Creating an Extraordinary World Starting from Japan

You are really making headlines again! It would be better not to write the main character and change the name, such as Reiki Resurrection Flow, so that more people would watch it! I thought it was an invincible flow that came in, but it turned out to be an ordinary recovery flow. I think it feels uncomfortable for you to be sprayed, right? It would be great to change the spiritual energy recovery of the apocalypse, so don't waste everyone's time

After reading the pre-reading instructions, my first reaction was that this is also the protagonist? Isn't this kind of setting in other books a background panel or narration?

But the problem is that if you write about all the characters in the world, then your book is not an Invincible style or a Creation style, it is just an ordinary post-apocalyptic struggle novel! There is something wrong with your classification

I think you can write that the protagonist is invincible, but you don't need to describe it too much, especially if you just let it develop. Otherwise, if other people are more powerful than the protagonist, how can the protagonist create an extraordinary world?

When I saw the first thirty chapters or so, the author said it would end early, so I didn't read much.

I understand that the mastermind behind the scenes is the same as what the author understands. The mastermind behind the scenes should at least have a clear goal of his own. He can use his subordinates behind the scenes and use vests to help him achieve his goals better and faster. The protagonist you wrote has no desires and desires. He is like the way of heaven. He only has a camera perspective and does nothing. You should classify this as a group drama. You don't have a mastermind at all, and there is no behind-the-scenes planning. The other behind-the-scenes people hide their identities and use vests to attack their subordinates. This is the behind-the-scenes. You have no vests, no subordinates, and no human emotions. Can you call this a behind-the-scenes drama? You call it a group portrait, and it is a group portrait in which the protagonist is very aggrieved.

Even if he is the mastermind behind the scenes, it is such a shame to not show the main character in more than ten chapters.

To be honest, after reading five chapters, I didn't understand what the author wanted to write.

Pretty good! Come on author!

Do you want to be part of this story? Do you want to take a tour of this strange world? Come quickly! Character format - Name: (It is best to conform to the Japanese name format. If it does not conform to the format, the author may filter out keywords from the provided names to form the name. Of course, it can also be a codename such as eg tiger or Shenyue) Gender: Personality:

Author, I give you four votes and I hope you will continue to work hard.

What is the main line? Who is the protagonist?

Come on, author! Very well written

If it were me, I would write about monsters destroying Japanese cities

I thought it was a story about the mastermind behind the scenes, but I didn't expect it was about the revival of spiritual energy. The writing was too complicated.

Who cares about your protagonist... I thought Yamato was going to explode, but he was beaten to the ground... It was not refreshing at all. The character who was the earliest to describe and the most pleasing to the eye turned out to be the weakest 🤔

Come on ฅ(*°ω°*ฅ)*

Although it is a group portrait novel, it does not need a protagonist, only supporting characters, but the supporting characters have no distinctive characteristics and are hard to remember. For example, the ninja only knows how to do ninjutsu, but he can't remember any of them. He needs some impressive events to describe them.

People who come because of the title are all here to watch Invincible. Those who like the post-apocalyptic resurgence stream will not come here. If there are people, it means at least that someone has read your novel. If there are no people, it means that they have turned around and left after reading your preface. My suggestion is that if you still want to continue writing, change the title, at least Some people will read it, but if you want to make money, save all the chapters on your computer, then find an editor to delete the entire book, give it a new name, and re-post the chapters. In this way, you can at least support yourself by putting it on the shelves. If you are interested, it doesn't matter, but the title must be good, otherwise no one will read your novel.