Ten Subjects of Self-Cultivation

[Book Review] The writing is solid, the characters are rich, and the ideas are novel [Advantages] The writing is excellent, the settings are complete, the plot and characters are accurately portrayed, and the plot is refreshing [Disadvantages] The paragraphs should be concise, readers are impatient, and avoid concentrating on large paragraphs. There are not enough contradictions and conflicts. The first three chapters can highlight the main line, cheating and contradictions, and the characterization will gradually emerge later. [Evaluation] B [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you like it, please add more.

The beginning is good, the system is quite grand 😊 It looks good, keep going

Dare you ask Big Eyeball to arrange it? Save and fatten first

Thank you to every book lover who passed by! Thank you to every book friend who stayed! I want to record it, I'm afraid I'll forget it later!

Come here and give me a kick. I hope you won't be sucked to death.

This book is a must-have. I've almost gathered the spoilers from the starting point. Warrior, if I can get over 1 million words without losing my mind, I'll come back and read it.

Thank you friends who like this book😁

I'm asking for cover for you Lily. . . This courage. I invested. . .

A friend named Miaomang voted for me. Which Taoist friend is he?

Not happy, no recommendation in the third week 😐

I haven't come back to test the water and recommend it. It's the fourth week and I'm about to reach 200,000 words!

The cover given by the system is too ugly, but there are many of the same ones. If I change the cover, I should be able to pass it in two days!

Pipi shrimp is here, come on, friend Pipi! !

I came from Huangcao to see ￣ ￣)σI came to see this warrior after recommending myself twice cough cough 😰

Let me take a look at this warrior who eats arsenic like a birthday boy, and I will burn incense in advance.

I heard that the author dared to ask poisonous milk for recommendations. I respect you for being a man! ! Collected

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Since your book is only the first one and it doesn't reach 500,000 words, I'll save it first and read it after a month. If you don't stop updating it, I'll be fooled.

Novel theme! It's up to you

Brother, the cultivation system in this book is really good.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, please update quickly. My first order is ready.

The little fresh meat is actually a mermaid...