Liu's Xiaoqi

Book title: "Liu's Xiaoqi" Content: Daily family stories in rural areas Commentator: If not a little bit glamorous Applying channel: Diandian from the best posts in the creative circle Introduction: There is a girl named Xiaoqi in the village. When she was born, the Tengu ate the sun! She is so strong! Book review: The style is more direct and concise, and the pace is fast. It can be said that this article is a detailed outline after the outline is refined. Because it does not have too many calculations and psychological descriptions like other books, it will be a bit special. However, I quite like that the plot of this book is not protracted. The beginning of the book is about the "unusual" father of the protagonist Xiaoqi. I think this part may be a bit long, and it may be a bit confusing to appear in front of the protagonist. It might be better if the paragraph about Liu Dahe could be written when Liu Xiaoqi was born. When Liu Dahe saw the Tengu eating the sun, he remembered his past life memories and associated it with his soon-to-be-born daughter. It might be better if Liu Dahe felt that he needed to protect his daughter from being like him. Or when asking the old woman in the village to tell the children about the past, when she saw Xiaoqi who was several years old, she would tell the strange story about Xiaoqi's birth and the story about her father. The author is really hardcore hhhh. Well, I don't have much advice after reading it. After all, the manuscript has 240,000 words, and the finished book of about 300,000 words may collapse if I revise it. And the daily life of this book seems pretty good to me. Maybe there is another style: telling the story without procrastination like "Story Club". There are probably two suggestions for the next book. One is that if the author does not have time to polish it and just wants everyone to read the story, he can continue writing like this; the other is that if the author wants to make money by writing books and subscribing, he needs to expand the details appropriately. For example, add some historical background and lengthen the main line: growing up from a small village to a character who can influence a party; for example, enriching the psychology, background and special encounters of other characters: how Liu Dahe learned to be a good person and work in the carpenter's house in the past, Liu Dahe's imagination of his future life, future and "world view" when he went to other people's homes when he was an apprentice and saw their lives, etc. But this is just my personal opinion. Finally, at the end, I wish you all a happy New Year! I wish you all good health! Have a happy life!

[Xianzhu Book Review] The content and style are very good, and it feels like you have been watching the routines of cultivating immortals for a long time and seeing the bad luck in chess. [Advantages] The writing is excellent, very concise and simple, the plot is grounded, and the characters are rich. [Disadvantages] The content of the paragraphs is long, and most readers nowadays are impatient. It is recommended that each paragraph be divided into sections to express the key points, so as to avoid concentrating large sections of content in one paragraph. The audience is small, it is non-commercial, and it is difficult to make money, but people who like it will like it very much. [Evaluation] B [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you like it, please add more.

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I'll give you 50 cents as a reward 😂. I saved the points from grabbing red envelopes, but I don't have any favorite books. I'll give all the red envelope points I save to Xiao Qi 😁

Haha, I don't know why, but I, a boy, like to read this kind of cultivation story about farming and doing business. Maybe it's because I've watched too much Pokemon 😂, but I just find it very interesting and the plot is neither popular nor popular. I like it! 😁

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After reading the last few chapters, it was really earth-shaking. Lihua's character determines that she is destined to become a flower vase, and then poach Xiaoqi's corner in order to survive... And Xiaoqi is very strong and can make whatever choices she wants. Without the crown prince, she can still live happily. This highlights the independent and self-reliant side of women in the new era

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I think this was written by someone's trumpet. Anyway, it's definitely not the first time the author has written a book. A very skillful book with a unique style. 1. Overall story: The story of Liu Xiaoqi, who was born with supernatural powers and relied on his supernatural powers to improve his family's predicament and become successful step by step. The story frame is not complicated, and the heroine develops farming skills. The background is set in a poor rural area, so there is no need to explain it forcefully. The poverty of the environment and the ignorance of the villagers are already expressed in the description of the plot. Xiaoqi was born in such an environment. She has no time travel and no system. Her natural strength and speed show her potential in martial arts. This has become her golden finger to lead her family out of poverty and eliminate ignorance. To make a simple framework exciting, you need to fill it with constant contradictions. The author has done a good job in this regard. Judging from the first 20 chapters, Xiaoqi's mother caused a lot of trouble as a troublemaker, and her family and villagers were also in constant trouble. The development of each contradiction is very good and can attract readers to read on. 2. The first three chapters. If we look at the golden three-chapter rule, in fact, in addition to showing the poor background of the village and the ignorance of the villagers, the first three chapters are mainly supported by writing. I have read many farming articles, and they all like to start from the older generation. This is probably a characteristic of farming articles. I just feel that the introduction is a little slow. The previous articles are like reading a local novel, which is not refreshing and not like an online novel. Fortunately, the author's writing style is really good, and it's easy to read. If the writing style couldn't keep up, it would be easy for people to abandon the article in the first few chapters. 3. Does it look like a novel without CP? I read Chapter 20 when the female protagonist is still young, and the text skipped a bit, but I didn't seem to notice the male protagonist. Nowadays, non-CP female characters are very popular, and it will be very good to grasp the heroine setting well.

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I suspect that Da Da is the boss who has changed his vest! 🤫 This kind of Tian's writing is easy and the language is vivid and real. It is like recreating the simple life of a family with a long life and a short life in a vivid way. This requires a certain amount of writing power and experience. 😃 I like farming articles very much, and I will continue to follow them. Thank you very much＾0＾~! Learn from you! 😡

I have only read the first few chapters, so I can make a bold review. This article is probably the legendary farming article? I rarely watched it before. But you can also see the author's great writing style. The language style is simple 🌹 without fancy rhetoric, and it fits the theme of farming literature very well without any sense of violation. And it also conforms to the characteristics of online writing. This part of farming articles still has a certain readership! Secondly, the characterization is very down-to-earth. The names, Liu Dahe, Liu Dashu, Liu Dayu, etc., Are simple, easy to remember, and consistent with the identity of the characters. The character's psychology is accurately grasped, and he feels sorry for the dead chicken, rumors, taboos, etc. It is very close to life. The plot concept is also very detailed and layered. For example, if two chickens die, you immediately go to see the chicken coop. They all die, but you don't go to see the chicken coop. This is the power of writing. The level and literary talent can best be seen in the small details. Because I haven't read much and the main plot is too big, I can't comment. That's all. 👍

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The real characters are portrayed one by one, and the story is vividly presented in front of you. The surrender to fate makes the story more authentic. You can be angry about it, but also sad about its misfortune. After all, this is an article without cheats. The writing is clear and sophisticated, and the author is a veteran who has changed his waistcoat. Identification completed.

When I read it for the second time, I suddenly felt that the tone of speaking was similar to that of Xiao Funu 😁

Later I felt that the pace was too fast, a bit patchwork, too jumpy!

Finished reading! No, I haven't finished reading it. It's my first time reading a farming article. I didn't expect it to be so good. I hit the top! Sorry, I can't comment anymore, I'll give it a try!

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