Nine Yins Battle of Swordsman

Shan Tianming: Have you seen our disciples? Master Xuanhuai: I saw it, but they won't come back. Master Juechen: Have they all withdrawn from the world? Xiao Tianfang: No, they have grown up. Ziyang: They have a new arena! Xiao Bieqing: A new world? Huangfu Yao: Do ​​you need our help? Tang Tianxing: We are not needed anymore. Xichi: Why? Huang Guxiao: Because, the new arena is called life.

Crow and [Land of the Living Dead] I am also here to give you a book review This article is really well written. I was interested from the beginning. The title is very attractive, a neat eight-character title. I think the words and sentences are well thought out, the word processing of each paragraph is very good, and the writing is very good. Each paragraph is particularly good when taken out alone. [My humble opinion below] But I read it carefully and researched it There are a few small questions 1. Is the classification of the book intentional or...? Personally, I don't think it is popular in the game category. If it relies more on martial arts, there may be more passers-by who click in randomly. [I know it's a game, but in this category I like to read articles about online games and equipment.] 2 The article is really good, very martial arts I read a lot of martial arts-style works today In my humble opinion, it's okay for you to put funny elements into something like swordsmanship br>But if you add modern elements to make it funny, such as maximizing the sarcasm, otherwise you will have more, otherwise I suddenly felt a little jumpy when I watched it... It was like two heroes were discussing swords in the mountains, and when it was like swords and swordsmanship, suddenly a bilibili barrage with comment 666 popped up in the air. Since the protagonist is related to modern times, I can accept these words. If the other narrators want to add modern vocabulary, I think either more or no more. 3 Plot Good wording is not as good as the story A big boss taught me, a passerby passed by your book📖I read the first few chapters and probably gave up. My works are a bit slow to catch on, so I added a preface. But I didn't expect you to be too slow... The golden three-chapter principle, the first three chapters will cause trouble! It might be better to write more exaggeratedly. Sometimes quiet articles are really powerful in the later stage, but if you want to catch readers early There is no harm in exaggerating to catch people's interest (funny, mysterious... Just like the loser who quits the marriage, this is actually just to make people read it first.) Finally Really good article, I have collected it, I will learn more in the future, and sometimes quality and quantity cannot be balanced, but I still hope to see your work faster. Let's work hard together! 😃 Crow ginseng!

Nine Yin Hundred Thousand Diehards Came to Report

Already read, not bad 😄 By the way, I would like to ask for more details, and I can get enough 500 to be the operating officer.

The writing is quite good, but the progress is a little slow 😭 Please improve it by the way.

The protagonist finally becomes enlightened🙂

Let me tell you a little story: "The Little Girl Selling Nuclear Bombs" There was a little girl who was alone on the street and kept shouting: "Selling nuclear bombs, selling nuclear bombs, who wants to buy a nuclear bomb?" But no one paid attention to her. The little girl felt frozen all over. She missed her grandma, so she lit a nuclear bomb. Then, everyone in the city saw her grandma. From "An Tusheng's Fairy Tales"

Two phoenixes sing in the sound of green Xiao, occupying the blessings in the world and heaven

Come on, author🙂Oli gives

The moonlight is still the moonlight of young people, and the same color of Kyushu is Li Bai's frost. When I was young, I loved chasing dreams, but when I woke up from the dream, it was over. Come on.

The peach blossom shadow falls and the magic sword flies, the blue sea tide rises and the jade flute is pressed

The top of Huashan Mountain An old Taoist, a Zen master Ziyang: At such an old age, the dragon claw hand has not fallen yet. Xuanhuai: Aren't you the same? You have practiced Tai Chi all your life. Ziyang: I see you are in good spirits and in good health. Xuan Huai: It's okay, oops, your apprentice is here. Ziyang: Oh, aren't you busy? You came to see me once some time ago, but then you left because you had something to do. Where is your apprentice? Xuanhuai: You should be busy, I haven't been here for several months. Ziyang: It's better to be busy. Xuanhuai: It's better to be busy...

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Fire Pliers Liu Ming😴

Jiuyin Zhenjing 2020 88 server, I am in Zuijianghu 😃, do you have any friends with you?

Twelve years have passed, as if it was just yesterday.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's all on the shelves, but it's still so deserted 😅 Should the author post the photos to gain popularity? 😏

😌 Come on, Although I don't know why the Heart Buddha is 99 times into martial arts Support support

When entering the pit, Cai Mozijian was drinking and singing, playing orange, and then ran to play single brush Bliss 😌😌

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