Earthly Person

Practice type. . After watching it for about ten minutes, I was really confused. At first glance, it felt like it was an apocalyptic novel about cannibalism. . . Manual vomiting Then there is a poisonous point, where the doctor delays rescuing the protagonist and saves his wife. The expression is vague, not touching, and gives people a cold-blooded feeling. . . The story background of the protagonist. . . Very poisonous. . Damn it***** I hope the author can eliminate the poison in the later stage, make the background of the story not too cruel, and not too tear-jerking. . . Hmm... Well... Other things, I have to say that the author is much more experienced than other novice authors, his writing is smoother, and the most important thing is that he is constantly updated. This comment was edited by Huanshi, deputy director of the creative circle. Don't criticize if you don't like it. Come on, author. Already invested. Hope to persevere. Going through ups and downs Seeing the rainbow Wishes for a great fire 2020.02.15

Post it here to record the writing process. 140,000 words are not signed. It's a shame that the writing style stabilized after thirty chapters. Let me see how many people are reading this book to give me some motivation——

The content and story are described in detail, and the main characters are well-developed, giving people a sense of being on the scene. However, I feel that the plot of the timeline is not advanced fast enough, which makes this kind of bland article less attractive. Finally, come on, don't stop updating, encourage each other and strive to sign a contract.

Come on, take a step😃😃

Already collected, please support the author.

He doesn't believe in fate, fights with the sky, and walks around the world with a sword. A fairy tale novel about me defying fate. In the introduction, the old man's hand trembling while grilling meat made me feel a little naughty (´｡･v･｡｀) This is my personal feeling. Other than that, I can only admire the author's serious attitude and writing style, praise, worship, and cheer for the author!

Behind the dim wooden house, I immediately saw the young man with golden light all over his body. He's coming, he's coming...

The thirty-four chapters in the manuscript have been written, which made me proud for a while. Although the chapters have not yet been published, I like the writing, I really like it. The chapter name is revealed in advance—— Vulcan.

The prologue is written... I think it's okay...

It feels quite good 😁 Come on! By all means, finish him off. Encourage each other😡

Invested, No. 43

Just like you, I scrapped one book and used it as a draft and started writing a new one 😂

Like, like, like, the idea is novel, the writing is excellent, book friends, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I hope everyone can support each other and continue to work hard! ! Already collected. I hope we can visit each other. I am writing "The Immortal Seat". You are welcome to criticize and correct me. Let's accept it from each other. Hehe

It seems that we both dropped out of the new book list

I feel very good, very good, I have invested, keep going 👍

Come on, I have invested in my collection for a long time. I will read a few chapters today. They are well written. Keep at it and keep reading.

I finished coding the summary. I didn't sign a contract because it was not well written. I'm sorry, so I decided to change my writing direction again. To be honest, I've always wanted to write a novel that I can write with a smile, so that's the direction! Also, if you want to know the trouble of the subsequent settings, please take a look at the final chapter, Song of Raindrops. By the way, I recommend the song "Song of Raindrops" from the girl's final journey. This is where the title comes from!

Thank you for your great writing~~hu collection

I was rejected for the second time, so I was well prepared, hahaha. This time I wrote the book mainly because I wanted to write some literary youth and ancient style literature with fantasy and fantasy elements to have fun. Although the result was not good as expected, I made a profit, and many chapters were very enjoyable. Regardless of the chapter names or the content and plot, except for the slow start at the beginning, I really started to become proficient in it, and I was shocked when I went back to read it. Very good, this time I am very satisfied with the chapters after the thirty-fifth chapter I wrote. I think all the previous chapters except the first chapter will be rated above 90 points. I am rushing to sign the next book, so I have to prepare for a long time, and the outline and details need to be... Goodbye, I still have some manuscripts in the archive. Once I have finished publishing the book, I will treat it as a record.

The more I watch it, the more exciting it becomes. It's over, I'm so looking forward to it, haha😄.

A new chapter is released. Well, this is the plot I ultimately want to write. As I said before, the subsequent stories will be very good. Of course, I am still satisfied with the previous chapter "Vulcan" and sincerely invite everyone to watch and criticize.

Great work, hope to visit again, "Wei Ling Ji"

Great work, hope to visit again, "Wei Ling Ji"

So fast, only a few months! ! ! I haven't read a novel in a few months, it's really fast...

Are you ready to open a new book? Come on!

Did you really finish writing it or just cut it?

Now that I have read Chapter 7, I can see that your writing style is very sophisticated and has great literary skills, and there is an air of maturity between the lines. The first chapter feels very depressing and may dissuade some readers. However, this past experience may be an important foreshadowing. It depends on how you come to terms with it later. The next part is about the doctor rescuing the protagonist. Personally, I think it's a bit forced. At the cost of the life of his beloved wife, he rescued a child he had never met before. After that, he did not dare to look at him directly and even sent him out for training. This made me feel that the doctor was a bit too kind. The protagonist lives a rough life outside, dealing with beasts and corpses all day long, but unexpectedly behaves very maturely in human behavior, which makes me feel a bit distorted, but your brother may have written the reason later, I didn't see it. Overall, the writing is very stable, the story is eloquent, and the scenes are described in detail, but I think if the plot in the first few chapters develops faster, it may attract more readers. The above is just my humble opinion, don't worry about it