the protagonist is the most important thing besides the plot. When the classmate made it clear that he did not need help, the protagonist acted out of love and went to help. Even if he was kind, it was not described. Moreover, the author used the whip marks on the girl, and the marks were caused by driving a small car, which makes the protagonist's image lowered and turned into a character suspected of being a "sex bug". What I am most dissatisfied with is the president of the student union. Is this the student council president? That's it? To put it bluntly, the plot creation and character conflict. If there is a reversal later, I will be even more speechless. First of all, readers are not the tapeworm in your author's heart, and I don't know if there is any reversal. The character creation of this woman is really a failure. Some people say that poison is human nature. There must be a degree of restraint before rising, so that the reversal is not too abrupt. Slip away. I am writing this because I saw some people in the book review section saying that all those who talk about poison are trolls. ??? What is the navy, brother??? Isn't the book review section a place to express opinions? Control reviews?

I have been following the latest chapter. It is very well written, but there is a small problem that I am quite concerned about. After collecting Zero, the protagonist takes him with him anytime and anywhere, even in this latest chapter. Logically speaking, the loss of contact at the transfer station is a big or small thing, but it should not be known to people other than the top management at the first time. This Zero is a woman who has not practiced before. At present, it seems that she has no special skills except a little courage. From the perspective of other people in the family, the young patriarch found an unidentified and good-looking woman from nowhere and took her with him at all times, including when handling official duties. Do you really have no doubts about this person? The latest chapter states that no one cares about this woman's identity and no one checks it out. Is it really possible? We are from God's perspective. Of course we know that there is no problem with this person, but does such a big family just let an unknown and beautiful woman follow its young patriarch casually? And I don't know about these things. Why does the protagonist take him with him to handle official duties, including meetings and killing high-level traitors? It's not like this if he wants to train people. . It's only been a few days since I joined

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I thought that the rules of a wealthy family were strict: unity, healthy competition internally, unity with the outside world, the main family as the main body, branches assisting the main family, the status of the patriarch and the young patriarch are high, the elders check and balance the power of the patriarch, and the interests of the family are the priority in everything. Even if a tribesman becomes a useless person because of his sacrifice for the family, even if he is just a helpless ordinary tribesman, the family will take good care of him for the rest of his life, becoming the support of ordinary tribesmen and enhancing the cohesion of the tribesmen. The author writes about the strict rules of a wealthy family: people of no use value can be abandoned and killed at will, and internal fighting must lead to death. Unity? Doesn't exist. For example: The protagonist is a young patriarch. Even if he fails in the competition and loses the position of young patriarch, he will be exiled to a marginal position at most. As a result, the protagonist says that he will die if he fails in the competition. The elder's grandson, Han Long, encountered a mutated monster and became a cripple when performing a family mission. As a result, the family did not raise the cripple and directly expelled him from the family tree. This is a tribe with the elder grandfather and brother Jin Danqi as backers. If ordinary tribesmen become cripples, why not just kill them? The family is so ruthless, so which clan member would dare to serve the family? Each and every one of them is hiding and not daring to try their best, for fear that if they charge forward and become useless, they will be abandoned by the family without any use value. The branch does not deal with the main family, and the younger generation of the branch blatantly does not give the protagonist, the young patriarch, face. To be honest, even if the branch and the main family are at odds, at least on the surface they should give the young patriarch face, right? After Han Long became a cripple, his brother Han Hu openly rushed into the protagonist's yard and threatened to kill him. How could Han Hu, who was so capable, let his brother Han Long be expelled from the family tree? The protagonist, the young patriarch, is really pitiful, and anyone can step on him. The protagonist said that in the history of the Han family, there was a young patriarch with a thunder-based spiritual root who was driven to death by his own clansmen. This led to the family being almost wiped out. Wow, look at the level of internal strife. The fact that the family can continue to this day is really because of the author's cheating. Be more rigorous in setting, don't write such intellectually depressing content, it will simply rub the reader's IQ to the ground. Of course, these weird family settings are just a little bit poisonous, and they will be over with a little resistance. What is really poisonous is the plot of the female partner Chen Mohan in the back. The protagonist loses his wits as soon as he meets Chen Mohan. It is completely different from the previous description, and the character collapses. So I suspect that the front and back are not written by the same person. Author, how much did you spend to buy the first one? Can you recommend it?

