Find the Clear Fish

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and fluent, the story setting is okay, the writing style is delicate and clear, and the overall impression is good. It can be eaten and raised. It has been harvested. The scene in the first chapter where the master's first shadow leaves without saying goodbye is a bit abrupt. Personally, I feel that if it were directly stated that the first shadow had left, and then suddenly got some kind of clue, then the search for the person might be smoother. But this is a personal feeling. I don't read many female videos, so the author can probably ignore them. Also, the introduction is not very attractive, so I recommend changing it to another one, but the title of the book is quite beautiful. Come on!

The last three sentences of "First Meeting and Goodbye" are a bit surprising

I don't know why the pace feels a bit slow, or is this a slow-paced book? Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, if you have nothing to do, you can come and read my book. I hope you can give me some opinions after reading it in the comment section. Let's work together (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have voted for recommendation and will read this book tonight. Good luck.

Such a good article, how can I be stingy in my recommendation vote? I voted decisively, come on! Take it!

Come on (✪▽✪) It's great, the writing is very good, the heroine is also smart, and the plot is good

At the beginning of the month, I will vote for you again 😏😏😏

Is it because my grades are not good and I have no motivation to continue writing?

I started voting for this book on 3.21. It was fate that we met. I wish this book will be a big hit🔥

Come on, collect it and keep writing.

Great efforts to keep going 😁

Finished the book? I don't know how you feel now? I was wondering if you would still write books?

Emmm, because I have been a bookworm for many years, I read Golden Chapter 3 and felt that the story was well conceived and readable, but the specific fighting process and expressions and language were too omitted, which felt empty. Some suggestions were written directly in the chapter reviews. If you don't dislike me for catching bugs, I can continue reading, but I should mainly recommend modifications... Support new works! Come on, author!

Nice writing! Collect it first, keep it up! Come on! Take good care of you! Welcome to visit us again!

The author's writing style and plot are very good. Received. Come on.

I originally wanted to reply to the previous message. It was very well written and I have already saved it for investment! ! I accidentally clicked delete on my left hand and deleted the comment in the post! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

The book circle is bubbling, come on, come on, come on! 😆

Manual support🤓

My first book was also written in a hurry, and I couldn't even sign a contract😁😁😁 I'm writing my second book now, but I don't feel very good at it. I was quite confused a few days ago. But after seeing your closing remarks, I feel that we are similar, so I will also learn from you and finish writing this first signing book (at least I have to get perfect attendance) Come on 😡😡😡 The vest is broken again