Secretly in Love with Zhuge Dali

Reading this book feels like it is narrating the past, and the sense of immersion is not strong. There are some personal issues and some process issues. It feels like falling in love in the first chapter and getting married in the second chapter. The process is not too careful. Good luck, author!

What are you thinking about? Dali is my wife 🤓😜

Zhang Wei, Zhang Yida, Zhang Dapao, snake

This is the product of the author's own pleasure. Just don't read it as a serious novel.

The plot is like a joke, with not enough foreshadowing.

Are you thinking about eating shit? Is Dali yours? She is my wife

Can humans and ghosts write novels? Zhuge Dali, my wife! You go away!

Which brother has yellow urine, please help me wake up the gang of people upstairs. There will be a lot of thanks afterwards.

I can't understand what I saw 😵

Overall, it doesn't look like it's for others to see, it's like narrating your own dream, and the sense of immersion is super poor! There are not many details, the process is jumpy. The writing is too general, that is, it has no meaning and does not give people a sweet feeling.

Hey, don't argue, let me be fair. This is my wife, she looks down on you

You can go after the shredded meat. Dali belongs to Zhang Wei.

It feels like writing a composition. So uncomfortable.

The first person couldn't stand it, so he withdrew.

The results are mine! Draw your sword! ━╋▇▇▇▇▇▇▇▇◤

Well written, keep up the good work and try to get to the end. 😁😁😁

Holy shit! Is there another Dali book here? ! Four books already

The sense of third-person substitution is too bad, right? It feels like you are telling a story to someone else, and there is no sense of involvement at all, but the outline is not bad!

Well written, good luck to the author

Xiao Zhan and Yang Zi get married! Xiao Zhan is the best! Yang Zi is the most beautiful!

Let me see how many people watched Brother Gou's live broadcast today?

Don't shake the lotus! You will be punished!

Dali is mine!

You all say that you like Dali, but the characters you write are not Dali's characters. Do you really like him? This book is the only book I have read in more than ten years that has dissuaded me the most.