I would like to say again that the first fifteen chapters are pretty good. In the sixteenth chapter, I just start to feed you. If you scroll down, you can probably still see my comments at that time. To be honest, Sanjiang has really changed. In the past, Sanjiang was the focus of the book shortage. Now, I am thankful that there are three good books in Sanjiang in one issue. I saw this in this issue of Sanjiang, so I decided to come back and comment again We agreed to stay out of other people's business, but the class conflict is strong, and you will directly come to the rescue of the working girl in the next second, okay, I thought you were trying to draw out the plot, but as we continue reading, the protagonist asks this girl to come up and eat together? What are you here for? You came here to treat someone to a meal, and you went out to get some relief in the middle of the meal. When you want to show off, you ask someone you don't know to come over with you? What do you like about this girl? You, the young head of a big family, are in need of a woman? Are you kidding me? Skip this section first, and then let's talk about the captain. Are you a little captain threatening the protagonist? Who is the protagonist? The young leader of one of the best families in the area, do you think the family does not exist? What are you threatening as a little captain? Okay, let's talk about that girl later. I'm really convinced. I don't want to say anything more. You can see the specific comments@readerThis analysis is right. He said everything I want to say. Are those people who scolded scumbags in the comment area not children? Anyone with a bit of logical thinking will find it poisonous. When the book was only fifteen chapters long, I might have scolded him as a sunspot. However, starting from chapter sixteen, I became what you call a sunspot. Yes, not a sunspot that simply talks about poison, but a sunspot that tells you where it is poisonous with reason and evidence. You don't even dare to face those people who just say "book poison, give up". What do you mean by eternal ban? Made me laugh so hard. Come on, come on, I'm here, welcome to the line (you don't need to analyze to refute me, just come in and scold me, leave your contact information, I will have a good talk with you) I would like to praise the author again, if you don't delete the comments, you can really put aside the book.

Finished reading. Poisonous point: That Han Long jumped around and never died Chen Mohan, who looks like the heroine, was trained and raped by others and has always been disgusting (for those who have not read the book, please substitute the enhanced version of Matou Sakura, who was trained by the villain from childhood to adulthood, and was taken over by the protagonist) Filling in: Han Long disguised himself as Chen Mohan and jumped off the building. But my personal opinion is that it has been suppressed for too long and cannot be promoted. . . It's inexplicably frustrating. After all, reality has tortured me thousands of times. If I hadn't just wanted to see how the author fills in the holes, I would have given up on the book. It's much better later. It's just that I originally wanted to watch the young master of a big family meow meow meow all the way, but I only saw the protagonist fighting monsters meow meow meow, and was disgusted by his own people. Later, a law enforcement captain appeared and was even more disgusting. . . The patrol brought out by the protagonist was taken away by the elders. . . Summary! The author's writing is good and he doesn't abuse the protagonist, but the villain is too disgusting! ! ! ! ! Sure enough, a novice like me is only qualified to read invincible novels. . .

Thoughts after reading: After reading it despite the poison, I felt that a good hand was beaten to pieces by the author. This is a relatively new subject matter. If you keep writing and borrowing from other authors, it will become a cool book. It can be regarded as food and fodder. I didn't expect that it would become an urban novel cloaked in a fantasy system. I almost thought I had entered the wrong channel. Dufa is dead, and I am no longer interested in reading it. Newbies can read it, but forget it Lao Bai, this book is really not good.

When I saw Chapter 25, I thought it was fairy grass at first, and then when Mo Han came out, it became extremely poisonous! Taking a girl to a hotel for dinner and encountering a young man bullying the waitress, the protagonist was "forced" to step forward and save the waitress. Then I found out that this waiter is the president of the student union of xx University? The protagonist suddenly turns into a licking dog and leaves his phone number to the waiter and promises to contact the protagonist if there is any problem? ? ? Two days later, Mo Han suddenly came to meet the protagonist in the heavy rain without an umbrella and got wet, and invited the protagonist to watch the cheerleading performance? ? ? The protagonist agrees and then discovers a conspiracy on the way and then still goes to the trap? ? ? After arriving, the protagonist discovers that this woman or another woman with the same name as him signed something similar to a legal slave contract? ? ? I am a firm supporter of harem novels, but after reading the author's book, I still think you should write novels without female protagonists. At least the idea of ​​this book is good. This woman is so poisonous that I don't understand what she means.

Defeated in Chapter 31, this Chen Mohan is a poisonous person. I really thought you wrote "The Overbearing President Falls in Love with Me". Is there any overlap between the circles of a young team leader of a big family and a waiter (ps: from someone else's family) who they met only once? Can't we design the plot well? Let the protagonist force it? Don't you read it over again after you write it down when your brain is hot? I'm really drunk... Another failure and investment. Just this one character can ruin the whole book. I suggest the author choose one of the three (①Change these pictures, change a reasonable contact method, and let the two people tie up their interests more appropriately. ②Hurry up and write Damn her, just look at her and she will be poisoned every time she appears. Not many people are so resistant to poison. ③You eunuch, if you don't change the results of this book, it's better to open a new book) It is recommended that the author find the right position and clear the audience when writing the book! !