My Substitute, the Master of the Flow

I finally found a JOJO that I like, so cheers!

What is a little strange is that such a powerful organization with a substitute messenger does not appear in the original text, and it only shrinks in Blackwater Street. You know, Diablo rules the entire Italian underground world. Was it destroyed before the text started? But yes, after all, the protagonist knows the plot, and it would be boring if we didn't do something else. After all, the entire fourth part is written around "identity" and "who he is." Otherwise, after Jotaro arrives, he can just ask him to go find Kira.

Write jojo and your protagonist has a girly face and a fresh face. It feels too inconsistent.

Personally, I don't have an intuitive sense of the strength of Yiyiyijie, and can only deal with ordinary people. You don't need to wait and see every second as soon as you get started, at least you can drive with Ronin 55. Since the author set Zed to be a murderous stand-in, it is not impossible to take the path of an anti-hero. Don't always follow the protagonist.        ，， I hope the author can write some tricks for the avatar, so that he doesn't only know a few skills and throwing darts. How about a flat A? What about Zed's fighting skills? What about assassination? Platinum and Chariot are not the same. Can Euler go up and fight Dior? I don't understand what's the use of absorbing life force so many times? The male protagonist himself is still so plain. Besides, isn't it okay for the substitutes to be strong in this season? I personally feel that the stand-in is the one that best reflects the character of the messenger, such as the arrogance of Sekai and Dio, the passion of Platinum and Jotaro, and the bond between Bobo and Chariot. I was speechless when I saw the male protagonist and Zed. It's not worth it for Jie. What is the character of the male protagonist? This is so different from Jie.

It's very well written. Come on, I hope my abilities won't be too abnormal in the future. Just these templates are enough for now. You can also strengthen the basics a little bit. It can't be too powerful, otherwise it will collapse. It's quite good-looking. I've invested in it.

Humble author, begging online😭

I hope that the original characters will appear more. Even if the original plot is expanded, it is best to let them show up from time to time.

How should I put it, neither wits nor courage were seen. There is no shining point of humanity. The female police officer made me laugh when she saw the blood and thought of BL. When a policeman sees blood, his mind doesn't think about incidents, accidents, or rescue. Want to BL? ? ? Are brain kernels as big as walnuts? The world of JOJO can have personality, but don't be brainless.

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The range of a hero like Zed is C? The author can give some data

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It's too Chinese. What kind of brother is it like? Big brother. I'm really speechless. You are writing a novel with a Japanese background. You should replace it with senior, big brother or something like that. It's too uncomfortable to read. I hope the author can change it, otherwise it will always feel weird. All in all, good luck to the author, this book is okay.

It is best to have the protagonist have a normal physique before the overgrowth reaches 30 years old, and then evolve greatly after reaching 30 years old and have the physique of the Qiao family. Otherwise, this damn thing is too weak.

When I saw Chapter 51, the author's writing was a bit strange. The protagonist is a time traveler. There is nothing wrong with making jokes. But if you are about to die and still make jokes, then you should wait for death And the explanation was stopped at the beginning. This is the way of expression in anime. Time really slows down for you. The same goes for the female police officer. She explained without knowing anything, NB

There are two questions I hope the author can explain: 1. Where did the gangster organization get its arrows? 2. There are actually very few substitute messengers. There is about one in ten million people. What is the situation when there are four in your little gangster organization?

A bit interesting😁