Live Broadcast God-Making Plan

There are certainly advantages, but it's boring to talk about them, so let's talk about the disadvantages first: 1. There are too many popular science things in the previous article, which looks very tiring from a reader's perspective. (Although it has been stated that Chapter 5 begins the main text) For some picky readers, it may have a strong dissuading effect. Answer: ① You can try to disperse these "outline" or "background" in the main text. ② You can also compress the number of words and combine them into a prologue, which is divided into several parts. [Example] This is... ——The above is a basic introduction (it will affect the perception) But... ——The above is an advanced introduction (it will have little impact on the perception) End 2. It is very hard-core and may cater to some readers, but some readers may not accept it. Explanation: Perhaps it would be better to use metaphors in some unfamiliar and difficult places. In addition, you can add some explanatory text as appropriate (it is best not to spend hundreds of words) [Example] Low-level civilization, one that cannot even create xx... This device is like a green plant. With sunlight and air, it can continuously produce oxygen for you. (Personal practice: compare some complex principles to common things in life) 3. Self-complaint: I haven't finished reading the text yet, I will read it for a while before I can talk.

Moreover, the context is incoherent. After reading a few chapters, sometimes I have to think about which chapter this chapter is the sequel to.

It's beautifully written, but I don't understand some parts. In the fantasy world, you are invested in the spiritual body. After death, the spiritual body cannot return to the real world. So what do ghosts and ghosts belong to? For example, if you die in the dungeon and become a ghost, you can still complete tasks in it. Are the NPCs in the dungeon a spiritual body?